| "Just A Break" Reviews/Comments [ 156 ] |
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Reviewed By: White Luna(offline) On: May 08, 2006 14:13 CDT
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Weird! Weird... what' going on X_x?!
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Reviewed By: inuyashalovergyal [MediaMiner Member] On: May 07, 2006 19:32 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I COMPLETLY LOVE THE STORY!!! I practically cried my butt off in the last too chapers!! I can tell you like to write angst from what you said and thank god you have an happy ending though. I love the lemons you wrote in this story too, and is probably the best ones of them being together I ever read, I enjoyed them a lot! You really have a great talent for writing stories but please countinue to finish, I can't wait until the end*dies of anticipation*^_^'
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Title: Excellent!
Reviewed By: inuyashaloverr [MediaMiner Member] On: May 07, 2006 15:24 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very much good. Short yea, but good none the less. If it had hit Kagome, she most likely wouldn't have survived. Damn, why do all the good males have to reside in fairy tales? Lol. Excellent story. Always thought so. Update when you can.
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Title: Danny Girl
Reviewed By: badgirl093 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 07, 2006 14:21 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This chapter is great, this story just keeps getting better and better.... will Sessy appear in this story (yes I do love him, too)...Please update soon.
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Reviewed By: kt On: May 07, 2006 11:54 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
CHEATER!!! inu cant be human! no way...his name literally means dog DEMON...aw come on and this chap was short?! please update! i wanna know what happened to inu and i wanna see kagome kick leiko's ASS!!!
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Reviewed By: Cricket42(to lazy to sign back in) On: May 07, 2006 10:34 CDT
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It's me again. LOved what's wrong with Inu's nose. Or did he get so weak that he turned human? OK ttyl hun~Cricket42
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Reviewed By: animecrazedgirl [MediaMiner Member] On: May 07, 2006 09:41 CDT
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OMG! Inu's okay! T.T Well. . . mostly. OMG! Is he turning human?! OMG! That's just...just... not right!!!!! Inu can't be human!!!!!! He just can't!!!! How long is he going to stay human??? Please don't let him stay human forever!!!!!! He has to be hanyou!!!!! T.T Anyways!!!! You gotta update!!!! Please!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: kagome313 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 07, 2006 08:36 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Cliffies!!! KAMI I hate those dam cliffy. This chapter wuz so sad, When you say forever, You can't possible mean forever!!! I know it's probably human he'll turn. But a human forever is...is...what do I say? He'll feel weak like he always does knowing he can't sense danger from far or use he youkai strenght. then again, you neva mention him being human, so maybe you'll make a twist in it. Oh n kags is preggo!!! YAH!!!! The best part is that it's gonna be a human child, this story jus keeps getting better n better. Hurry update!!!!! Like always, I know it's will be a blast!
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Reviewed By: miko_hanyou_gurl (too lazy to log in) On: May 07, 2006 07:12 CDT
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HA!!! I KNEW IT WASN"T REAL!!! Kagome can't be dead, then there wouldn't be a story right?!! anyways, WHY DO YOU TORMENT ME WITH THOSE CLIFFIES??? I WANNA SEE WHAT'S NEXT!! I WANNA SEE!!! *Throws a tantrum on the floor* I'm sorry, but your story is just damned good! I can't wait for the next chappie!!! by the way, how are Kyo and Saaya going to react to their father's wounds??? UPDATE SOON!!!! PLEASE??? --miko_hanyou_gurl--
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Title: WOOOOWWWW
Reviewed By: cwillia [MediaMiner Member] On: May 07, 2006 05:54 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I am soooooo loving this story. YOU Gotta update soon I'm waiting in anticipation to see what happens next.
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Reviewed By: underwater963 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 07, 2006 05:32 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
please update soon!
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Reviewed By: Anime Lady PIMP [MediaMiner Member] On: May 06, 2006 13:56 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey *wipes tears* I thought..... You tricked me! *sighs* Please update.
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Title: I love it
Reviewed By: McSlave44 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 05, 2006 17:12 CDT
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You are a goddess and I worship at your feet! I love the story, so much agnst, so much sorrow, so much love. And that poor, poor, squirrel! He is going to be in therapy forever. LOL! I love it, you are the best keep the chaps, rolling! Please don't leave us on this cliff, I HATE cliffs! Hmmm....maybe the Inu family needs to go see Sess and tell him about the freaky white-haired demoness! Then all out war on her, the whore. Chukie must be her reincarnation! Wouldn't it be cute if Sess actually protects his neice and nephew, from crazy demoness.
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Title: your mean
Reviewed By: ladytokyo [MediaMiner Member] On: May 05, 2006 09:23 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
your just mean stop there. I'm all into it sitting on the edge of my bed and then stop. and than you know what happen I fell. stop snicker it's not funny. write more plz it is way to good to stop. -_- ladytokyo
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Title: DOOOOOOOOOD
Reviewed By: inu_pup too lazy to log in On: May 04, 2006 14:21 CDT
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i've read this chapter like a bajillion times yo and i still have to say omg!!!!!!!!! x1000000000021351.035432.24354 no flippin way! he can't be dead!!! and killed by that cockroach no less! (haha get it...they don't die...haha.......) please update soooooon! cuz i'm just itching for that loserface Leiko to die a slow painful death. ha. but yeah i was like tearing up during this chapter. it was a lot, on the sad side.
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