| "A new beginning, a new hope" Reviews/Comments [ 103 ] |
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Reviewed By: inu wifey [MediaMiner Member] On: January 27, 2006 15:19 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i know this seems kind of weird but did you seriously hear that a second series of inuyasha is coming out. i kno im kind of late but i just wanted to ask and tell you that your story so far is awesome, mind you i ony read the first chapter!
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Reviewed By: James and Jamie ((Lucient)) On: January 26, 2006 07:33 CST
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You made baby cry. I really loved it, it was awesome! You should join myspace.com. Kiki and Courtney and Martha and Wendy and I have this little group thing going, and it'd only be right if you were there. The fic was wonderful, Martha. I was sad to see it end. But you're so intuitive, I love your work. Email me, and we'll talk about your next fic. ;)
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Reviewed By: animegirl007(not logged in) On: January 26, 2006 05:08 CST
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You got to do a epilogue!!!!! This just seems so unfinished.....come on !!!!Don't have me be!!!!! But, it was a great story, and I really did like it.....Keep the Rin and Sesshomaru stories coming......
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Reviewed By: Luc, NSI On: January 23, 2006 08:36 CST
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Yes, I magically appeared in the fiction! lol. I can't wait to see how this ends, you're killing me here. And I'm sorry I haven't replied to your email... I will eventually. :D and baby says Hi, and you made her tear up and I laughed. Muhahaha. Women...
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Reviewed By: DPM On: January 22, 2006 20:51 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
What twists and turns you give us, my dear. Fabulous. A dream sequence within a dream sequence. WOW !!! "Hope springs eternal". That last sentence did it for me. LOL.... Who's watching her chasing after this shadowy apparition ? It seems like S/R are trying to reach out to each other once again across time and space. I don't doubt Sess's resolution to hold on fast to her despite his odds. ARRGGHHGGHHG....this suspense is killing me. Can you put us out of our misery soon? Be it good or bad.
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Reviewed By: animegirl007(not logged in) On: January 22, 2006 14:38 CST
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Ooooooo!!!! What is she dreaming??? I can't wait until you do the finished chapter up.....MORE PLEASE!!!!!
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Title: A Dreamer's World
Reviewed By: SweetyPieRin (not logged on) On: January 22, 2006 13:56 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
...need......to see......more! I can't wait til the next update! ^-^ My compliments again! ^ _ ^ ~*~SweetyPieRin~*~
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Reviewed By: leilachan* nSi On: January 22, 2006 10:27 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
that was so creative! so, she woke up from a dream inside of her dream? that is something that can get weird. i think i've done that before and it WAS weird. @.@ i'm hopeful that a new update is coming soon. does this mean the last chap will be loooong. woo hoo. make it as long as you want. the longer the better. ^_^ funny how you used the manga/anime in the "dream?". ha. you know, i've never had a dream with inu gang in it. oh well.
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Reviewed By: Luc, NSI On: January 22, 2006 02:50 CST
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Wow, I was really confused in the begining. I am glad I caught on. heh. Wow, what a weird and interesting chapter! The fiction sucked me in. The end of this work in progress segment was abrupt, but it did leave a smile on my face. Wonderful.
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Title: The Winds of Vengeance (part 3)
Reviewed By: SweetyPieRin (not logged on) On: January 21, 2006 23:08 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*sobs uncontrolably* I was actually tearing when I read the end to this chapter. It was so sad...but you wrote it so beautifully! If Rin ever DID die on Sesshomaru...I can imagine that he'd act the way you portrayed him. I need to see what happens in the last chapter! Please update as soon as you can! ^ _ ^ ~*~SweetyPieRin~*~
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Reviewed By: Lucient. NSI On: January 20, 2006 01:37 CST
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Sheezus, what a sad, sad, sad way to write this. You can't let her die. That would suck! :( I can't believe you're dedicating the next chapter to me. I'm overwhelmed! :hugs: Ok, enough sounding like a bitch. heh. I love the fic, and I'm going to hate to see it end. Any plans on making another fiction any time soon? You know, between playing piano? *snickers*
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Title: plot hole?
Reviewed By: taiyoukaibox On: January 20, 2006 00:34 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i cried after i read your last chapter i agree with DPM on the fact that they have been through so much to just axe the 2 right there. hole number one which would be pointed out if you end it here with Rin dying...am i mistaken rin made a wish on the shikon jewel to live as long as sesshy's life span? surely she cannot die. ***He said he loves me as I am. That was probably the sweetest statement that she had ever heard. In less than a second, she made a decision. "Shikon-no-tama, please grant me the gift to stay by him as any faithful mate would, to breathe as he breathes. And on the day he ceases, it shall also be my last."**** ...also sesshy has tensiega which could bring her back from the dead. i dunno but to go through so much, Sessh changed himself to love her for who she is...i could go on but as much as you want to kill her off such as every sesshy/rin fic does....sure shes mortal but didnt her wish on the jewel solve that whole thing of her mortality? sorry ive been a lover of this fic from your first chapter and this last chapter makes me think your hiding something for the last chapter and leaving us on a cliff hanger like you've done before .... or at least i'm hoping you are..i will be most disspointed if you end it like this, but you are the witter you are entitled to your story and opinion...and you write and express what you want...i wont be disappointed with your writting but just with the outcome of the stories ending...your writting itself is wonderful. i just find if you kill her off you contridict your previous chapters with her mortality being extended along with the fluffster... and i agree with DPM this world as it is..is filled with unhappy endings...let us have hope if not for ourselves of a bright future that these two(rin/sessh) can be intitled to happiness together. they have been through so much and sacrificed so much for each other it will seriously be a shame to end it so sadly...it would be a relationship short lived... you are my first ever review...i cared enough about this story to place some input...i'm not being critical i love the story but i dont see how with your previous chapters how you can end it that way due to her life being extended along with the fluff man...as he breathes she breathes...correct? ok ok i'm going in circles b/c i'm still stuck hard by the last chapters end jan,18's submission. :(
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Reviewed By: DPM On: January 18, 2006 22:15 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
NNOOOOOO !!!!!! NNNOOOOOOO !!! NNOOOOO!! She can't die. They've fought so hard to be together. Surely, that tenacity alone is worth to not part them so heinously. You have got to bring the miracle back. Use Inutaisho's help. What can he do to revive his daughter-in-law ? Don't let him be a side plot to be cast aside so carelessly. Believe me, this world is miserable enough in its harsh reality that we don't want to wallow in negativity through our fanfic either. PLLLLEAASEEE :-( Okay, how about we strike a deal. The ending can be a sad one if you write an alternate one(hint hint...happy) Yeah...it's a win-win for you [if you want to harp on being morose] and me and a whole host of other readers who, I am sure, share my sentiment (LOL)!!!! Anywho, it takes a great writer to make her reader really engrossed in and identify with her characters. (I could even be disgusted with you so great is my chagrin but I won't). Instead, I'll say I am glad you have been gracious to share your talent to us "lesser" folks. Keep up that skill !!!
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Title: The Winds of Vengeance (part 3)
Reviewed By: angelfire777 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 18, 2006 12:37 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I had tears in my eyes. *sniff,sniff* This was a great chapter by you. The description, spelling, and passionate writing are just AWESOME! You should dedicate the last chapter to yourself also, simply because you are good at what you do. And that is true and original fanfiction at its best! Take care of you. Your fan, Christal
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Reviewed By: leila-chan NSI On: January 18, 2006 12:07 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is awful. i was almost in tears at the end of the chap. she can't die. i know that life isn't always perfect and things can't end like we want all the time, but, but, this is fiction. waaah. i am so sad. i love your work still. even if she does die. tho, i might need more than a moment of silence. please update soon so i can have my closure. i need to know the ending. p.s. you really did do a great job with this chapter. i loved it.
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