| "To Summon a Mate" Reviews/Comments [ 264 ] |
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Title: Amazing Halloweenie Fic ;)
Reviewed By: Koolkat191 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 02, 2008 09:51 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW. I absolutely love your story, and like the others, I'm hooked. Heehee, Kagome-chan's so feisty! ;P Oh and is InuYasha in his hanyou or youkai form in this story? Although judging by the way he speaks, I'd guess he's in his traditional hanyou form. I really hope you continue with the next chapter soon! XD
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Reviewed By: buwan anghel On: November 02, 2008 01:47 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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i love the ending to this chapter. you should definately continue writing this story. i'm really interested into seeing how this story "grows". is inuyasha dark and dangerous? i'm thinking that inuyasha isn't really evil though in the story, maybe a lil "horny" lols.
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Reviewed By: kiss4ranma [MediaMiner Member] On: November 02, 2008 01:36 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh wow... Oh lovely... I think I'm hooked; that was a wonderful first chapter. Your sentence stucture and grammer are very well done without seeming overly polite and fake. I can see this is a plot to follow. Excuse me while I look into your other works. kiss4ranma
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Title: C Moon
Reviewed By: Crescent Moon [MediaMiner Member] On: November 02, 2008 01:10 EST
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Awsome! Keep it up. I look forward to reading the next chapter.
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Title: that's it!
Reviewed By: smg1984 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 01, 2008 22:42 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG!! Is that it?? Come on please continue!! This was awesome. I felt as if the story was just starting, we just got introduced to the doctor and what's happening with her mom. Also what was Kagome supposed to see from the trick mirror? Please please continue
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Reviewed By: applejacks [MediaMiner Member] On: November 01, 2008 18:51 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Huh. I'm intrigued. It's a rarity to read anything with a supernatural overtone that's not about vampires or werewolves these days. I especially liked the use of the various Halloween traditions from other cultures thrown in. It's been a while since I've read something that had me hooked from chapter 1, I hope you update soon.
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Reviewed By: inuy21 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 01, 2008 13:53 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
AAHHHH! So good, you can't stop there! Can't wait for the next chap ^^
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Reviewed By: ThisIsMeSmiling [MediaMiner Member] On: November 01, 2008 13:29 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Dayum! Off to a really good start! And I love how you used the day of the dead! Being half mexican, I celebrate it in my home (but not this year =/), so to see it used in fanfiction when I've NEVER seen it before is really cool and very VERY original. Nice =D Deff going on my favorites, too. Update soon! ~Amber
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Reviewed By: Sweet_Adeline [MediaMiner Member] On: November 01, 2008 13:20 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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I really like how you started this, very different. Im pretty souped for the next update. =]
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Title: AWESOMENESS!
Reviewed By: HollatoYasha [MediaMiner Member] On: November 01, 2008 04:38 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love your story!! omg it rocks! I hope you continue it! =D lols I wish a sexy man would come out of my mirror lols jk =] I love it =D Update soon please!!!
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Reviewed By: Moonlit Showers [MediaMiner Member] On: November 01, 2008 03:18 EDT
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ooooh, I really like where you're going with this, love the magic aspect. I wonder what Kagome's family will think about Inuyasha lol. Keep up the awesome work! ^_^
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Reviewed By: MikoPrincess16 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 01, 2008 03:04 EDT
Comment/Review:
very interesting i must say. i can't wait for the update
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Reviewed By: hazel22 On: November 01, 2008 01:12 EDT
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Interesting beginning. Humm, Inuyasha a dark character and let out of the mirror. Does the shrink have anything to do with this and is Inuyasha evil? I will be waiting to find out.
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Reviewed By: Hentai Strumpet [MediaMiner Member] On: October 31, 2008 23:30 EDT
Comment/Review:
interesting start.
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Title: finish it!!!!
Reviewed By: Kawa-Misuterii [MediaMiner Member] On: October 31, 2008 23:07 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
AWSOME!!! finish it finish it finish it finish it!!!!!! PLEASE!!!
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