| "Red Digivice Diaries" Reviews/Comments [ 154 ] |
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Title: still precious
Reviewed By: kattx [MediaMiner Member] On: June 07, 2004 17:25 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I no longer have to go to the webpage of your to read this story, I can do it here. geez this stuff is great, don't even worry about those sappy flamers. and who cares if this is a porn project, it's a porn project that kicks. It's so great to see this and hope you send the next chap soon, 'cause this is still precious.
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Reviewed By: An Idiot On: April 17, 2004 21:53 EDT
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I find that the worst thing that anyone can go through is to outlive their own child. Also, on ch. 18, why didn't you have Sora use an aphrodisiac to get Taichi in the mood? That would work, since all it really does is increase the sexual desire of a person and doesn't affect their judgement, unless they lose all sense of judgement when they get horny. Though, the part with Sorcerymon telling V-mon about Susan's death, will that be in your london diaries? If so I'll read it as soon as either I find it or after it comes out. Whichever happens first. Also, although I find that some of the lemon scenes you have are quite pointless, there are most of them that do seem to have a point. And I agree that if someone finds this entire fic to be worthless, then why are they continuing to read it? I really agree with your commenting on that bit. Though, I think that by now if someone gets to the later chapters, they've probably seen the warning so many times that if they found any of it disturbing, that they would have left already. So, I wouldn't think that you really need it as it probably isn't necessary. So, please update this soon and when you can.
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Title: I'm getting angry
Reviewed By: PJX123 On: February 01, 2004 10:42 EST
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The last time you updated this series was in July... Have you given up on it or what? When do you expect to have Casanova out?
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Reviewed By: A London guy On: January 30, 2004 09:51 EST
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This is a very well written fic and it ties in neatly with your other ones. However, that bit about people believing old wives tales in Britain is kinda horseshit (no offence). It's just cos some of the girls are slappers ^^.
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Title: Who cares
Reviewed By: Ophanimon On: January 07, 2004 22:31 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think that you are a good Fan. You do what you do best. I am glad that you write your fics. Who cares what everyone else thinks. You are good. Do what you like to do!
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Reviewed By: Sukooru On: October 23, 2003 23:13 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
What can I say. I mean without staing the obvious. Well um.. its great! Guess I couldn't help from stating the obvious. I just hope that you keep pumping these things out like Daisuke pumps out semen. Opps sorry bad analogy. But still a great and wonderfully done fic keep them coming for the worlds enjoymeant and my *cough* hentai fantasies *cough*. Thank and I bow to your magnificence
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Reviewed By: The DJ Jester (aka. Steve Jester) On: September 27, 2003 08:45 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
As R80 and countless others have said before. This is the best Digimon fanfiction period. g through nc-17. and of all genres. May you have luck in your furture adventures with this work. Steve Jester
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Reviewed By: M335h73r On: September 03, 2003 15:04 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
if i were you... i'd go for cassanova. this shit is getting good. makes me impatient! |
Reviewed By: ex-shuffle On: August 23, 2003 15:30 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
lord archive is in my mind, the best fic writer ever. iv read all his lemons that i could find and i subgest u do the same. |
Reviewed By: HaXx [MediaMiner Member] On: August 01, 2003 05:25 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
okay lord Arhcive your debate with Dgig advisor has gon well noticed. and that is over. the thing i like about you is that you don't make pathetic excuse about your work. it ooozes perosnalitlry and you are not afriad to stand by it. instead of changing a plot line o please the digi dickhead, you stick to your guns. BRAVO! A WRITER WHO IS GOOD AND HAS GUTS! I SALUTE YOU! and the sotry is brillo! |
Reviewed By: m335h73r On: July 30, 2003 14:14 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
after 3 days of reading im finally done with what you have finished so far... the only thing i can say right now is MAKE MORE!!! i love the way you write and wish i could write half as good as you! gonna go read more! finish plz |
Reviewed By: Izumi Ryu [MediaMiner Member] On: July 29, 2003 16:48 EDT
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Trust me, Gray. You're not the one that has...I got lucky on inferences up until now. (Shaun and Archive should know...) |
Reviewed By: Gray On: July 29, 2003 01:30 EDT
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Ah, and finally my question gets answered. And you haven't confused me about why Teresa can't use them. I didn't really care about why she couldn't use them, I was just trying to make sure you weren't operating on a spur of the moment answer that was wrong, or a misunderstanding about that part of medicine.
And is it just me, or have I hit on more plot points by accident and random guesses than most other people have by actively trying? |
Reviewed By: Lord Archive [MediaMiner Member] On: July 28, 2003 00:54 EDT
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Ah, Gray, I've been trying to tip toe around a future plot point. I know not all medicines that are perscriptions are on that basis becuase they don't always work or result in serious side-effects, that the medicine in question could be addictive. Sorry, if my comment confused you as to why Teresa can't use them, but I can't explain anything in more detail because these are plot points I don't want revealed yet.
You asked why the characters haven't been using them, I tried to answer with out giving anything away. |
Reviewed By: Gray On: July 28, 2003 00:26 EDT
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*smacks forehead.* *sighs*
Ok, let me try this one more time.
You said "Not all girls can, which is why they're a perscription"
I asked for a source, and you replied and said "are a prescribed medicine" as though "not all people can use it" would be the only reason a medicine would require a prescription. As I know that's not the case, I'm checking to make sure you realize that. |
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