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Title: oooo O.o
Reviewed By: inu_pup [MediaMiner Member] On: February 12, 2006 16:11 CST
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ooooooomg///i just read this chapter again....yeah again///and i noticed i didn't notice something///it was a full moon.....=o she's gonna get....pregnant!///correct?
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Title: O.O
Reviewed By: Shadowgirl435294 On: February 12, 2006 12:44 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Whoa. Now that, is hot! So it was a full moon, huh? Looks like Kyo and Saaya are going to have more siblings! Can't wait for the next chapter!
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Reviewed By: swt_chocolate692 On: February 12, 2006 07:07 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i swear if inuyasha was mine, i'd just tie him up and he'd have to be my sex slave!
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Reviewed By: axel721 On: February 10, 2006 02:33 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
amazing =D possibly my favourite chapter so far! very good, very good ^^ full moon means baby, doesnt it? =P update soon!! i cant wait >=D!
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Title: Hot damn!
Reviewed By: Whiteraven08 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 07, 2006 10:17 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
THat was entirely to funny lol.That's me and my fiancee right there. THAt's to crazy. But it was hot though keep adding.
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Title: XD
Reviewed By: bubblecolours [MediaMiner Member] On: February 06, 2006 19:30 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ahhhh suffocating from the immense fluffiness! inuyasha makes a great father XD i can just picture him carrying their minature doubles around the forest in the middle of a sunny day or something! the lemons are another thing...they're so wonderfully different! the first was so sweet and just made you tingle all over, then there was the teaser! which i felt totally bad for inu-chan. then the last was so...ROAR. LOL if you know what i mean! cannot WAIT for the next chapter!!
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Title: !!!!!!!
Reviewed By: ximaginationx [MediaMiner Member] On: February 06, 2006 18:32 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh yayy!!!!!!! This has been made into more than a one-shot! So wow...you were up until five in the morning writing the last chapter?! Think there's gonna be any late nights again?..soon???? GREAT!! Next chapter! And ohmigosh...is there going to be another little Inuyasha and Kagome running around soon??! Ooooo...I thought Inuyasha would know when the full moon came!
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Reviewed By: living ember On: February 06, 2006 00:08 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OUTSTANDING!!!!!! I'm eagerly awaiting the next installment.
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Reviewed By: TrinityK [MediaMiner Member] On: February 05, 2006 16:17 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow. That was one heck of a chapter, I LOVED it!!! Kagome's grandpa is so funny, I was cracking up. Hates Inu one second then praises him. Talk about humorously fickle. LoL. That was one hot lemon. Jeez... ;-) I loved that too, lol. Great writing, and I can't wait till the next chapter. Your staying up just to give us this amazig chapter is much appreciated. Thank you, lol. ;-) -TrinityK
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Reviewed By: ergo On: February 05, 2006 16:13 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*all hot and bothered* Wow! That was one incredible lemon! I definitely agree with Kagome that Inuyasha needs to go "dominant hanyou" on her more :-) I'm a little surprised that Souta is still finding romance icky though, I mean he has to be at least 15 now right I mean his oldest nephew is like 4 and all. I still think I would like to see the flashback on wedding night...kinda want to see Kaede's take on the couple's love declaration. And, call it an obsession, but I really want to know how the couple manage on Inuyasha's human night without Kagome getting pregnant. I just can't see Inuyasha wanting to stop the incredible sex with his wonderfully sexy mate when the obstacle is something as trivial as the phase of the moon. Hmm. 69? Lots of rubbings, handjobs and oral for both parties? Condoms like I suspected earlier? I dunno. And just to make sure that you don't forget, please please please write more soon! I love this story!!
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Reviewed By: DeronsDemonGurl On: February 05, 2006 15:23 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a awesome story. I hope that you keep writing more. Inu/Kag fucked on a day when the moon was full...what is goin to happen next. Maybe another lil inuyasha. hope you update soon.XD
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Title: inuyashaloverr
Reviewed By: inuyashaloverr [MediaMiner Member] On: February 05, 2006 11:40 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well, that was certaintly interesting, lol. You do know how to make some really good lemon ade there, ya know that? Heh, its a good thing they dont have a frige in their kitchen, now THAT would interesting, hehehe. And lmao, the bit with her Grandfather. His confusion reminded me alot of Totosai. Great chapter. Cant wait to see what else happens.
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Reviewed By: inu_pup [MediaMiner Member] On: February 05, 2006 09:10 CST
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i always imagined inuyasha would be so extremly sexy when he's being all dominant...and man i was right. hehe;; great chapter!
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Title: LOL!! ^----^
Reviewed By: Shadowgirl435294 On: February 01, 2006 18:17 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow! That was hilarious! Keep up the good work and update! I want to see chapter 4!!!!
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Reviewed By: frostyshake(nsi) On: January 31, 2006 21:50 CST
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I loved this as a one-shot and I love it even more as a story! The kids are cute and the love scenes are hot.
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