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| "To Summon a Mate" Reviews/Comments [ 264 ] | | Pages (18): [ « ‹ 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 11 12 13 14 15 16 17 18 › » ] | Reviewed By: Kawa-Misuterii [MediaMiner Member] On: November 28, 2008 08:45 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh no, that first section almost made me cry! I thought he said there was no one else for both of them, he wouldn't cheat on her, would he? Don't tell me! I can't wait to find out the whole deal. And this sentence confused me, but then I figured it out. 'I was around 120, 125 before I was enslaved, plus the 500 years around 620 years I guess' See, I thought you were saying he was 120,125 years old, not 120 OR 125. I'm just stupid. Excellent chapter, I like how they seem to be falling for eachother, if it wasn't for that first section that's making me doubt him, now. :( Update soon!!!!
| Reviewed By: Midnightsilver [MediaMiner Member] On: November 28, 2008 05:52 EST
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this is one of the most exciting fics I've read recently update soon
| Reviewed By: elementalobsession09 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 28, 2008 03:43 EST
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You tease.
| Reviewed By: thesims1231 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 28, 2008 01:47 EST
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OMDG I HATE YOU AND CLIFFIES!!!!!!!!!!! JK, I love you for writing such an amazing story(!), but I DISPISE CLIFFHANGERS!!! I must know what that book says!!! And what about Kikyo!?!?!?!?! And how does Inuyasha know Sango?!?!?!?!?!? And why does Kagome's mark have Midoriko's sign?????? It's like watching lost, more questions, but only a few answers!!!!!!!!!!! O.o
| Reviewed By: psyco_chick32 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 28, 2008 00:51 EST
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oh NO! *rages* GAH! A thousand questions... like... NO ANSWERS! GAAAH! *pouts* That's cruel, you know that, right? And if InuYasha has a "thing" with Kikyou, and does the whole "Kagome's just my mate totally not a problem" thing too much... I may not be held responsible for my actions. Or the loss of his fuzzy ears *grumble*. Ooooooh Questions arise about Sango!! "Turn" demon? Miroku making her disappear was pretty badass - i'm assuming that's his version of the kazaana? All in all - fantastic!! Can't wait for more! (literally... I'm angsting here!)
| Reviewed By: Koolkat191 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 24, 2008 22:56 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ooooh... *shiver* Kikyo's sending me creepy, devious, and dare I say, bitchy vibe right now. But, oh will it give me so much pleasure to see InuYasha tell her to back off...you know, if he ends up doing that. A nice bitch-slap from Kagome would be cool too... I really liked the chapter. :) We found out that Miroku has a demon mate and Sango was given some inhuman hints a chapter or two ago, so I'm curious as to how that works out. And we learned InuYasha's not just a horny sex machine! YAY! But really, that's nice to know. The dark look is getting me a little anxious though. Hopefully InuYasha doesn't have a dasterdly plan in store... Perhaps the dark look after Kagome turned him away again and InuYasha's rush to make Kagome his official mate are connected in some way? Anyway, I'm sure my questions will be answered in time so I'll be a good girl and wait for the chapters containing those answers. Looking forward to the next chapter! ;D
| Reviewed By: FoxyLove [MediaMiner Member] On: November 24, 2008 18:52 EST
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OoOoOo watz kikyo doing in this story??? I hope shes eitha gettin beat up by Kagome or rejected by Inuyasha.....hopefully both! But what was with that evil look Inuyasha gave Kagome?? Could there be a dark side to our sexii hanyou....? It would make him kinda sexier hehehe (ya i like the bad boys lol). And itz sooo sweet and kawaii how much he cares for her and how affectionate and loving and protective of Kagome he is! I mean it may be in his own unique Inuyasha way but itz still must be really nice to know itz there. Well i loved the chappy as usual and cant wait till the next update! Foxy Signing Off!
| Reviewed By: thesims1231 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 23, 2008 02:27 EST
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Wow!!! That was really good!!! Soo, what about Kikyo? XD I hate that EVIL BITCH!!!!!!!!!!!! PLEASE UPDATE!!
| Reviewed By: HollatoYasha [MediaMiner Member] On: November 22, 2008 10:00 EST
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YAY!! AWESOME chapter! =] soo exciting! =D
| Reviewed By: Hentai Strumpet [MediaMiner Member] On: November 21, 2008 16:46 EST
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very good chapter
| Reviewed By: ThisIsMeSmiling [MediaMiner Member] On: November 21, 2008 16:28 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Eh, throwing Kikyou into the story isn't so bad. Its whatever devious plan she has in mind that has me on edge! An aging potion? A 500 year reunion? I'm wondering if the mate she's referring to is InuYasha or Naraku. Or perhaps even someone else, who knows! And speaking of mates...Miroku's mate is a demon. That shakes things up a bit because Sango isn't. Or maybe she is? I'm defenitely eager to see what you have in store! The ending to this chapter was pretty cute, by the way. We get to see Souta who has this endearing obsession with Halloween already taking a liking to InuYasha, Kagome's grandpa being old (maybe I just think this, but angry old people are freakin' cute), and then Kagome wraps it up by watching InuYasha interacting with her family (minus Momma). But I'm curious about that "dark" look he got on his face when she refused him. As always, until next chapter! ~Amber ;)
| Reviewed By: SailorKagome On: November 21, 2008 16:12 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Why,on earth,did Kikyo had to butt in the story? I bet she is after InuYasha.And she is using magic in order to maintain her young form??? What a bitch!!!! I hope InuYasha will stick with Kagome.Can't wait for the next chapter!!
| Reviewed By: Ichigohime [MediaMiner Member] On: November 21, 2008 12:57 EST
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True. So I should be saying... How kind of you to leave me hanging, right? I thank you for showing me the error of my ways. But it still doesn't make it any easier to bear! Finally, some clothes for our nudy Inu. And this Kikyo has my on edge. I AIN'T LIKIN' IT ONE BIT! Awesome chapter, and update soon!
| Reviewed By: psyco_chick32 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 21, 2008 12:40 EST
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Oooh, I am officially intrigued about Kikyo... Awww and seeing InuYasha all concerned and loving is SWEET! I laughed my little butt off to read him explaining math... can you send him to my place when I start going after my Masters? I'm sure they'll make me take SOME math and I hate hate hate it. This is a *fantastic* chapter. I giggled, I groaned, I was drawn in and have SO MANY QUESTIONS OMG! :) Keep up the great work!
| Reviewed By: Kawa-Misuterii [MediaMiner Member] On: November 21, 2008 10:39 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Excellent as usual! I love how InuYasha isn't all about the sex, he cares about her, too! How sweet. Although the evil look he gave her when she said she didn't trust him is giving some serious foreshadowing, I can't wait! And don't worry about how good the lemon is. Honestly, I don't think people care much as long as it's there, ause the story does seem to have that kind of theme ^-^. One question. In the one chapter, he said he was 100,000 something years old, yet in this one you said he was 620. Which one is it? Not that I'm critisizing! He could be born twice for all I care, I was just wondering! Keep up the good work!
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