| "Just A Break" Reviews/Comments [ 156 ] |
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Reviewed By: crystalstrawberry On: April 10, 2006 12:20 CDT
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But Kagome is pregnant ...so she can't be dead, it all has to be a trick set up by that wannabe homewrecker, I hope Miroku or the real Kagome get to him in time before he goes all demon.
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Reviewed By: kagome313 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 10, 2006 06:34 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW!!! that was awesome! you really really have to update a.s.a.p I know kags pregnant, from the day Inu n her had sex on the full moon, yea she's preggo. I wanna know what that bitch plans are, what's gonna be her next move now she has kags. Is it kags she has, how did she get her? The last part is kinna confusing. If she has her why didn't Inu sense it or how the hell did that bitch get her. I miss sesshy, when is he gonna come in?? these are my questions that i hope will be answer soon by your updation!I Loved it alot!!
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Reviewed By: Crescent_Moon [MediaMiner Member] On: April 10, 2006 04:38 CDT
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Wait!!!! Kagome is DEAD???!!! HOW CAN SHE BE DEAD??!! IS SESSHOUMARU GOING TO COME IN OR SOMETHING??!!UPDATE SOON!!!!!!! I WANT TO KNOW WAT HAPPENS!!
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Reviewed By: living ember On: April 10, 2006 02:01 CDT
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Umm..................what just happened? This is an illusion right, because there is no way Kagome can be dead, come on she's a powerful miko,she would have defended herself....right? Well I hope you are happy now I am going to wonder what happens next until you update, so update soon please?
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Reviewed By: Cricket42(to lazy to sign back in) On: April 10, 2006 00:47 CDT
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First thing, thank you for the review on my story. I hoped you liked it. Second thing, OMFG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Write more or I'll, I'll..... I don't know what I'll do probably something crazy but yeah. WRITE MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!~Cricket42
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Title: love it
Reviewed By: ladytokyo [MediaMiner Member] On: April 05, 2006 09:30 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this story. great sex scenes and poor inu with the cold lake, hey it happens lol. so what is inu going to do about Leiko? will Sesshomaru be making a appears soon to help? plz update! SOON
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Title: let's get this going!!!!
Reviewed By: bubblecolours [MediaMiner Member] On: April 02, 2006 20:32 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
while it's cool that you took time to re-edit your work (which wasn't even necessary by the way!!) ...lets get to the new stuff!! i've been checking on this story forever! HOW long has it been? you had such a good run! i think you updated almost every week for the most part...but now :( i haven't seen anything new for a while!! update PWEASE? *big inu puppy dog eyes*
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Title: : }
Reviewed By: Fairytalechic1 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 31, 2006 06:39 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Excellent! me likey. keep up the great work. can't wait for update.
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Title: Awesome
Reviewed By: inuyashaloverr [MediaMiner Member] On: March 20, 2006 22:27 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great chapter. You can do some amazing things with certain citrus fruits, whew! Love your evil OC as well. Should be interesting as to where you take this. Excellent story. Loved it from the get go. Update when you can.
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Reviewed By: Kikyophobia [MediaMiner Member] On: March 09, 2006 21:02 CST
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It's very good. However, there is something that I just have to point out because I'm a perfectionist. You aren't starting new paragraphs when you should be. Everytime a different character speaks, or does any kind of action you need a new paragraph. I'll give you an example. You said in this last chapter here ""I love you." He whispered quietly. Kagome eyed him warily before answering..." After "quietly", you need a new paragraph because a different character is doing something. Also, after "I love you", you need a comma after "you" and before the quotation mark. I'm sure you already know that because you're talented, but I was just pointing it out. Ok, that's my two cents. It's still a great story!
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Reviewed By: Anime Lady PIMP [MediaMiner Member] On: March 09, 2006 16:53 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That Bitch needs to back off of Inuyasha.
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Reviewed By: kagome313 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 08, 2006 19:54 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I LOVE THIS STORY!!! pwease continue, i wanna kno what's gonna happen next. I completely forgot about this story. I did read the first few chapy, n then it was a long time bfore you update, so i jus forgot. Srry!! But i remember is n loved it even more. I did put you as my fav from the time i started reading this, so I stay tru when i say i love it Great job!......oh yeah, um....UPDATE!!!!
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Reviewed By: axel721 On: March 07, 2006 01:41 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
totally hot in the woods you need to write scenes like that more often in the next chappy < she's gonna do some crazy magic crap and make inu love her isnt she?
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Reviewed By: underwater963 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 06, 2006 17:53 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
aggh! if i were him shed be dead allready! stupid bitch. anyways i loved this chapter please update soon!
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Title: just a break
Reviewed By: tearsss On: March 05, 2006 20:07 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
update update update update update update!!! update update update update update update!!! update update update update update update!!! update update update update update update!!! XD
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