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Reviewed By: sun beam On: May 01, 2006 10:34 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
the 1st time i red the story i really wished that i did not bcoz i feel like im in the edge of a cliff always anticipating the next scene or what will happen to the characters of d story...but i really cant help myself...its like drugs...d story is addictive dis is d 1st tym ive ever written a review cant help myself... i really really love this fanfic... kip it up...hope to read the new chapter very soon...
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Reviewed By: lillyrose On: April 27, 2006 21:56 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh. My. God. Your story is soooooo good and creative. Seriously, I think it's the best story I've read. Please tell me you'll write more. Oh and i wanted to tell you. No. More. Cliffies. Ok? I mean really they just get so annoying! But they are good sometimes. Any way I just wanted to tell you, you are such a great author and I can't wait to read another chapter. And maybe, I hope, another story. I know it will be great. Good luck in all your future writings!!!!! Love, moonangel
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Reviewed By: axel721 On: April 27, 2006 15:13 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
inuyasha isnt going to die is he? ; ; is he? ; ; update soon you eevil thing ; ;
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Title: whoot!
Reviewed By: baka_mai_28(not signed in) On: April 26, 2006 20:45 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I dont do this very often, but this story is sweet! I really do love it! Please update soon, i cant wait to see what happens next...i hope that Kagome puts it into high gear and kicks some bitch ass. ^_^ WHOOT!! I loved it~! XD
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Reviewed By: InuYashaXnoXbaka@hotmail.com On: April 26, 2006 17:04 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
very very good.. i love the lemony goodness.. hehe keep it up^_-
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Reviewed By: Kawaii Bell [MediaMiner Member] On: April 26, 2006 14:15 CDT
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OH my god that chapter was great i have only one thing to say UPDATE SOON PLEASE!! and it would be awsome if your english teacher did that. sigh it would also make my life much easier tho.
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Reviewed By: inux3kagome4ever [MediaMiner Member] On: April 25, 2006 19:32 CDT
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I hope you enjoy making grown people cry ...
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Reviewed By: Cricket42 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 25, 2006 19:12 CDT
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OK i'm sorry for my out burst yesterday. but i was on the edge of my seat. and you just ended it. i was so mad. and now after rereading it i have one thing to say; WHY IN THE SEVEN BOWELS OF HELL WON'T THAT BITCH DIE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!?????????????????????????? AND IF YOU KILL INU YOU ARE A VERY SICK PERSON. and i am really sorry about yesterday's outburst. loves and apologies ~Cricket42
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Reviewed By: demoncatkuroro [MediaMiner Member] On: April 25, 2006 16:58 CDT
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wow, awesome chappie. is inu gonna die? pwease no, i have read enough of that kind of story to know that... it's fucking SAD! oh yeah, great writting skills, keep it up. lemons aside, story's great.
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Reviewed By: animecrazedgirl [MediaMiner Member] On: April 25, 2006 15:26 CDT
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OMG! I feel like laughing and crying at the same time! I just want to laugh because Kagome's okay! And I want to cry because i'm so relieved! That was an awesome chap! You know I knew that wasn't her somehow but I still couldn't help feeling like crying the chap before this one! I loved this chap! Please don't let Inuyasha be dead! We just found out Kagome didn't die! You can't let him die! That would be sooooooo sad! I was just thinking about if he died and Kagome told the kids, Kyo had just seen his dad that morning and it would be like now he's dead! That would be so sad! Please don't make it like that! I wouldn't be able to stand it! Thinking about it makes me want to cry! sniffle. Excuse me for a second. turns around and starts bawling. (Kiotsu, Inu and Kag's son in a story I made up comes into view.) Kiotsu: I'm sorry but she might be like this for a while so she can't write anymore but she just wanted me to tell you that she loves the chap! Oh! She also said Update soon! Okay now! Bye!
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Reviewed By: kb On: April 25, 2006 10:56 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
The suspense is killing me! Your writing flows very nicely though the character of Leiko...well, she's just too...original a character. If she's that tough I wonder why Sesshoumaru has not kept her on the tap before and warn Inuyasha. And besides, she seems a little...psychotic. Well, write more soon! And Inuyasha! Inuyasha, you can't die and leave me!
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Title: UNDERWATER963
Reviewed By: underwater963 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 25, 2006 09:25 CDT
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great chapter. please update soon!
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Reviewed By: miko_hanyou_gurl [MediaMiner Member] On: April 25, 2006 08:30 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
NO!!! He can't die! then there wouldn't even be a story!!! I hate cliffies (but not the authors who make them), but I must say that this story is going on well... sorry if I just left a review just now... I've been reading since 'Just a Break' was still a oneshot... but sadly, my computer crashed and I had no internet access for months... that along with school work... nice to know that you're continuing it... keep up the good work!! --miko_hanyou_gurl--
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Reviewed By: PrincessMelissa83 (nsi) On: April 25, 2006 07:03 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh no! Poor Inu-kun! Kagome needs to purify Leiko's butt into dust. Update soon!
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Title: Excellent!
Reviewed By: inuyashaloverr [MediaMiner Member] On: April 25, 2006 02:33 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was just awesome! The fight scene was great and how InuYasha reacted to what he thought was his mate...whew...oh yea, I could just see him doing something like that, too. Man what a mind blower. Then ya hafta throw in a cliffy? A CLIFFY for Kami's sake! Oh that's just wrong. Evil, evil authors, and their evil, evil cliffy's, dammit, lol. As for your paper you need to hand in? Heh, just change a few names, that should do just fine. Oh yea, that'll work. Lol. Great chapter, excellent story. Update when you can, soon hopefully.
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