| "Purity 5: Phantasm" Reviews/Comments [ 753 ] |
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Title: Been A While
Reviewed By: RadiosNmyHead [MediaMiner Member] On: February 17, 2006 18:51 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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This is less of a review than a plea. It's been a while, Sue. I've tried contacting you, but I haven't been able to. I don't really know what happened, but I miss chatting with everyone. They were fun times! Anyway, on to review the fic. I stopped reading for a while as I got overwhelmed with schoolwork, but boy am I glad that I started again! This tale is as fascinating as any of the others. Bas is such a sweetie. I can't wait for the next update.
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Title: Wow!
Reviewed By: Angelswrath [MediaMiner Member] On: February 17, 2006 15:00 CST
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Excellent description Sue!! I loved it! I thought she was going to break the headboard too! They\'re soo cute together. But I wonder why she thinks there is supposed to be pain during sex. Hmmm. Does it have something to do with her sister or Carl Richardson? That would be disturbing. Can't wait to see what you come out with next!
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Reviewed By: vvkimbo07 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 17, 2006 10:34 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awwww! What a stubborn kitty! She just wouldn't admit it hurt. Well at least Bas had the since to call Kich...even though silly Belle was listening in! Now I have a feeling that Bas and Sydnie will be much happier! Thanks for the early update...I really LOVED it! ~Kim~
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Title: Setting Her Straight
Reviewed By: angelfire777 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 16, 2006 23:43 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WoW! I just love how you spoil us, Sue. And thank you to the Chat Girls for ensuring the 'encouragement' to convince you to post this chapter early. It just makes my evening to see two chapters in one day. Kich and Belle are too funny. Just reading about Kich throwing the notepad across the room had me laughing. I also love the fact that Bas finally gets it right with Sydnie. Thank you for both the updates today and take care.
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Reviewed By: Simonkal of Inuy [MediaMiner Member] On: February 16, 2006 20:46 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved this chapter!! I laughed my ass off!! I can't wait until you dig into sydnie mind, it will be interesting to find out why she is the way she is.
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Title: phantasm
Reviewed By: Inu_sesshomaru_luver [MediaMiner Member] On: February 16, 2006 20:42 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love this story i have to admitt you are one of the best authors on this site that i have seen so far and my talent doesn't even come close to yours but any ways love the story keep updating and i'll keep reading and reveiwing
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Reviewed By: Corcione [MediaMiner Member] On: February 16, 2006 20:38 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
2 chaps in a day??!?!?! GREAT!! I LOVED THIS CHAPTER.. WOOHO I ADORE YOU FOR IT!! hah anyway, i loved the 'cluelessness'( i don't know how else to call bas' lack of knowledge on sex :S) in Bas, it was so cute!! awww and poor Kitty was getting hurt?? poor poor kitty. anyway, I wonder who SHE is, the person sydney's mentioned and i hope her secrets are revealed soon!! Don't tell me this is tomorrow's chapter?? PLEASE UPDATE TOMORROW!!! PLEASE.. Ill.. I'll.. "I'll get on my knees and beg..." LoL haha anyway congrats for the chappie. oxox Ginny
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Reviewed By: RisikaFox [MediaMiner Member] On: February 16, 2006 19:45 CST
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Awesome chapter! Definately not regretting that promise... Yet... *shifty eyes* lol. Bas rocks! Absolutely loved teh Handcuffs... ^^
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Reviewed By: OROsan0677 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 16, 2006 18:48 CST
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I absolutely LOVE Kich and Belle; they are too funny!!!!!! Kudos to them lol! See what happens when I'm away from the boards for a few hours? Lol. Another wonderfully written chapter, and another teaser for us to ponder on lol. You spoil us too much, Sue lol.
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Title: I luff da Sue!
Reviewed By: thefaeryofpurejoy [MediaMiner Member] On: February 16, 2006 18:46 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Why, oh why can't they have an 11 in the ratings just for you? That chappie was way more than an 10!
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Reviewed By: NekoKamiFL [MediaMiner Member] On: February 16, 2006 17:52 CST
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I was so excited when I saw that you updated early! Thank you so much, and a big thank you to the Chat Girls. ^_^ This chapter was wonderful. I adored Belle\'s little paper messages. And finally, Bas and Sydnie do it the right way... Great for them. =) Once more, thanks a bunch.
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Title: Elvis of Oral Sex
Reviewed By: inuyashaloverr [MediaMiner Member] On: February 16, 2006 17:19 CST
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Who else better to ask for sex advice from than, *The Elvis Of Oral Sex*, lmao. Oh Yea!
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Reviewed By: fallenangel7583 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 16, 2006 16:45 CST
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so i'm starting to see a bigger picture here. there's a 'she' involved, as you dropped off in the last couple chapters...one who helped raise Sidney. i'm going to guess that this girl...entertained...men with use of her body...which is where Syd is getting these ideas that sex should be rough...and also for the constant use of a washcloth to cleanse afterwards. now...i'm reaching here...but i'm going to guess Richardson (sp?) had something to do with her buddies death, or worse. intriguing. great chapter...loved the use of kich adn belle (and kich's awesome end cap statement. LMAO. what a dog!!!). can't wait for more. thanks for posting early!!!
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Title: inuyashaloverr
Reviewed By: inuyashaloverr [MediaMiner Member] On: February 16, 2006 16:31 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
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Reviewed By: Rawben [MediaMiner Member] On: February 16, 2006 16:29 CST
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*dies* poor bas!! it's like all his old fears of hurting his mate came true!! ...but the sex...that was great!!! she totally needed that. poor girl!! and that akward sex talk? hilarious. w/ belle in the background: "tie her up"!! ...and he did. ;) amazing chapter!!
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