| "Purity 5: Phantasm" Reviews/Comments [ 753 ] |
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Reviewed By: OROsan0677 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 06, 2006 18:02 CDT
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Thank you, Sue. I seriously needed this chapter; especially after putting up with my friend's crap all day! Action, love the action!! Lol.
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Title: Oooh 0.0
Reviewed By: Pyro Amedaus [MediaMiner Member] On: April 06, 2006 17:23 CDT
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Yeah plot twist! It was awesome (kinda) that we're ahving the thunderstorm of the year, massively huge storm, and just as I read the name this HUGE thunderclap happed and all the lights flickered. Did you plan that 0.0 ? Great update, even if it wasn't for the natural special effects. The sneaking out reminded me of Skeller's cat save for the sex part... 0.o I think I'll just shut up now. Uh... ::pets ego and runs::
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Title: Awesome!
Reviewed By: inuyashaloverr [MediaMiner Member] On: April 06, 2006 16:46 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh, this was a most excellent chapter indeed. So intense. Loved also how you went back a bit with InuYashas memories and then his understanding in what Bas had to do. I had also wondered about all their swords, so Im glad you mentions them. I do have one question about them though: What exactly do they look like? I mean, I know what Tetsusaiga and Tenseiga look like, but what about the others? Where Tenseiga is long and straight, Tetsusaiga is long but curved and is larger than Tenseiga, or so it seems to me anyways. I really started to wonder what they all would look like when in the one chapter when Bas used HIS version of the Wind Scar. That really got me to thinking about them. That was also an awesome chapter. Cant wait till next chapter. Update when you can.
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Reviewed By: RisikaFox [MediaMiner Member] On: April 06, 2006 15:41 CDT
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Wow... *speechless* Great chapters, but so depressing... Hopefully, things will be looking up from now on... *drying eyes*
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Reviewed By: Simonkal of Inuy [MediaMiner Member] On: April 06, 2006 08:42 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Welcome back!! I hope you had an uneventful hiatus. I really loved this chapter, although I'm having a difficult time believing that it was Jared, I wonder what his excuse/reasoning will be? I hope Bas doesn't run in there half cocked and end up getting hurt. And isn't the Cougars wife after him with a gun? Damn, once again it would seem like the walls are closing in around him, and he doesn't even know it.
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Reviewed By: Deceptress [MediaMiner Member] On: April 06, 2006 07:17 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I figured that would be the logical response to your question. Also on many occasions I imagined INu Yasha holding the phone at arms length and yelling into it. Excellent Chapter wwelcome back
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Title: inuyashaloverr
Reviewed By: inuyashaloverr [MediaMiner Member] On: April 05, 2006 22:49 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Welcome back! Hope your off-time was good. I know everyone needs a break once in a while. But am glad to see you back. Great chapter. I was wondering how Bas was gonna take being followed by InuYasha and Ryomaru. Not too bad, all things considered. You do make some great fight scenes, so I'm wondering if The General is gonna put up much of a fight or just say it wasn't him. After all being one of Cains' Generals, Jared could just say, prove it. Again, great chapter. Update when you can.
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Reviewed By: GalacticFire [MediaMiner Member] On: April 05, 2006 16:56 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh my gosh. I am so anxious to read the next chapter! I really missed reading this fan-fic. I'm so happy to get the new chapter! Thanks Sueric!
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Title: AWSOME!!
Reviewed By: smallflower [MediaMiner Member] On: April 05, 2006 16:16 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Thank you so much for the birthday present! (It's next Saturday, but I wasn't sure when you'd update next.) How you twist the story... I love it! I'm glad she didn't kill him... but it would have made another awsome angsty twist. :) Thanks again, and I can't wait until the next chapter.
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Reviewed By: Rawben [MediaMiner Member] On: April 05, 2006 16:11 CDT
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cool!!! i was so worried that she'd try to kill him! ugh!! and now! dangit bas! he's a general! ::sigh:: you couldn't wait for your gpa? come on! great chapter sue! yey for the fight scene! and for the family reunion at the end! ;)
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Reviewed By: OROsan0677 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 05, 2006 15:18 CDT
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I knew it was a general, I just wasn't sure on which one; though I knew it couldn't have been Ben! Oh, I'm really looking forward to this next chapter. Action is screaming out! Lol. How did your vacation go, Sue? I hope it was good!!
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Title: WOW
Reviewed By: kiaraecko [MediaMiner Member] On: April 02, 2006 19:14 CDT
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wow this is such a good story!!!!! I LOVE IT!!
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Title: ALL HAIL SUERIC!!!
Reviewed By: Kilikina616 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 02, 2006 13:08 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think you are an awesome writer. I come on everyday after school just to see if you've updated. I really want to continue reading Purity5 and Purity6! Please, Please, Please Update!!!
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Reviewed By: animeloca [MediaMiner Member] On: April 01, 2006 16:37 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wonderful
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Reviewed By: GoldWings [MediaMiner Member] On: March 27, 2006 20:05 CST
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Hi! I just wanted to drop in to say that i think this is so wonderful. I've been following the entire Purity series. I love everything about your style of writing, and I am quite, for lack of better terms, punch-ass jealous. And I NEVER get jealous of anything. Don't take it as a bad thing; take it as a good thing. No one else has ever succeeded in making me jealous. And quite frnakly, you deserve much more than my jealousy. For all that you've had to endure just for writing what's in your heart. I truly believe that my jealousy is one of the many things you deserve, despite it being a nasty emotion. You've done something, probably without even striving to achieve do it, that I've always dreamed of doing: writing what was truly in your soul. I'm so afraid to really, truly write what I feel, that I end up spitting out something that I'm not always proud of. I've evolved as a writer, and my reviewers tell me as such, but...I know better. Writing is something that breaches beyond the boudaries of the heart; it transcends into the soul, the very existence of the huamn being. Always cherish what you write. Anyway, just a comment on your beautiful writing. I hope you don't let what others say affect how you write. It doesn't matter how your writing changes. It's why it changes that's important. If you change your style due to what's happening around you, that fine. But if you change because of the way you feel in reaction to what's happening, that's where the true joy of writing comes into play (that's how I live, anyway). All of this, in short, means: you have a beautiful talent. I've never read any of your other fics but, judging from this, I don't think I need to (but, I will anyway :winks:). You've also achieved another of my invisbile goals: to have various individuals do fanart of my characters. It's childish, but... P.S. I'm probably late but, I hope your son has a happy birthday. Birthdays are special, so make sure to cherish him always :) Also, enjoy your Spring Break! I just came off of mine. :sighs: Nineth grade is no fun. At all. Keep up the beautiful work!
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