| "Just A Break" Reviews/Comments [ 156 ] |
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Reviewed By: fionamalory [MediaMiner Member] On: January 31, 2006 20:37 CST
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I'm so glad I found this fic. It's so delightful! I love the humor, and the lemony goodness is nice, too. *g* Thanks for sharing!
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Title: This is so cute!
Reviewed By: ergo On: January 29, 2006 19:31 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wee! What a chapter--the Inuyasha and squirrel interaction scene was just PRICELESS! It got me thinking though, does that mean our favorite couple cannot have sex on Inuyasha's human night? Shame--human Inuyasha is quite sexy in his own right. I guess Kagome makes Inuyasha wears a condom or something. Variety pack! Ribbed, studded, spiked and glow in the dark condoms! Lol. That could be quite fun as well as pregnancy preventing. Glad to hear the brothers are on good term. Does Inuyasha has any other job in the feudal era other than being the village protector? Since he's on good term with Sesshoumaru is he simply a lord living on the rent and tribute of others now? I guess you will touch base on that later on. Please write more soon.
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Reviewed By: TrinityK [MediaMiner Member] On: January 29, 2006 14:17 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh yeah, I remember now!!! Just a Break. LoL. Disregard my questioning email I sent just a while ago asking who you were, LoL. I love chapter 3, it was a great update. i thought it was kinda funny. YES!!! You should make thins into a lengthy story. If you don't mind me asking, on average how long is your chapters? I was thinking of writing my very first fic and wasn't sure how long each chap was supposed to be, and I don't want then to be too short. Anyway great chapter update. And how about a flashback to the actual proposal, or to the wedding? Just some ideas. Okay, I can't wait for the next update and chapter four, great writing!!! ;-) -TrinityK
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Title: inuyashaloverr
Reviewed By: inuyashaloverr [MediaMiner Member] On: January 29, 2006 12:14 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I am glad you took this past a one shot as well. And, LMAO,I can relate all too well with what Kagome was going through with her son and the waist length hair. Brings back many fond memories. Love the flashbacks,too. How else can things get explained. Flashback I liked best was when InuYasha tried to talk to his mate about pups,lol. But ROFLMFAO with the bit with the squirrel. But it was a damned good thing he didnt lose that battle,lmao. Great story. Update when you can.
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Title: ooooo
Reviewed By: inu_pup [MediaMiner Member] On: January 29, 2006 10:03 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i was hopeing you would make it longer....and you did! yesh! you don't kno how many times i read just the first chapter when it came out...heh. btw i loved the squirel part made me laugh
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Reviewed By: axel721 On: January 29, 2006 06:02 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
aww great chapter! =D i still feel for the squirrel though =P i dunno about flashbacks, im enjoying the present parts of the story moreso, but put in whatever mushy/'experimental'(*wink*) moments at your will =P
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Reviewed By: lemonhead On: January 28, 2006 01:49 CST
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I think I felt a cry about to come on me when poor Inuyasha didn't get his way.
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Reviewed By: living ember On: January 27, 2006 23:54 CST
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Yes god Yes!!! I love your story. Kuddos to the talented author.
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Reviewed By: yess!!!!!! On: January 27, 2006 23:44 CST
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i feel SO bad for poor inu-kun!! it's so incredibly cute and fluffy and so incredibly hentai! like one of the other reviewers said, i LOVE the bite you add to it! oh and the way everything is described...talk about mental images! i could literally see the sweat dripping from inuyasha when kagome 'took matters into her own hands', haha!! and i have to comment on this, your grammar and spelling? wickedly superb!! UPDATE!
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Reviewed By: kb On: January 27, 2006 13:39 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Gasp! You can't leave poor Inu hanging like that! More chapters please. He deserves some lovin', too :)!
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Reviewed By: MoonlightMage [MediaMiner Member] On: January 26, 2006 18:52 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is just to cute for words, and I also like the hentai bite you put into it too!!!!! Please update soon!!!
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Reviewed By: Inu and Kag forever, man! On: January 26, 2006 12:50 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Heh. Fluffines of the Inu/Kag genre is always a favorite of mine. Honestly, this little fic made me go 'SQUEE!' ...'Cuz you know I love the stuff. XD
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Title: inuyashaloverr
Reviewed By: inuyashaloverr [MediaMiner Member] On: January 26, 2006 09:31 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I liked this piece the moment I read it. And I keep going back and re-reading it over again. To me, I just liked it, alot If you do decide to take it past a one-shot, I think you'll just great with it.
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Reviewed By: TrinityK [MediaMiner Member] On: January 26, 2006 06:35 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YAY!! You updated. I hope this means your making this story into more than a one-shot. That's great! I loved chapter 2, I thought it was funny when they kept getting interrupted, lol. I can't wait for chapter 3 I know it'll be awesome!!! ;-) -TrinityK
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Reviewed By: axel721 On: January 26, 2006 05:34 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
LMAO XD yay for update! it was awesome! =D i cant wait for the next chapter, i hope inu-chan doesnt murder kyo XD
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