| "Purity 5: Phantasm" Reviews/Comments [ 753 ] |
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Reviewed By: RisikaFox [MediaMiner Member] On: March 19, 2006 17:29 CST
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*sigh* So much unhappiness... I really hope that Bas can keep Sydnie from doing something that could make her situation worse. *fingers crossed*
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Title: :(
Reviewed By: kitsunesan [MediaMiner Member] On: March 19, 2006 12:21 CST
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...if youve been updateing sue. i havent gotten them.. im getting frustrated too!!btw im mimiy9991 on DA
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Reviewed By: Hales [MediaMiner Member] On: March 12, 2006 16:33 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Style of Writing: I\'ve rated it 10 because I have not yet read a review from someone that hasn\'t enjoyed some or all of your writing. I don\'t believe you have changed your style in any way. Everyone including myself has enjoyed your stories. Spelling and Grammar: I have picked up on a few typos but nothing that can\'t be fixed. The grammer is great. It is easy to understand and your words are easy to relate to. You don\'t use words that aren\'t neccessary to the sentence and you seem to find words that get the message across very well. Originality/Creativity: Well I can\'t be sure who thought up the hanyou/human birth nights but I have a strong feeling that was your idea. I have read many stories from people that have taken that idea and used it. It is very smart. Why shouldn\'t a hanyou have a choice whether to make their offspring suffer as he/she did or to let the child have an easier time as a full human. Not to say it would be easy, just easier. Enjoyment Factor: Well... Lets see. I can\'t wait for the next chapter. I can\'t wait for the next book. I think I enjoy it.... A LOT! Overall Rating: :) TEN TEN TEN TEN! I love how your stories come together. You never leave loose ends and you have enough twists and turns that make it impossible to fully predict the outcome. You have an incredible imagination. You also know enough true facts that make the stories believable, like with the pregnancy issues. I didn\'t know about some of those problems. Way to go! Like I said before. I can\'t wait to see what you come up with next. Keep up the good work. You know. I\'ve been trying to think of a way you could use your ideas to publish your stories as your own characters and everything but I am finding it impossible. I think it world ruin the story if you had to rewrite it a different way. But you\'ve said before you love these characters and don\'t write with the intention of publishing... At least I think that\'s what you said. I\'m glad you\'re writing. I think you\'re the best writer out there.
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Reviewed By: InUyAsHaRlZ [MediaMiner Member] On: March 10, 2006 10:33 CST
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Oi! lol, well I just finished Defiance and I must say I'm glad i started the Purity continuations. This fic was almost asm angsty as Torrent,(though I don't think any fic will ever top Torrent). The ending was the absolute best!! Toga! Beefcake!! LMFAO! InU P.S. I'll start Purity3 on Monday, hate to start fics at the end of the week.
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Reviewed By: Kurisu no Ryuujin [MediaMiner Member] On: March 09, 2006 23:24 CST
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hey Sue thanks for the early update. I hope things are going at least a little smoothly for you, lol life tends to get that way. anyway, take care
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Reviewed By: OROsan0677 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 06, 2006 15:45 CST
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Aww...I feel so bad for Sydnie; she wants to believe but she can't, it's sad! But I know that Bas can and will convince her to stay with him; after all, what would she do without her puppy? Lol....Great chapter, Sue and I'll see you the 1st lol.
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Reviewed By: Simonkal of Inu [MediaMiner Member] On: March 06, 2006 08:47 CST
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Awesome Chapter! Really nice!!
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Title: yeah!!
Reviewed By: smallflower [MediaMiner Member] On: March 05, 2006 13:18 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
:) As always, I loved this chapter! Thank you for posting it on your "vacation". I hope the time off is doing you good. Thank you again for being the amazing writer you are. Seeing the little notification in my inbox that you've added a new chapter to one of your stories (even the non-Inuyasha ones) just brightens my day more than you know. Thank you again. :)
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Reviewed By: Rawben [MediaMiner Member] On: March 05, 2006 12:39 CST
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wow bas! those were some good moves! maybe you did learn something from your hentai family..lol.. and poor sydnie! i can't wait till she gets to meet the family! she needs to know that they like her! and that cain gave her that box...that he made! and that he's a nice guy! oh! so sad!
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Title: FINALLY!
Reviewed By: kitsunesan [MediaMiner Member] On: March 05, 2006 11:10 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
fineally an update from someone! i swear everyone on mediminer has been on a writers block or somethin. but aneyways. love the new chap sue. keep it up :D
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Reviewed By: ladygeri [MediaMiner Member] On: March 05, 2006 09:51 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yay!!! A new chapter. This is so great. IThank you ...thank you for updating. I hope you enjoy your vacation. Much love to you and the family. ;)
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Reviewed By: kamackie21 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 05, 2006 09:16 CST
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lol...the Bears won the SuperBowl? Well, it is 2056, surely they'll win it again by then. Great chapter Sue! I hope you are enjoying your vacataion. ~ teh mackie
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Reviewed By: RisikaFox [MediaMiner Member] On: March 05, 2006 07:12 CST
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Awww... Poor Sydnie, she's so confused, and that just makes things harder on Bas, doesn't it? *tears*
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Reviewed By: RisikaFox [MediaMiner Member] On: March 05, 2006 06:53 CST
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OMG! I can't believe I missed that this one had been posted! *slaps self* That was a wonderful fight scene Sue(I know you really don't like writing them) and it's always nice to see those familiar faces(Inuyasha, Ryo). Now, to read the new chappie... *scurries off*
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Reviewed By: JasonC [MediaMiner Member] On: March 05, 2006 05:17 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Good update. I enjoyed the ending most of all though. Sydnie sure is going through some emotional probs huh. Well good day and have a happy month of March.
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