| "Red Digivice Diaries" Reviews/Comments [ 154 ] |
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Reviewed By: Vodka On: April 01, 2003 15:15 EST
Comment/Review:
You turned Daisuke into a sex crazed maniac. That was totally OOC! Miyako wouldn't just spread her legs to just any guy like some slut. And the way their parents took what everyone was doing was totally out of whack. I'd beat the living daylights out of my child if he/she was engaging in any of these activities at the young ages you placed the DigiDestined in. |
Reviewed By: Lord Archive [MediaMiner Member] On: March 31, 2003 23:15 EST
Comment/Review:
oxygene_iv, X-Man's 'Friends' series is available at http://www.digiartistdomain.com which has up to chapter 26.
Vodka, I value characterization above plot. I will not have a character go against their nature just to force a plot line to work. If there is any thing that seems out of character, please tell me where to find it.
Lord Deathsycthe... oops. Meant to double check spelling. I feel really stupid with the manga sitting at my feet. Nuriko's death chapters no less. ^^; |
Reviewed By: Vodka On: March 31, 2003 13:09 EST
Comment/Review:
Lord Archive, I took note that a particular reviews known as Digi-Advisor happens to be an infamous reviewer. He doesn't seem to like this fic much. At first I thought he/she was just another fic basher. But after reading this fic, I'd rather hold my peace unlike he/she did. I Despise all Takari fics in general, but that's just me. However, I will give you one evaluation: next time when you want to write a fic, KEEP the cast in character. PLEASE!! |
Reviewed By: oxygene_iv [MediaMiner Member] On: March 31, 2003 12:40 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
truly, the best digimon fic ever made, keep on it, and by the way LORD ARCHIVE could you tell me were can i find the X-MAN fic "friends" i didnt finished reading it or did he stopped writing it? |
Reviewed By: Chrismking208 On: March 22, 2003 23:27 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
one of the best i have ever read second only to Psycho G'sDigimon 02:Endgame but since they are not realy in the same class
i had to give credit where credit is due
keep up the good work |
Reviewed By: spade On: March 21, 2003 17:18 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
the overall story was exelent but you need to finish it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! more chapters!!!! |
Reviewed By: Lord Deathscythe On: March 21, 2003 08:45 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It's good, like most of your fics...but...
There are a few spelling errors like 'Noriko' and 'Hontohori'...
I suggest you do a little research before putting in a reference to another series.
Overall, good...but where was the whip cream? |
Reviewed By: Shade_The_Wanderer [MediaMiner Member] On: March 15, 2003 19:35 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a great series. I love all your other work as well. |
Reviewed By: Shade_The_Wanderer [MediaMiner Member] On: March 15, 2003 19:35 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a great series. I love all your other work as well. |
Reviewed By: Shade_The_Wanderer [MediaMiner Member] On: March 15, 2003 19:35 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a great series. I love all your other work as well. |
Reviewed By: Lord Archive [MediaMiner Member] On: March 14, 2003 14:31 EST
Comment/Review:
'Digi Advisor' you still have yet to answer one question: If you don't like the series, why are you STILL reading it?
Pointless sex and plotless? Get a dictionary. You obviously don't know what those words mean. |
Reviewed By: Digi Advisor On: March 14, 2003 14:21 EST
Comment/Review:
A troll I may be, but at least I know fanfic writers who can write decent fanfics WORTH reading rather than writing pointless sex or porn fics with no plot!! Get a new hobby!! |
Reviewed By: Kharon Alpua On: March 12, 2003 19:10 EST
Comment/Review:
DooM_GazE: The British spellings of words are no less valid than the normal American ones.
Lord Archive:
Great series, I wish updates on the Domain were half as fast as here. I still have to read the last few chapters, but I love all of your work, and this is no exception.
I only wish my Future Lives stories were half as engaging or compelling as this series. Keep up the excellent work. |
Reviewed By: Foxxyman22 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 12, 2003 03:50 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
It's a very good story, nice plot and very in-character.
I think the main problem is the spelling/grammer. There a few ackward sentences in this, as well as some glaring spelling/grammer mistakes.
I would suggest sending it to a prereader that actually checks for mistakes, not just comes back with "This Rocks!!" or such.
Overall, very nice. |
Reviewed By: Final_Xero [MediaMiner Member] On: March 08, 2003 18:47 EST
Comment/Review:
Innnteresting... You're doing great still, don't let anyone tell you otherwise. Things may have slowed a bit, but you've kept enough momentum to let us all know you're still trying. I bet you planned for that very situation from the beginning.
Well, gotta' get working on my own projects... |
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