| "To Summon a Mate" Reviews/Comments [ 264 ] |
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Reviewed By: Moonlit Showers [MediaMiner Member] On: December 05, 2008 02:12 EST
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oooh this information does not bode well for Sango and Miroku..... and I love how you blocked the part about the black mark since Kagome has a black mark (and now I really wanna know what it means lol)...hmmmm what will happen? And what is Kagome's reaction to this information? I can't wait to see what happens next! Keep up the awesome work! ^_^
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Reviewed By: Lunabell [MediaMiner Member] On: December 05, 2008 01:26 EST
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Sorry for the double post but...what about the black color? The demon...manual...guide book thing didn't really say anything about that...o_0
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Reviewed By: Lunabell [MediaMiner Member] On: December 05, 2008 01:21 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
God does have a strange since of humor. Lol! That was an interesting chapter! I'm in love with you're story now! Can't wait for the next chapter. Oh and by the way I'm a christian and it didn't offend me....so don't worry about it.
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Reviewed By: thesims1231 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 05, 2008 00:53 EST
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Haha!!! I was laughing through that whole chapter!!! But I still must know about Kikyo!!! What the hell is she up to??? Crazy bitch... Thanks for *some* answers... I really liked that chapter, BUT WHAT ABOUT THE BLACK COLOR!?!?!?!?!? THAT WILL BE FREAKING BOTHERING ME FOR THE REST OF THE WEEK!
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Reviewed By: psyco_chick32 (not signed in, whoops!) On: December 05, 2008 00:27 EST
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I have decided to take a new way of writing a review - reviewing while reading. OH MY GOD I AM LAUGHING SO HARD, HEARING KAGURA'S VOICE I JUST SNORTED DR. PEPPER UP MY NOSE IT BUUUURNS. No, really, ow. That and my gut, which has now officially busted... Okay, so nobody else can get Kagome pregnant... but InuYasha can sleep around? *grumbles: asshole* *cringes* Aw, I feel bad for Sango, being sucked into the beads... I scared my cat when I *cracked up* at the line "demons have extremely slow/lost/confused sperm." Like, he's now hiding under the desk as I laugh like a demented hyena. Oh please, please, PLEASE have InuYasha be marked by Kagome... seriously, who glares more than she does?! Oh dear, and the black section is smudgy for mood-ring status... that's never good... And you're right. God has a great sense of humor. I mean, really! Look at the platypus! Would somebody with no sense of humor come up with the platypus? No! I appreciate your update and will whine and angst until I read more.
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Reviewed By: InvictusCanisDeus [MediaMiner Member] On: November 30, 2008 15:30 EST
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Ah finally I am able to continue reading this incredibly written story. You have me captivated and enthralled, I can't wait to see what you have planned next you devinant authoress you.
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Reviewed By: Ichigohime [MediaMiner Member] On: November 30, 2008 13:28 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Sorry for my late review.. Turkey day threw me off. XDD Alright. So I understand a little more of this Sango being a demon thing. It's starting to get there. I'm a little worried about that comment Inu made earlier.. "She was only his mate. Nothing more." This can't be good! And when lil miss Kikyou comes in.. its only gonna get worse.. But As always I loved this chapter too. They just keep getting better and better. Update soon! And let the drama unfold!
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Reviewed By: inu_luver_2004 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 29, 2008 01:08 EST
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Yet another super yummy chapter!! I look forward to more... I hope soon!! Your writing entertains me greatly- thank you!
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Reviewed By: ThisIsMeSmiling [MediaMiner Member] On: November 29, 2008 00:41 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Woah! Wait a second! Re-reading this I think I picked up something in that first section of the chapter (sneaky, authoress, you). I hope its not Kikyou that he misses..*cringes*. You know the chapter is especially good when I have to go back and reread it, lol. Till next chapter (don't mind me. I'll just be teetering on the edge of my seat while I wait) ;P ~Amber
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Reviewed By: Haily [MediaMiner Member] On: November 29, 2008 00:01 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this first chapter! I can't wait to read more, keep up the great job on this story, you have a new fan!
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Reviewed By: inuy21 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 28, 2008 20:14 EST
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Sango...a demon...interesting!Haha. And the part with Inuyasha in a dress >< Hilarious. And now am suddenly wondering what is in that book? Update soon!
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Reviewed By: Koolkat191 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 28, 2008 17:41 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OO Sango certainly got rough with poor Kagome... Uh...anyway, heh, I throughly enjoyed this chapter. (You get a 10!) Midoriko's mark on Kagome is strange, considering InuYasha's story on her...but then again, he could have always "curved the truth" or whatever you would call it. I'm curious as to what Kagome will find in that book. Until next time! ;P ~Koolkat191
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Reviewed By: Moonlit Showers [MediaMiner Member] On: November 28, 2008 13:12 EST
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hmmm there are so many things to think about in this chapter. Now I really want to know what it says in that book lol. I really like your writing style, so keep up the awesome work ^_^
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Reviewed By: ThisIsMeSmiling [MediaMiner Member] On: November 28, 2008 12:35 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You are sooooo evil! Lol...after that first section and what Sango said about her being obligated to kill anyone Miroku wanted I'm starting to doubt Inu and Kag's connection! Is he only wildly attracted to her because they're mates (and nothing more)? That has me wondering back to the Kikyou thing for some reason...gah! So mean -__- And yeah *puffs out chest like a superhero* I amaze myself with these brains, too ;) Sango made an appearance! Hmmm...I wonder how she became a demon. And whats in the BOOK! Their first meeting determines everything? I wonder how...and if "the look" had anything to do with that. Anyway, guess it'll have to wait till next chapter. Happy belated Thanksgiving! Hope yours was a good one! ~Amber :D
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Reviewed By: clavira88 On: November 28, 2008 10:45 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oh come on, don't stop now! i wanna know what's in that book too!! sango is a bitch, btw. it's not kagome's fault that midoriko imprisoned her... i wonder though where miroku sent her? anyway, hope you update soon!!!
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