| "To Summon a Mate" Reviews/Comments [ 264 ] |
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Reviewed By: Kawa-Misuterii [MediaMiner Member] On: December 20, 2008 12:54 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
excellent chapter, although I have a feeling the next one will reveal a lot more! Somehow I knew Kagome would just come out and ask him one of these days, but seriously, broken ribs? yikes, poor Kagome. And I am SO beyond pleased you're not a Kikyou sympathizer (sp?) Obviously she's being portrayed as the cocky, self-absorbed evil man-stealing lady here, right? Okay, so yeah she had him first, but....eh screw her, Kags rulz! And what is the deal with Sango and Miroku? I can't wait to find out how she turned into a demon, and why she got sick if they're supposedly immune. Does that mean she's turning back into a human? Who knows...other than you, of corse ^-^ Awsome chapter, I hope InuYasha gets his priorities in order. Does he honestly think Kagome is gonna have his kids if he's beusy with that skank? Till next time!
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Reviewed By: Moonlit Showers [MediaMiner Member] On: December 20, 2008 01:46 EST
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aww Inuyasha is feeling guilty. And Kikyo is waiting for a call. Which kinda of amuses me. I wonder how Inuyasha will react to that last question? And oh no, I hope Sango doesn't die! Miroku still needs to fix things. I can't wait to read the next chapter. Keep up the awesome work! ^_^
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Title: that was by far the BEST FANFICTION I HAVE READ IN A LONG LONG TIME
Reviewed By: Shell6_is_awsome [MediaMiner Member] On: December 20, 2008 00:11 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
honestly now things are just awful when i first joined with my first acount there were great storys as far as the demon eye could see but now i have a hard time finding anything even worth glaqncing at bravo u have got me hooked i fell in luv with your charectors and their personalitys and you have inuyasha cute down almost perfectly..*cough* except *cough* for his miroku antics *cough cough coughity cough* and i ADORE how you made kikyio a total bitch X3 SQWEEEE (im a fangirl nothing i can do about it i have to go sqwee or ill explode X3) MWAHAHAHAHA UPDATE SOON OR ILL SEND EVIL FLYING MONKEYS WITH KIKIOS FACE TO ATTACK U MWAHAHAHAHA lols UPDAT SOON PLEASE
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Reviewed By: InvictusCanisDeus [MediaMiner Member] On: December 19, 2008 20:06 EST
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Well first of all I hope you and a very happy Birthday! Heh just when I thought I had most of the pieces to this puzzle you go and make 500 pieces into 1000 pieces. I guess I should have expected this little twist. Anywho absolutely loved this chapter and unique turn of events. I am completely enthralled and probably couldn't stop reading this story if I tried, which I wouldn't. Oh also (this is totally off subject by the way) I am male but I personally am against a harem(western depictation not really sure what to think of the Turkish usage) not that is has any relevancy in this story but saw something about it in a review earlier and thought I should add my two cents even if it makes me look kinda like a jackass. Well until next time I shall be waiting patiently.
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Reviewed By: ThisIsMeSmiling [MediaMiner Member] On: December 19, 2008 18:07 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh God...I feel Kagome's pain with her. I remember what it was like when I broke my ribs and it was NOT fun. As for InuYasha and Kikyou...*glares at them* I don't know what to think, lol. Kikyou seemed to hint that the two of them were plotting something but also thinks mighty highly of herself (InuYasha? Being lucky to breathe her air??) And then..a certain hanyou needs to get his priorities in check and fix his conflicted feelings over Kagome. Oh my God...she asked who Kikyou was! I wonder if InuYasha will lie, again. And poor Sango! What'd Miroku do...and why does she want InuYasha (and possibly Kagome? Though I think she meant Kikyou) dead. Hmmmmm...you've left me with so many questions! Gah! Until next post ;) ~Amber
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Reviewed By: Lunabell [MediaMiner Member] On: December 19, 2008 15:43 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oww Broken ribs are nasty. So he wants filthy nasty kikyo over kagome?! I hope kagome can win him over before they mate. Besides kikyo can't have children with him.
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Reviewed By: thesims1231 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 19, 2008 15:38 EST
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OMG!!! how the hell did Kagome know about Kikyo??? XD What will Inuyasha say to THAT!!! And what the hell was Kikyo talking about? And *damn* that bitch has a nasty attitude!!! And what about what the hell was Inuyasha thinking??? how does it relate to what Kikyo was saying??? And will Sango be okay??? Wait... Yea, she'll be fine. I just know it! XD You can't kill her off that easily! XD Overall, I LOVED IT!!! XD
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Reviewed By: Midnightsilver [MediaMiner Member] On: December 19, 2008 14:16 EST
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oo this is getting exciting. Happy Birthday as well!
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Reviewed By: psyco_chick32 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 19, 2008 13:03 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Haaaaappppy Birthday! *cringes* Ow, shit, broken ribs are a PAIN in the ASS (well, side). Muwahahaha I KNEW it with Dr. Saito. Ooooh DAMN talk about a cliffhanger... you can't take a break NOW OF ALL TIMES OMG WHAT! *panics* Oh, just something I noticed - it's kind of difficult to read the story without spacing between the paragraphs. I noticed the other chapters are fine, it's just this latest one that's formatted funny-like. So much angst with Sango and Miroku, poor things!! InuYasha BETTER not hurt Kagome or there'll be hell to pay (and he'll be hurting, too, darn it!) She's a lot smarter than he expected, isn't she? Anyway, keep up the fantastic work :)
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: December 19, 2008 12:53 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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great update... glad that kagome is fine and getting better... seems that inuyasha still isn't being honest with kagome about some things... lots of mysteries... so inuyasha will still go to kikyo - feel bad for kagome... what will miroku do with sango?... what's next... update when you can... please and thank you...
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Reviewed By: Ichigohime [MediaMiner Member] On: December 19, 2008 12:45 EST
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Wait a minute.. did I miss something?! When did he say Kikyo out loud or in any other form Kagome could hear him? AH! As always good chapter! And Happy Birthday! WAIT YOU HAVE TO UPDATE NEXT FRIDAY! I don't know what I would do if i didn't get an update then! Well I suppose its your choice.. but only if absolutely necessary, MMKAY?
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Reviewed By: InvictusCanisDeus [MediaMiner Member] On: December 16, 2008 15:55 EST
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Quite the devious one aren't you, your writing style is amazing I love your use of foreshadowing it intrigues me. Although it has lead me to figure out, or at least deduce what to expect in future chapters, but don't worry I won't voice any of my suspicions aloud I will just wait and see what your brilliant but notoriously deviant brain has in store for us next. Until next time....
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Reviewed By: adeaneri [MediaMiner Member] On: December 14, 2008 23:03 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i really enjoyed reading this fic, cannot wait to read more. please update soon. do you have a mailing list?
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Reviewed By: GoldenDust [MediaMiner Member] On: December 13, 2008 02:28 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I LOVE this fic SO much! I loved Kagura's attitude in the handbook! And it's such a great plot! Keep up the great work! I'm hooked!
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Reviewed By: Bxny On: December 13, 2008 01:16 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a damn good story! Post it in moreplaces! I am in love enthralled! Can't get enough it hurt to realize it was over I will be in agonizing pain until this is complete. Great work! It's refereshing and new.no same old same old! If I couldgive u a 59 on originality I would! I'll be waiting anxiously
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