| "A Marriage of Convenience for Whom?" Reviews/Comments [ 126 ] |
| Pages (9): [ « ‹ 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 › » ] |
Reviewed By: Pim On: April 19, 2007 04:33 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hi! Inuyasha and Kagome certainly do have themselves in a bind, don't they? I wonder how it's going to play out when everyone finally realizes what's going on. I can't wait! I just wanted to tell you I love the story and good luck with your presentation. =] Sincerely, A.J.
|
Reviewed By: Autumn_the_Reviewer [MediaMiner Member] On: April 18, 2007 18:08 EDT
Comment/Review:
Alright, this was a fantastic chapter, only a few spelling mistakes. I was glad to read about miroku and sango's end date, that was kind of funny lol. And im waiting for Sango to finally realize who Inuyasha really is, grrrrr lol. And dont worry about speaking in public, its nerve wracking for sure, but if you prepare a speech and read from it slowly and concisely, its not that bad. I used to hate HATE reading stuff in public, but when im behind a mic, and i read what i've written, its not that bad. JUST dont rush it. You have a habit of stumbling over your words when you rush it. *grins* let us know how it goes in your next chapter, or in an email. Good luck in your finals as well!
|
Reviewed By: j jarviss [MediaMiner Member] On: April 18, 2007 17:36 EDT
Comment/Review:
this chapter was really good. the argument was really well written between kagome and kikyou. The wedding! ahhh! can't wait!
|
Reviewed By: Rose of Sharon [MediaMiner Member] On: April 18, 2007 16:16 EDT
Comment/Review:
Last Chapter: Erm, this is completely off subject, but are you Chinese? Taiwanese? Okay, back on track... This chapter was really good! I mean, all your chapters are, and... But I really like what happened in this one. Yeah....
|
Reviewed By: Sassa [MediaMiner Member] On: April 18, 2007 13:11 EDT
Comment/Review:
"Kikyos husband is probably doing something stupid with a power tool..." Heh, now I see why she married him! He's able to enjoy himself with the small things and in that, he also offers her a reason to nag a little, getting some of that frustration out. Kagome sure took Kikyos outlashing well, and, despite my Inu/Kag fixation, it was justified from Kikyos point of view. I am really looking forward for the wedding ceremony. I wonder how Kagome will feel when the priests ask "Do you Kikyo..." and so on, knowing the real Kikyo wouldn't and she herself is in love with someone else - or so she believes. Or perhaps Inuyasha will change "Kikyo" to "Kagome" when he repeats the worda? Or will all hell break loose before that, because Kagome can't explain the article? Update every Friday you say... I love fridays now! OH! About holding a speach...being nervous is good, as long as you keep your back straight and remember that while YOU speak, the stage is YOURS! That will make you sound confident whatever you say. Or at leats it works for me. Good luck!
|
Reviewed By: Seiteki_Tenshi [MediaMiner Member] On: April 18, 2007 13:05 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
awww poor kagome! poor inuyasha! i cant wait for the honeymoon, that is going to be so funny, i can just imagine...and when is inu gonna show kagome his hanyou side...and is sango ever, EVER gonna put 2 and 2 together...
|
Reviewed By: cougiecat1 On: April 14, 2007 19:25 EDT
Comment/Review:
yeah! you started updataing again! :) I've been having a lot of fun reading your story. I'll read your other story too, but I'd be very happy if you kept up this one. Especially since you seem to have found your muse again.
|
Reviewed By: moussajinx [MediaMiner Member] On: April 09, 2007 13:22 EDT
Comment/Review:
Well hells, I can't believe I haven't reviewed for you yet. For that I'm, sorry. You've taken the well-overused ploy of 'movie-star' Inuyasha and given it a refreshing twist. Your style of writing is enjoyable and your plot is moving along nicely, especially with the latest bit of having Sango actually talking with Miroku, and showing a bit more what's going on with Kikyo. I hope you concentrate on this story for the next while. (to be honest, I haven't looked at your other works, but I will change that now and check them out.) You're doing a good job on this one and hope to see more of it soon. Cheers!:D
|
Reviewed By: Kat_Castle On: April 08, 2007 13:36 EDT
Comment/Review:
i love this story so much!!! it is so addicting to read!! cant wait for u to update!! *you rock like a mineral*
|
Reviewed By: lil_one [MediaMiner Member] On: April 07, 2007 19:47 EDT
Comment/Review:
GREAT!! i loved it!! i really hope you update soon!! well if you can.. college is crazy, i understand
|
Reviewed By: KaIvAl On: April 07, 2007 13:42 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Hi there! well i'm amazed!! you write soo well i've been a great fan of your story!! Everything is perfect and i have to say this work is really one of the best i have read. You mixed a lot of things in the story making it wonderfull, i don't know what more to say because you are wrong when you say your story is a ''piece of shit'' well i considered a exhalarating, wonderfull and hilarious. Please continue it soon you left me in suspence!!! great fan of yours, val
|
Reviewed By: Inuyasha Baby_bre [MediaMiner Member] On: April 06, 2007 23:14 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wonderful story...
|
Reviewed By: Kikyo_must_die2 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 06, 2007 21:12 EDT
Comment/Review:
NO! You HAVE to keep updating! Update until you're blue in the face. I love this story, it's funny, witty and fun to read. If you don't update I can garantee there will be some very angry and agressive reviewers. Which reminds me, I should update my story before my reviewers tell me to hurry up again. Oh, and what's with the name Mr. Kikyo? I'm sure the guy deserves better than that, even if he did get married to Kikyo. Anyway, keep updating I want to see how this ends.
|
Title: meh
Reviewed By: Autumn_the_Reviewer [MediaMiner Member] On: April 06, 2007 20:16 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Update update update... update until its over!!! update until you cant update anymore! Dont stop the presses for this story! Its wonderful and witty and i love the switching and confusion. I cant wait for Kagome and Inuyashas' wedding. I cant wait for the honey moon and to see what happens. Will they finally figure out who is who, before the wedding, or after or durning the honeymoon. Will there be any hentai in this story? Will Inuyasha finally figure out that there are two of the higurashis due to the photographer taking kik's and her husbands' picture? And did you have to name him Mr. Kikyou? lol thats such a terrible name. :) You could have called him Hojou or Onigumo or something. *grins* But yes, please oh please keep updating this story. If not for your fans, then for yourself. *tries to bribe you with pocky* Keep up the good work and i look forward to the next chapter as soon as you get it out!!! :)
|
Reviewed By: Seiteki_Tenshi [MediaMiner Member] On: April 06, 2007 19:44 EDT
Comment/Review:
YAY! this story is so amazing. Im so glad that i found it again. i love that little bit with kouga! that was too awesome. great update!
|
| Pages (9): [ « ‹ 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 › » ] |
