| "Purity 5: Phantasm" Reviews/Comments [ 753 ] |
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Title: Wow
Reviewed By: phalon23 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 23, 2006 03:33 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Okay just caught up... Wow, this was, spectacular! I loved this story, you get better and better with each story of Purity and I love how you ended up incorporating each aspect of the other characters... I'm glad you put Syd's real family history at the very end... It made it truely suspenseful and kind of sad about her sister. *thumbs up* 10/10 :)
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Reviewed By: OROsan0677 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 21, 2006 17:26 CDT
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Aww, that was a cute chapter. I also like the one-shot you did, even though it was sad, very well writen, and I cried in it lol; no surprise there.
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Reviewed By: Rawben [MediaMiner Member] On: April 21, 2006 15:14 CDT
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aww!! so sweet! i'm glad they got her family stuff taken care of. poor girl! and yey for family pictures!!
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Reviewed By: kitsunesan [MediaMiner Member] On: April 21, 2006 10:05 CDT
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that was bad sue... nice clifhanger at the end >:X well i keep hopein to see one. loved the wedding.
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Title: Excellent.
Reviewed By: inuyashaloverr [MediaMiner Member] On: April 21, 2006 01:28 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Nice way to say goodbye for Sydnie. At least she has some closure now. Excellent story.
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Title: Sunset
Reviewed By: angelfire777 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 21, 2006 00:21 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
What a funny chapter! I just laughed out loud and my family were looking at me like I had lost it or something. From the spiked collar around Evan's neck to Gin singing to that raunchy song, and now the catnip. Too funny! Thank you for answering my question about yaoi. Thanks for the AWESOME! update and take care of you!
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Reviewed By: GalacticFire [MediaMiner Member] On: April 20, 2006 22:24 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
One of the very best chapters I have read! I actually laughed out loud. Especially at the part where Gin was singing along with the song. I'm pretty sure my roommate things I'm crazy because I was laughing when she walked by. I definitely got a look for not being able to explain to her why I thought it was so funny. Oh well. Great job Sueric!
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Reviewed By: FireDemon86 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 20, 2006 21:46 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great chapter! I love Gin, I was laughing so hard through the whole thing. Catnip... I can't wait to find out what happens next chapter hehehehehe. But I'm sure it's going to be good.
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Reviewed By: camintmier [MediaMiner Member] On: April 20, 2006 18:00 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh dear... A whole room laced with catnip? Bas is gonna have a tigress on his hands when they get there. Hehe. I was wondering if you knew any of the characters from the original series's birthdays (official, or unofficial). I'm making Google Calendars (www.google.com/calendar) of different series anime character's birthdays, but I haven't been able to find anything on any Inuyasha character's birthdays. Sofar I've got calendars for the animes "Tenchi Muyo", "Vandread", and "Neon Genesis Evangelion". Also, might I ask what some of the characters from the Purity series's birthdays are (if you've thought of them, ofcourse). I tried searching your forum for it, but couldn't find anything (I'm "camintmier" on there, btw.) If you can help in any way, feel free to pm me on the forum, email me (camintmier(at)gmail(dot)com) or whatever. Thanks.
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Reviewed By: Rawben [MediaMiner Member] On: April 20, 2006 17:36 CDT
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lol!!! laced w/ catnip... ohh what a good night bas will have!!
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Title: inuyashaloverr
Reviewed By: inuyashaloverr [MediaMiner Member] On: April 20, 2006 17:19 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Lol, the Lil stinkers! Catnip? Cute...I wondered who was gonna pull a prank, and this should prove very interesting. Then amusing when Bas and Sydnie return, lol. Great chapter though. Update when you can.
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Title: oh crap!
Reviewed By: thefaeryofpurejoy [MediaMiner Member] On: April 20, 2006 16:53 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Catnip??? Poor Bas is gonna be DEAD! How could you, Sue? You wicked thing! LOL.
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Reviewed By: Sweetprincess 17 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 20, 2006 16:37 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great chapter. The wedding was beautiful. I'm glad that Sydney isn't that afraid of Cain anymore. Can't wait to find out what'll happen next with the catnip. Update soon!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: OROsan0677 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 20, 2006 16:28 CDT
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Oh my gosh, Mikio and Morio are dead!!! Haha, that's a very good prank though. Bas is going to have his handsful that night, isn't he? lol. I don't think he'd complain too much though lol.
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Reviewed By: CarylonMalfoy [MediaMiner Member] On: April 20, 2006 15:51 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Your work is amazing, practically flawless really, I have only just discovered your fanfiction but I have say I'm thoroughly addicted. How you're not a published author is beyond me. But I was curious of one small factor; you said that you had several other Purity continuations planned out, just wondering if any of them involve, slash or Interacial relationships, I'm bi-racial and I was just curious if you would have any major issues like that in your fics, it'd be interesting and I definitely think you could be the person to tackle them tastefully, while still writing awesome work, just curious. Love what you write, Carylon
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