| "Just A Break" Reviews/Comments [ 156 ] |
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Title: WHYYYYY?
Reviewed By: cwillia [MediaMiner Member] On: June 06, 2006 23:15 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You're such a tease. How could you? Hey just hurry and update pleeeease.
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Title: ACK!!! GOMEN NASAI!!
Reviewed By: Kaname_Inu_fan On: May 29, 2006 10:37 CDT
Comment/Review:
Ack! I'm sorry! I didn't mean to say 'I'm glad Inu-Kun is going to die'! Honest! I meant 'I was glad he wasn't going to die'! Sorry for the inconvienence! I suck at typos! Well, sorry again! Ja ne! ~Kaname~ ^^;
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Title: evil cliffhangers!!
Reviewed By: Kaname_Inu_fan On: May 29, 2006 10:34 CDT
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Ack! Stupid cliffhangers! Just when it was getting good! I'm glad Inu-Kun is going to die. Stupid Leiko is the one who needs to die! Grrr. I loved this chapter! So cute! Inuyasha really has a fatherly side! I practically awwwed my whole way through the story! ^_^ Please update as soon as you can! Onegai! (please). Ja ne! ~Kaname~
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Title: Danny Girl
Reviewed By: badgirl093 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 28, 2006 14:35 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this chapter, I hope that Fluffy (yes, I love him) shows up.(will he?) Anyways keep up the good work and please update soon.
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Title: Beautiful!
Reviewed By: inuyashaloverr [MediaMiner Member] On: May 28, 2006 00:23 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Most excellent chapter. You did a great job creating a really bad guy, or well, bad female. Leiko taking it as far as she could, for now anyways, just couldn't take it far enough. But seeing as Leiko got away, makes me wonder if/when she'll be back. The Konoama. Loved the interaction that went on when Inu was out cold. Excellent description there. But really loved how Inu acted with his pups. All around a great chapter. Can't wait to see what happens next. But update when you can.
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Reviewed By: coykoi On: May 28, 2006 00:18 CDT
Comment/Review:
The kids are too cute! Can't wait to read what Kag has in store for Inuyasha
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Reviewed By: axel721 On: May 27, 2006 06:29 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
things seem to be looking up a bit^^ i hope this doesnt get too angsty ; ; update sooN!
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Reviewed By: animecrazedgirl [MediaMiner Member] On: May 26, 2006 15:11 CDT
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OMG! I loved that chapter! Poor Inu! I feel bad for him! I can't wait for the next chap! Aw! That was so cute! I loved the scenes with Inu and the kids! That was adorable! And it looks like Inu's going to get his 3rd kid! And since she's already pregnant, she can't get pregnant while she is so they can do it on the new moon! Wait until she tells Inu! Yay! Please update soon!
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Reviewed By: underwater963 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 26, 2006 11:48 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i loed this chapter! please update soon!
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Reviewed By: kagome313 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 26, 2006 06:57 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
C'mon!what's with you guys n cliffies!!You have me on the edge of my seat! I loved this chapter.I'm hungry for the next chapter. I kno it's gonna b worth wild.Whateva is in store for inu, he sure as hell gonna be asking for me;not like he does do it already. I hope she tells him she's pregnant soon,I'm so happy for them. And their children are so cute. The son is juss like his father,ne?the only difference is youth. I love this fic with such passion!!! Great job!!
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Title: *screams in joy*
Reviewed By: Kaname_Inu_fan On: May 21, 2006 11:12 CDT
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UWAHH!!! YOU FINALLY UPDATED!!! Wait, what's that mean that Inuyasha can't smell Kagome's scent? Is he dying?!?!? WAHH!!! INU-KUN DON'T DIE!!!!! Please, don't let him die!! Update as soon as you can! I must know if Inuyasha lives!! Ja ne! ~Kaname~
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Reviewed By: chessycat On: May 14, 2006 23:15 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
omg omg omg this story is so amazing i was so excited when i saw that u had updated!!!!!! keep wriitng *chessy*
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Reviewed By: ximaginationx [MediaMiner Member] On: May 14, 2006 19:25 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
NO WAY!!! He's not...going to be...OHMYGOD. Inuyasha isn't going to turn HUMAN is he?! But what about the puppy ears?...what about the puppy ears?! o_O!! The last few chapters have had me on the edge of my seat, and my face was about 2inches from the monitor! UPDATE ASAP OKIE?? nooooo..
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Reviewed By: Braden [MediaMiner Member] On: May 09, 2006 23:09 CDT
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Hurry and update! I can't wait any longer
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Reviewed By: axel721 On: May 09, 2006 01:20 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
aww c'mon you didnt have to make it so angsty ;;
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