| "To Summon a Mate" Reviews/Comments [ 264 ] |
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Reviewed By: Lunabell [MediaMiner Member] On: September 07, 2010 02:33 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh my god....(shocked into silence)
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Reviewed By: Lunabell [MediaMiner Member] On: August 30, 2010 04:21 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh no...this does not bode well for Kagome....
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Reviewed By: SplendentGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: August 30, 2010 01:00 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
All right! Looks like a bunch of things are going to be explained next chapter, and I loved Inuyasha surprising himself by blurting out that he wouldn't betray Kagome. Good for him! Wonder what gray means? Well, at least it's not black! Now I wonder what the spider means. But I know I'll find out soon enough. Keep up the good work!
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: August 30, 2010 00:37 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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great update... seems that the meeting has gotten quite intense... so they know what kagome's mark means... good that kagura was scolding inuyasha about kagome's mark... what does inuyasha plan on doing about kikyo... looks like kagura showed them her mark... what are sesshoumaru and kagura planning... what's next... update when you can... please and thank you!
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Reviewed By: inu_luver_2004 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 29, 2010 23:11 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
DUN DUN DDUUUUUUNNNNNNN!!!!!
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Reviewed By: inu_luver_2004 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 17, 2010 16:56 EDT
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Hey!!! Whats wrong with voices?!? (sshhhh they're gonna hear us...) uuhhh oohhhh... He He loved it.... again!!!
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Reviewed By: LadyWolf [MediaMiner Member] On: August 17, 2010 15:45 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I hope they can clear him and get kikyo too. Nice update.
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Reviewed By: SplendentGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: August 16, 2010 22:22 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yes, let's talk about those voices. I'm sure Inuyasha is eager to learn about whoever's been whispering to Kagome whenever he's lying or feels guilty, and I'm also sure the coloring of marks will get brought up soon. Looks like Inuyasha is realizing where his loyalties should really lie, but then of course we mustn't forget that Kikyou has her back-up plan, whatever that may be. Keep up the good work!
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Reviewed By: babypeenats On: August 16, 2010 07:32 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Im incredibly pleased with the update!! Im infatuated with your lovely style and characterization. This is a fantastic story, one of the very best in my opinion. It just gets more creative every chapter! GREAT JOOBBB!
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: August 16, 2010 06:51 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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great update... seems that sesshoumaru and kagura had quite a conversation... now that they met kagome - their meeting was different... is inuyasha having second thoughts?... how will the trial go... what's next... update when you can... please and thank you!
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Reviewed By: SplendentGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: August 04, 2010 20:45 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yay! Good update, this thing is really starting to come together. No excuses for not finishing now, you said so yourself! :-)Keep up the good work!
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: August 04, 2010 14:48 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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great update... seems that inuyasha is working on kagome's feelings... will be an interesting meeting between kagome with sesshoumaru & kagura... hope kagome does ask kagura about the book and her mark... what does it mean?... looks like kikyo has a plan... will inuyasha follow it or not?... what's next... update when you can... please and thank you!
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Reviewed By: LadyWolf [MediaMiner Member] On: August 04, 2010 14:39 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ahhhh pleasa let Inuyasha end up finding out what's going on!!! Now they're at Sess's place He has to see the mark. Kikyo is high off something, she on drugs I'm how more crazy can you get. I hope she gets what's coming to her good.
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Reviewed By: GLily On: August 01, 2010 22:03 EDT
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Wow, it's been a long time since the last update! I ended up re-reading the story, and while I agree with a couple of reviewers comments about grammar, I still enjoyed your writing. Keep up the good work. Hopefully the next update will come sooner? *looks hopeful*
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Reviewed By: LadyWolf [MediaMiner Member] On: July 29, 2010 19:54 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
actual real roses were what you use. Okay Inu is having a slow moment I hope he finds out what's really going soon before he dose something that hurt them both. And what happen at the end!!! Ahhh I can't to see what's going. Your welcome.
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