| "Purity 5: Phantasm" Reviews/Comments [ 753 ] |
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Reviewed By: artemiswaterdragon [MediaMiner Member] On: March 26, 2006 11:43 CST
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Woot! This was a wonderful chapter! Cant wait for more. =D
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Title: updating
Reviewed By: tdgtink85 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 25, 2006 19:32 CST
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Hi hun. I know I never review but I feel like there's so much drama associated with it and I just love to read your stories. Got the "testing" new chapter update and the link brought me to the mediaminer homepage, but no sign of the "testing" chapter. Just thought i'd let you know since you're obviously having problems with it. Hope you get it straightened out...just can't get enough of that purity 5 lovin'! Hope you had a great vacation and keep up the amazing work! Much love, Katie
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Reviewed By: kitsunesan [MediaMiner Member] On: March 25, 2006 01:18 CST
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sumhow i feel like im not getting updates :( pouts..
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Reviewed By: Kurisu no Ryuujin [MediaMiner Member] On: March 24, 2006 10:43 CST
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thanks for the early update Sue, great chapter ^^ Ja ne
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Reviewed By: InUyAsHaRlZ [MediaMiner Member] On: March 24, 2006 10:39 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'll catch up to you yet, Sue! Just finished Purity3, Fantastic, of course. I'll start Purity4 on Monday, as per usual. Hope your having a great vacation! Much love, InU
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Title: Ch. 43
Reviewed By: DarklessVasion [MediaMiner Member] On: March 22, 2006 11:32 CST
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The long, zigzaggy cross-country road trip is finally coming to an end with New York on the horizon. Will Sydnie finally tell Bas who that other youkai is, or will she try to give him the slip and follow through with her original plan? Bas can see how much this unfinished business is hurting her and only wants to help her find justice for her sister, but first and foremost, to protect her; even if it's from herself. He'd take the burden from her if she'd only tell him, just like she would do anything to keep him from harm. Funny how clear thought goes out the window once the heart is involved.
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Title: Ch. 42
Reviewed By: DarklessVasion [MediaMiner Member] On: March 22, 2006 10:50 CST
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Whew! Bas...you dog! He sure caught on quick to those helpful suggestions from Kich. -- Poor Sydnie, she's lived with the surety that her vendetta will ultimately end with her death, it's difficult to derail that train of thought and think, let alone hope, for a future. Take a deep breath Bas, and be patient. Maybe once Cain finally talks to her, she'll believe.
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Reviewed By: lila_elensar [MediaMiner Member] On: March 20, 2006 21:11 CST
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I almost never review your stories.. especially since you stopped writing on ff.net. It took me like half an hour to figure out how to review here.. anyway.. back to the point.. I don't review often, but I've read all of your Purity stories. And I love them. I absolutely love them. And I'm sorry that you seem to have so much trouble with reviews from readers who are clearly not happy with some aspect of your writing. You're stories are good, really good. And you don't deserve all the trouble you seem to get. Oh.. and the conversation about balls at the end of JUstification.. hilarious. I loved it.
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Reviewed By: Deceptress [MediaMiner Member] On: March 20, 2006 20:58 CST
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Wow, stupid thing wouldn't let me review at school, as usual I am amazed at your plot line and overall talent.Everytime it seems like one problem solved, more just POP up. It's wicked. I am aprticularyly amazed at how you say you are taking a vacation from writin gbut yet chapters still find their way onto the net. I always try to take a break between chapters but I found, you cant stop...you just cant. Its like I dont even remember what I used to do with my free time before I started this. Anyway I love your story, you and your characters but I have one question...The Hanyou's have all at one point talked on the phone, and their EARS are located on top of their head? So Im wondering exactly how you picture them holding the phone?
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Title: inuyashaloverr
Reviewed By: inuyashaloverr [MediaMiner Member] On: March 20, 2006 18:43 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
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Reviewed By: InUyAsHaRlZ [MediaMiner Member] On: March 20, 2006 10:49 CST
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I was just wondering... Do you have any published works? (If so I know what reading material I'll be buying next... LoL!) InU
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Reviewed By: Red Falcon [MediaMiner Member] On: March 20, 2006 01:03 CST
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I'm excited! I checked the site on a whim and saw the update. I'm glad you updated early! I'm so curious how this one is going to turn out.
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Reviewed By: Rawben [MediaMiner Member] On: March 19, 2006 21:30 CST
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lol!! Mistress Sydnie?? that's gonna be some fun pillow talk... ;) and ugh! just when you thought they were out of the woods, there's a crazy widow after them, and sydnie's thinkin about bolting to go kill some other guy... ::sigh:: lol, great chapter!!
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Reviewed By: OROsan0677 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 19, 2006 18:54 CST
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Aww, poor Sydnie! I hope Bas get's the other youkai's name out of her before she decides to go after him. Hmm...I wonder when Serena is going to pop up with her gun.
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Reviewed By: Simonkal of Inuy [MediaMiner Member] On: March 19, 2006 18:28 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Why do I get the feeling that someone one is going to get hurt. Anyway this was an awesome chapter, please keep it going I can hardly wait for the next one!!
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