| "To Summon a Mate" Reviews/Comments [ 264 ] |
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Reviewed By: inurinsama15 On: November 14, 2008 08:42 EST
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Awesome chapter! Inuyasha's a FREAK! I was like wow when I was reading the things he said to her. Kagome's resistant, but for how long? The alumnium (even if I can't spell it) foil part was a riot! Now she's let him out of her room. I wonder if Inuyasha's going to be on his best behavior...not. I can't wait to see Souta's reaction to Inuyasha. And see how Sango plays into this and what "her" meant. Did Sango and Inuyasha have a thing? I can't wait for the next chapter!!!
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Reviewed By: inu-babe [MediaMiner Member] On: November 14, 2008 07:19 EST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love the plan of the story so far and also inuyasha and kagome in this story are awsome. put another chappie up as soon as u an plz!!!!
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Reviewed By: Moonlit Showers [MediaMiner Member] On: November 14, 2008 01:31 EST
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oooh I'm so glad you updated! And it sounds like Sango is a demon...and her? is the Kagome? or is Kikyo making an appearance? hmmmm And I love the interactions between Inuyasha and Kagome. And Kagome's defenses. hahaha Keep up the awesome work! ^_^
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Reviewed By: Ichigohime [MediaMiner Member] On: November 14, 2008 01:12 EST
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That second to the last paragraph was epic. Lol. I'm thinking I wouldn't have ran. I'd have wanted to know. XD This is cruel and unusual punishment, leaving me with MORE questions after reading this chapter. You can't leave me hanging like this! It's so very utterly WRONG on so many levels. How can your conscious handle such a HEAVE AND LARGE burden? You must update soon! Please? I also have to say, this chapter was better than that last and I'm so anxious for more! I think this goes without saying, but you are hilarious! That thing with the aluminumn foil... that was rich! I suppose I can wait until next chapter for Miroku... sigh. I get answers then right? *nods* Yes, please.
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Reviewed By: FoxyLove [MediaMiner Member] On: November 13, 2008 22:02 EST
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Woa i am luving this story sooo much already and hey if Kagome doesnt want a mental link like that to Inuyasha I'll gladly take it! lol wel i luv the chappy but how did Kagomes dad die and wat is this whole deal with Inuyasha what is he exactly? And wat does Miroku know about it?? Update soon please! Foxy Signing Off!
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Reviewed By: SailorEarth [MediaMiner Member] On: November 11, 2008 22:58 EST
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oh please keep on updating...this is a pretty good story.
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Reviewed By: cheshirecat3081 On: November 10, 2008 21:06 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love it, keep it up. I feel you have a great story concept. hope you update soon.
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Reviewed By: Ichigohime [MediaMiner Member] On: November 09, 2008 15:57 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love it so far. And I'm curious to read more. And this thing with Miroku... Update soon!
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Reviewed By: mthgirl [MediaMiner Member] On: November 08, 2008 22:54 EST
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keep going!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! pweese!?!?!?!?!?!
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Reviewed By: sexxiigurrll0204 [not signed] On: November 08, 2008 17:08 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i LOVE THIS STORY! you have to update again soon! thanks =]
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Reviewed By: psyco_chick32 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 08, 2008 16:50 EST
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Oooh, I'm very intrigued and glad to hear you'll be writing more! I was concerned you'd leave us hanging with only the first chapter as a one shot! I'm anxious to find out about Miroku, and why he has a similar mark. This is getting really good - keep up the great work!
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Reviewed By: HentaiSouljaShoujo On: November 08, 2008 11:50 EST
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HIIIIIIIIIIIIII!!!!!!!!!!!! I Just read your story and I think it's sexy and funny but two chapters ain't enough write more and thank you for not giving up on this site well I'm going to see if I can read your other stories... If you have any. BYEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: kaira2828 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 08, 2008 02:50 EST
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OMG so cool please update!!!
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Reviewed By: buwan anghel On: November 07, 2008 22:57 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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what? what? you can't leave me hanging like this ::sniff:: i was expecting to read more with an ending like that. i loved the interaction between inuyasha and kagome, how she can feel what he does to himself. having them being able to talk with their minds is a nice touch to the story. i knew inuyasha would be a demon or hanyou in this story but now i'm interested in seeing what kind of demon he is, aside from dog, to make miroku react like that. look forward to see what happens when kagome "confronts" inuyasha again.
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Reviewed By: inuy21 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 07, 2008 19:39 EST
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YAY! Am so in love in this story and can't wait for the next update ^^ hehe. I especially love the way the Inuyasha is acting ~_^ and how Kagome keeps fighting him off.
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