| "Purity 5: Phantasm" Reviews/Comments [ 753 ] |
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Reviewed By: GalacticFire [MediaMiner Member] On: April 09, 2006 19:48 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*BIG SIGH OF RELIEF* I totally thought you were going to take that last part in a different direction. I'm so glad it didn't go how I was expecting. GREAT chapter! Can't wait til the next!
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Title: inuyashaloverr
Reviewed By: inuyashaloverr [MediaMiner Member] On: April 09, 2006 04:11 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
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Title: okay, you did it!
Reviewed By: xbitternessx [MediaMiner Member] On: April 08, 2006 01:21 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
sue, you made me cry. good job... *sniffles*
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Title: adamile
Reviewed By: adamile [MediaMiner Member] On: April 08, 2006 00:25 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow! great chapter so far this is my favorite chapt. Since she had the gun I've been waiting to see how this confrontation between Serena and Baz would play out. I gotta say I was touched by the emotions that poured out between the two in that short meeting. Very impacting and beautifully written. Serena was truly a woman of dignity.***Sue, did Sydnie kill Richardson? Also, you always seem to have the joy and incentive to write. I always wanted to know if you ever have writer's block and if so, how you overcome it. Also, what is the best way to get over a fear of writing and obtain the courage to write. thanks much. J
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Reviewed By: serendith [MediaMiner Member] On: April 07, 2006 20:52 CDT
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This story is very "mature" ... I am not sure if that is the right word. It is rich in plot and true in its emotions ... just really well written. Thank you for sharing it.
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Reviewed By: Inu_sesshomaru_luver [MediaMiner Member] On: April 07, 2006 17:41 CDT
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i love this story!!!!! in fact i love all of your storys (i've read them all) and i'm sure Shameless will be the same
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Reviewed By: RisikaFox [MediaMiner Member] On: April 07, 2006 15:34 CDT
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Poor Bas, poor Serena... So much angst... It's been so long since I had a good cry, and this chapter was beautiful. I can't wait for the next update! ^^ ((I can't believe I forgot this yesterday: Welcome back Sue! ^^))
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Reviewed By: OROsan0677 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 07, 2006 15:30 CDT
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I almost cried in this chapter, but I don't think I have enough moister in my tear ducts to do so lol. I was wondering when Serena would pop back in. I feel so bad for her.
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Reviewed By: Ayita [MediaMiner Member] On: April 06, 2006 22:20 CDT
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Oh Sueric. Sueric, Sueric, Sueric. I love your story telling. Especially that chapter. It was just amazing. As time goes on and my own writing develops, I find myself drifting away from Media Miner and the whole fan fiction genre, at least until I finish my own story. Except I find myself continually coming back to your stories and never losing any enjoyment in them. I sit in anticipation for your next chapter and I can't wait till the next Purity starts. Is that in the near future by any chance? I hope your break was enjoyable.
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Reviewed By: Simonkal of Inuy [MediaMiner Member] On: April 06, 2006 21:09 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
All I have to say is, "amazing!" That chapter had me at the end of my seat, not b/c I didn\ 't know what was gonna happen, but b/c I couldn\ 't wait to read what was going to happen. Outstanding job as always!!
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Reviewed By: Sweetprincess 17 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 06, 2006 19:52 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey,another great chapter done. Wow, you're an absolutely amazing author I've ever seen. Your fics are so incredible and the angst are piling up. I love it and I can't express how many time I wish i've have your talent and ability to write. Anyway, Bas is such a sweetheart and Sydney is a very lucky girl to have him as a mate. Btw, purity 6 is looking great. I hope you can update soon.
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Title: Final Confessions
Reviewed By: angelfire777 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 06, 2006 19:06 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Intense writing at its best...I love that your writing style is unique. Thank you for the updates and for your passion. Take care of you.
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Reviewed By: GalacticFire [MediaMiner Member] On: April 06, 2006 18:45 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm speechless. Very awesome chapter. Maybe now Bas and Sydnie can move on with their lives! w00t!!
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Reviewed By: Usagiseren05 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 06, 2006 18:30 CDT
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Okay I completely feel like an addict now I need more stories, lol. I can't wait for the end to seee how she reacts to Cain. As far as the 6th one is there going to be action in that also. I know you once said that you don't like writing action as much as you like writing romance?
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Reviewed By: Usagiseren05 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 06, 2006 18:12 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm so glad that you are finished from your break the way you describe your home life though means that you must've needed it lol. I just wanted you to know that you are hands down my favorite author and I think that you have so many great stories. I can't wait for you to continue onto the second.
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