| "Just A Break" Reviews/Comments [ 156 ] |
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Reviewed By: frostyshake(nsi) On: March 02, 2006 01:33 CST
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Nooooo!!! I really jope that want to be usurper gets what's coming to her! Are Shippo, Kaede, Kouga, Seshomaru and Ron going to make an appearance? And what happened to Kirara?
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Reviewed By: ximaginationx [MediaMiner Member] On: March 01, 2006 19:44 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
dsfkj;flajkdfhalksdjahs!!! LOL i dunno how else to put it in words! BAH to the demon lady! BAHH!! LOL! update ASAP!
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Reviewed By: Lady moon On: February 28, 2006 12:04 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I can't wait to read more, so please update as soon as possible!!!!!
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Reviewed By: axel721 On: February 27, 2006 04:34 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
im not that much of an OC fan either, but i trust you'll make something good of it ^^ it would be interesting to see some sangoxmiroku
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Reviewed By: underwater963 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 26, 2006 09:38 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love this fic. the women who wants inu is in the next chapter right? guess ill just have to wait to find out. please update soon!
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Reviewed By: TrinityK [MediaMiner Member] On: February 26, 2006 05:04 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I LOVED this family-fun filled chapter. It was so cute and fun. I liked it a lot. Taiki is just too funny cus he takes after his daddy. And the girls are so smart. LOL. That new evil does indeed sound scary. I can't wait to read more. This story is great. I love it. Good job!!! ;-) -TrinityK
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Reviewed By: living ember On: February 26, 2006 02:27 CST
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Well you have me completely panicking,, oh don't let Inuyasha fall for some trapp, you'll give me a heart attack! haha
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Title: *cough*Say HUNH?
Reviewed By: Whiteraven08 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 21, 2006 11:28 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Um perdon me but what did i just read? I don no think i heard right. Do I smell hints of rowdiness in the next chapter? Someone is about to be let down for a smackdown.Tsk Tsk Tsk naughty naughty you'll get caughty. lol on to the next chapter!
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Reviewed By: Lady moon On: February 19, 2006 19:08 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like how your developing your story so far, so please update soon!!!!
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Reviewed By: inuyasha_girl92 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 18, 2006 19:33 CST
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GREAT so far and I see also that it was the full moon I see what you are planning. But the villian might riun the story like others I have seen. But so I think it's great.
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Reviewed By: axel721 On: February 18, 2006 02:21 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
nice chapter ^^ dont get too carried away wit hthe villain though, ive read heaps of fics that are ruined by too much lame tragedy, so good luck with the crazy demon lady !!
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Reviewed By: TrinityK [MediaMiner Member] On: February 18, 2006 02:10 CST
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That's okay, I love filler chappies, they're always so fun to read, lol. But I love plots too, lol. Anyway, great update I loved this chapter, it was really cool. Well I can't wait for the next chappie, good work!!! ;-) -TrinityK
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Title: oh and...!
Reviewed By: bubblecolours [MediaMiner Member] On: February 17, 2006 20:59 CST
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little Takai (spelling?) ..sorry haha, he's so funny. i loved Kyo's reaction to him kissing Saaya and being kissed! uber cute!
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Reviewed By: bubblecolours [MediaMiner Member] On: February 17, 2006 20:57 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ohmigod... she's evil isn't she?! what happen's next? what happens next?! >_< who is she??? *gasp* more, more!
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Title: inuyashaloverr
Reviewed By: inuyashaloverr [MediaMiner Member] On: February 17, 2006 10:11 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ah, most excellent. A pretty filler? That's OK. I still liked it. Its still part of the story you're telling, right? Loved it how when Kagome's' thought briefly drifted back over their time together from the beginning, and all that had happened. Even I never looked at Kagome being a weakness to Inuyasha. You are most definitely right in that aspect. To me, anyways. You did a wonderful job with it. And ah yes the um, Full Moon...the Full Moon is rather, pretty, isn't it? And am so glad Sango and Miroku are in here as well. Gotta love the innocents a child though,lmao. I was waiting to see when they get to the *WHY* stage. When whatever you say, the child why be like on auto-run, and ask *WHY*. Lmao. I was also wondering when you'd bring in something vile. Should be very interesting. She doesn't seem familiar. An OC perhaps? Either way, it should make for some damn fine reading. Update soon.
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