| "Purity 5: Phantasm" Reviews/Comments [ 753 ] |
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Reviewed By: RisikaFox [MediaMiner Member] On: April 13, 2006 15:33 CDT
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Yay! Another wnderful and slightly more fluffy chapter! ^^ It's so nice to see the rest of the family again. My favorite part was the whole "You stole my dog" scene. ^^
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Reviewed By: OROsan0677 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 13, 2006 15:24 CDT
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Haha....Badd is no longer Bas' dog! Kinda like how Yukitora was never really Sierra's puppy, but more of Toga's puppy lol. Great chapter, Sue; and if you don't update again before Easter, HAPPY EASTER!
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Title: :)
Reviewed By: smallflower [MediaMiner Member] On: April 13, 2006 13:18 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Thank you so much for another chapter before my birthday. :) I can't listen to "She's Got A Way" without thinking of Purity 4... in a good way. :) Thanks again for continuing to write a story that keeps me so enthralled that I drop everything when I get that email notification that you've updated.
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Reviewed By: Usagiseren05 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 13, 2006 09:44 CDT
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Sue you are without a doupt a genius. I completely feel so sorry for Sydnie and then I feel for Cain because I'm sure he's never had anyone dislike him so much, besides InuYasha that is, and be so afraid of him at the same time. Poor Gin and Bas they are going to have such a time refereeing lol.
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Reviewed By: kamackie21 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 13, 2006 08:53 CDT
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Whoa...poor Sydnie....a bit overwhelmed. The whole family is coming soon and that should be interesting. Great chapter Sue!!!
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Reviewed By: FireDemon86 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 13, 2006 08:39 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Omg! I couldn't stop laughing, the whole thing with Cain and Gin (His MATE...) The whole scene with Bas and Even was a little more toned down then I thought it'd be. But I love that Even was trying to steal Sydnie away. I'm a little mad at Sydnie I mean I know she doesn't like Cain but not wanting to take Bas's name, I'm sad for Bas. Well I can't wait to see what happens next.
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Reviewed By: InUyAsHaRlZ [MediaMiner Member] On: April 13, 2006 08:11 CDT
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Thanks much for the link! Would I be able to find these books in a bookstore or just online? Thanks again, InU
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Title: Hesitation
Reviewed By: angelfire777 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 12, 2006 22:54 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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I really enjoyed this update, Sue. Thank you.
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Reviewed By: GalacticFire [MediaMiner Member] On: April 12, 2006 02:36 CDT
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one word: AMAZING
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Reviewed By: the amber dragonfly [MediaMiner Member] On: April 11, 2006 15:58 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Perfect yet again, my dear! I cannot tell you how much I enjoy reading your stories. You are truly one of the absolute best! Keep up the awe-inspiring work!
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Reviewed By: OROsan0677 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 11, 2006 15:40 CDT
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Ah, the puppy and kitty are finally together lol.
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Reviewed By: FireDemon86 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 11, 2006 15:35 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great chapter! I love it! But I don't think Gin is going to be to happy about not meeting Sydnie first. But wonderful cahpter and I can't wait to read more.
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Reviewed By: RisikaFox [MediaMiner Member] On: April 11, 2006 14:53 CDT
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Great chapter Sue, it was beautiful. *tear* Hehehe... I liked the part where Bas smashes the cell. ^^
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Reviewed By: Usagiseren05 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 11, 2006 14:50 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
So my guess is the story will be over within the next 2 maybe 3 chapters. So that means you'll be continuing on with the next story I liked the first chapter very much. Bas' little sister seems like a trip. Great Chapter like always.
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Title: Still made me cry...
Reviewed By: futekioosha [MediaMiner Member] On: April 10, 2006 21:16 CDT
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This chapter was just so poignant, I couldn't help but be moved to tears. It feels like this tale is coming to a close and I don't want it to end. I absolutely love how sydnie's character has developed and I really love the light moments you put in here between Ben and Bas. The end of the chapter with Jeb's mate was just outstanding. Her feelings were just so tangible, it's almost frightening how real it is. Thanks for the tears :-) Every girl needs to shed a tear or two everyonce in a while. Thanks for sharing! ~frankie
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