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Title: The Winds of Vengeance (part 2)
Reviewed By: angelfire777(NSI) On: January 15, 2006 21:33 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
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Both you and Lucient did a great job with this chapter! The attempted rape of Rin was intense writing at its best and I didn't think that there ever could be anyone more evil than Naraku. You've got my attention! I am really looking forward to the next chapter. Thank you! Christal
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Reviewed By: SweetyPieRin (not logged on) On: January 14, 2006 15:15 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Another amazing chapter! I feel sorry for Rin though. The illusion with Sesshomaru was a nice touch! It definitely fooled me! I love this fanfic! I can't wait to see what happens next! Please update as soon as you can! ^ _ ^ ~*~SweetyPieRin~*~
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Title: HAHAHAHAHAHAAA
Reviewed By: Lucient, NSI On: January 11, 2006 22:32 CST
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I got to read the chapter before anyone else! Nya nya nya nya... ok, I've broken free of psycosis, thanks. This chapter was great Gloria. The whole fic is awesome. I feel blessed to have been allowed to work with you. I still say you're a much better author than I. You're too modest. And sorry about the tour, but you'll be here to UD! I can't wait to see what happens next!!! :D
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Reviewed By: leila-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: January 10, 2006 13:41 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
omg, i had no idea that an attempted rape of rin and total destuction of sess was what you had in mind for your dark chap. you did a great job making me tense the whole time. damn, how evil is this new guy!? how did he get her to his domain? i liked the usage of the bracelet to calm the pup. nice. also, keeping kagura alive is such a suprise. i can't stand her in this fic. you made her jealousy something almost tangible. i'm even close to feeling bad for her. but not quite. to Luc: you did an excellent job on the evil ookami king and his new obsession with rin. i am glad that he has atleast enough pride to not take her when he is disguised as sess. and the disgust that she feels for him is shared by myself. uhhh. i can't imagine! you outdid yourself. beautiful writing you two! i can tell this fic will just get better and better. yay!
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Reviewed By: DPM On: January 09, 2006 21:57 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ugh...I am glad that consummation didn't happen between Rin and that weirdo and that he had some sort of "ethical/honor" code left in him at the last moments. It would have been too much guilt/condemnation on Sess/Rin (him for failing to protect her and her for not being so discerning, ya di da di da da..) to bear and may taint their relationship. That pairing has gone through so much turbulence already and it's a shame to continually heap havoc on them.
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Reviewed By: DPM On: January 01, 2006 23:29 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG. Does this allow for 10+++++ rating ??? I've just read chapters 21 - 42 in the last several hours. (For some reasons, I could not retrieve your fic for the last several months; I thought it was my stupid computer..probably was operator error, no doubt). So now you can't feel too bad knowing that someone else is as bad at technology as you are..;-) I am enthralled by this story. You've plumbed the hitherto undiscovered and unknown intensity of Sess so perfectly. (yeah.. I am also a die-hard fan of S/R. This relationship offers so much more depth and layers than I/K could ever be). In "humanizing" Sess, you made him a more lovable character and allows us to be even more so sympathetic to him and his plight in fighting to save his love. If anything, he seems to have increased respect from the people surrounding him because he could identify with and relate to the normal emotions humankind experiences. I love their "first argument". It is very realistically portrayed. (I've been in those dissensions myself and typically over some stupid, mundane things). From a creative standpoint, this story bears no further words. FLOW FLOW FLOW is fantastic !!! (by the way...Love Demon of my Heart as well !!!)
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Title: WOW
Reviewed By: mermaid232 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 29, 2005 23:43 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
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WOW and I mean WOW. I read all 42 chapters in one sitting and i wish that there was more to read. I'm hooked! Wonderful job evil bunny, wonderful job!
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Title: The Winds of Vengeance (part 1)
Reviewed By: angelfire777 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 29, 2005 17:10 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow! This was an Awesome update! I really loved the dream in which she sees her father-in-law and the writing there is so beautiful. I really can't wait for the next update and I will definitely email you for the uncensored version of the story. Thanks again for taking the time out of your busy life to write to your fans. Take care of you and have a Happy New Year!
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Reviewed By: Lucient [MediaMiner Member] On: December 29, 2005 14:56 CST
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I felt awful for the tsunami victims. I remember donating money to the cause every time I saw a change bin. I saw this kid on the news catching fish. He makes about .50 a day for his family to live on. I want to know where the hell all of my damned money went if this 10 year old child has nothing?! I wish there were some way I could send my money to his parents, directly to the people. Too many asshats delving into money for the poor. Pisses me off. ...............................on a lighter note, I loved the fic, as usual. You're incredibly descriptive. And what a surprise! I knew for sure it was Naraku's ruse in her dreams. But apparently, it is the inu no tashio saving his grandson and daughter in law from being away from medication.
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Reviewed By: leila-chan (nsi) On: December 29, 2005 12:19 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
so, the fic will be over in just a few short chaps huh. : ( i knew the end was coming, but i'm still sad. i am confused too. is this fic going to end badly? with only a few chaps left, and the hint that you have a toned down version, and original that might break my heart, how can it end well? i don't care because i will make myself read the original version anyway. even if it kills me. i love the dream sequence with rin and inu no taisho. so sweet. for some reason i can't figure out who the villian in the cave is. have you hinted to it, or am i just slow?! ha. i'll be e-mailing you for the "dark" version of the story. i hope i can take it.
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Reviewed By: SweetyPieRin (not logged on) On: December 29, 2005 07:56 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm so glad you updated! This chapter was wonderful! I especially liked when Sesshoumaru's father met Rin! It's kind of funny that you mentioned him in this chapter because I woke up at 5:30 AM this morning to watch the third Inu Yasha movie, FOR THE FIRST TIME NO LESS! I was SHOCKED when I saw how identical Sesshoumaru and his father look! I was so excited! It's like SEEING a caring and loving Sesshoumaru on screen! ^ _ ^ For some reason, I thought that Inu-no-Taisho would look more like Inu Yasha than Sesshoumaru...or he would look like a combination of the two...but no matter! Sesshoumaru is my favorite anyway! ~ _ ^ Two Sesshoumaru's just makes life better! *winks again and smiles broadly* Anyway...this is another amazing chapter! I can't wait to see what happens next! Please update as soon as you can! Happy New Year! ^ _ ^ ~*~SweetyPieRin~*~
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Reviewed By: SweetyPieRin [MediaMiner Member] On: December 22, 2005 16:43 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW. AMAZING! THIS FIC IS SO BEAUTIFULLY WRITTEN AND IS JUST...A FAVORITE OF MINE! MY KAMI IS THIS AN AWESOME FIC! CAN'T WAIT TO SEE WHAT HAPPENS NEXT! I LOVE THIS FIC! LOVE IT! LOVE IT! LOVE IT! PLEZ UPDATE AS SOON AS YOU CAN! AND HAPPY HOLIDAYS! ^ _ ^
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Reviewed By: leila-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: December 18, 2005 16:19 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i am so happy that there was a way to keep rin and the baby healthy, and alive. weee. that last chap had me worried a bit. you are too good at those cliffies ya know. and i am so not telling my hubby you said that or he'll need a wheelbarrow to carry around his big head!! XDDD
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Reviewed By: James Lucient On: December 17, 2005 12:00 CST
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Kiki and honeybee are one and the same. She's Inugrrrl. heh. We give eachother nicknames. I know, I'm terribly flirtatious, and it's starting to bother Jamie, so I promised to cut back on that. I can't help it, I'm a natural flirt. I thought for sure you had Sessho's nuts in a vice, and there was no way he would be having his wife and his pup. Jamie is so much the same as Rin. I don't understand that view point, but I'm guessing it is a woman's instinct to put all forth for her child. And a man's selfish want for his mate. I'm so lost without her... I don't know what I would do in this situation. Your imagination is so brilliant. :)
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Title: To Have the Cake or Eat It (part 4)
Reviewed By: angelfire777 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 17, 2005 02:14 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hello there: How are ya? Well, I am glad that you do have gum in the fridge. What country is it that bans selling gum by the way? I really liked the implicit lemon in your story, and it looks like the vegetarian diet will help Rin out. Great update and can't wait to see what the evil aura is and what will happen with Rin and Sess's baby. Take care of you.
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