| "Red Digivice Diaries" Reviews/Comments [ 154 ] |
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Title: Chapter 7
Reviewed By: Nesha [MediaMiner Member] On: March 25, 2007 19:34 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Damn, and I though getting my ex's social security number was bad...
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Reviewed By: Nesha [MediaMiner Member] On: March 25, 2007 19:18 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You know, I'll probably laugh in a man's face if he had a 5" dick. But since Davis is only 12, I GUESS that's normal...not that I would know because I never seen a 12-year-old's penis before...And I don't want to, either. (shudders)
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Title: Chapter 5
Reviewed By: Nesha [MediaMiner Member] On: March 25, 2007 18:08 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I always thought Cody to be a lame character, and a complete waste to the 02 team, but this chapter (as funny as it was) made me see him in a different light. Don't get it twisted, I STILL think he's lame and all, but this chpater proved extremely insightful to his character.
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Title: Chapter 3
Reviewed By: Nesha [MediaMiner Member] On: March 25, 2007 17:50 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Matt is my LEAST fave character (weird for a girl, huh?) from the series, and yet you actually made me feel SORRY for him in this chapter! But I guess everything's going to be okay.
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Title: Chapter 2
Reviewed By: Nesha [MediaMiner Member] On: March 22, 2007 18:01 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh...Tai feels the same way I do when it comes to homosexuality. (NOT THAT I'M A HOMOPHOBIC!!! I HAVE A SISTER WHO'S GAY AND PLENTY OF GAY MALE FRIENDS!!! I JUST DON'T...GET IT...I guess...)
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Reviewed By: Nesha [MediaMiner Member] On: March 22, 2007 17:17 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You know what, what I'm going to tell you is probably going to upset you... I'm probably the ONLY person on the Net who's read this story and HASN'T reviewed!!! But that changes starting today!!! Aw...poor Davis...(hugs Davis) Screw TK, HE should've gotten his ASS KICKED BY TAI!!! But Davis DID add in a couple of blows to blondie, so I suppose all's fair. And about Kari and TK...whoo!!! Condoms are your FRIEND not the ENEMY!!!
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Reviewed By: SSjDiizoid On: February 16, 2007 01:56 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I first read your work on the Digiartists Domain years ago. While re-reading your work there I came across the idea that perhaps you had other work published elsewhere, and after a search found this to be one such place. I have greatly enjoyed your work with the Red Digivice Diaries, and would like to know if you're still working on chapters or not? Anyway, Goodluck with your present work and heres to another Red Digivice Diaries update! *sips some 'Dew*
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Title: Whoa! What a difference a year makes.
Reviewed By: SailorCallie [MediaMiner Member] On: February 28, 2006 17:02 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It was nearly a year since Lord Archive published a chapter in the "Red Digivice Diaries", but the patience paid off for this fan. I'm looking forward to the next chapter of this fan-fic due to it's originality and enjoyment. Bravo, Lord Archive! Bravo!
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Reviewed By: TerraChrono [MediaMiner Member] On: September 14, 2005 21:40 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Comment/Review:
I've been following this fanfic for a decent stretch of time, at least two years now, and I have to say that this is an exceptional piece of work. However, the continuous verb confusion all throughout the fic leaves something to be desired. Your accurate portayal of the characters and your in-depth knowledge of actual Japan sends this straight to the top in terms of realism. Whether this is because you live or have lived in Japan is unknown to me; I won't presume to ask. The only major problem I see consistently occurring is the verb confusion (using 'shot' instead of 'shoot' seems to be the biggest problem), but this can be easily be remedied by consulting a reference book. While reading over this from the very beginning, I found the first chapters, although still exceptional, to be lackluster compared to the later ones, which is to be expected, with the amount of writing experience you probably gained over the years. Rather than trying to turn out new chapters for this, you could try to go back and improve upon those that you have already written, which would probably be easier, and would level out the entire experience for the reader. Overall, I have complete confidence that you will continue to be an exceptional writer, and that these minor descrepencies won't be any challenge to your continued prosperity. After all, they hasn't stopped you yet.
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Title: Finish
Reviewed By: Bill Everyman On: August 29, 2005 22:15 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Could you please finish considering the last chapter was posted december 2004 I want to read about hikari's child being born if that is not to much to ask
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Reviewed By: Hentai_Chick [MediaMiner Member] On: June 22, 2005 19:42 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is hot
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Reviewed By: Hentai_Chick [MediaMiner Member] On: June 22, 2005 19:39 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was hot.
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Title: Red Digivice diaries
Reviewed By: Crimson Warrior On: June 07, 2005 19:39 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Go on please don;t leave us hanging. Oh Also read my review for D-Arc Diaries Pleaseeeeeeeeee!
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Reviewed By: Miss_Washu [MediaMiner Member] On: May 13, 2005 14:42 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
its really good! don't like all the words you used to express sum parts, but that is made up by the rest of the story! it is soooooo cool! you have to write the next chapter! Your teasng us! you've given us the summary of the next chapter and now i soooooooooo want to know who Daisuke gets pregnant. i have a couple of Gusses but i'm not sure if either of them are right...obviously. YEAH for all the couples! Taichi+Sora-Takeru+Hikari- Jyou+mimi- Daisuke+Miyako+Various others...:P OH! and don't forget all the rest... So far only 2 pregnant chosen...
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Title: And on it goes!
Reviewed By: forechunkukee [MediaMiner Member] On: April 02, 2005 01:08 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have just finished reading all available chapters of this story (at least that ive found on this site), and I am still just as impressed and entertained as I was after reading the first Chapter. What you display here is an incredible example of how authors should be writing. NOt only through the story itself, but also through the smaller, subtle things as well, i.e cultural references, timelines, character development. I was most impressed at how much work you put into this, notably the timeline sections. The ability to write multiple stories dealing with the same timelines, and doing it smoothly, is, quite frankly, amazing. Again, it is wonderful to see such an intellectual person (at least thats the impression that i get) be able to write good lemons, and not a bunch of mindless sex stories. Good job and God bless! Keep it up, im almost sure you have a legion of fans waiting fot this story to continue!
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