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| "The Soul Within" Reviews/Comments [ 241 ] | | Pages (17): [ « ‹ 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 11 12 13 14 15 16 17 › » ] | Reviewed By: Selenide88 On: July 28, 2006 21:17 CDT
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Man, what a chapter... Naraku's getting close. Too close. But, I can't wait to see how this all works out! Hopefully the spell will break, Kagome and everyone else will defeat Naraku, and InuYasha will stop being such an ass. I'll go with the first 2. :D Anyway, wonderful chapter! Can't wait for your next update... hope it's soon. Take it easy! -Selenide
| Reviewed By: Angel_of_Elements [MediaMiner Member] On: July 26, 2006 20:00 CDT
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Another great chapter. Die Naraku you lying, deceitful...::colorful words::!!!!
| Reviewed By: paju_13 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 26, 2006 16:14 CDT
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YAY!! I wonder how everyone is gonna react when they find out about Naraku. lol Can't wait!!
| Reviewed By: silveraliora [MediaMiner Member] On: July 26, 2006 13:33 CDT
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This story is really awsome! I just love it! It reminds me a little of Beauty and the Beast like you said, but it also reminds me of The Swan Princess. How she's a swan during the day and human during the night, or vise versa, i don't remember. I hope you update soon!
| Reviewed By: White Wolf of the Moon Deux [MediaMiner Member] On: July 26, 2006 08:38 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
White Wolf of the Moon: Yes it is me and my creations on a new thing, because for some mysterious reason i've been banned. Wolf: They said Horseshoe Casino was a chat fic whatever that happens to be. Julia: We are so going to kill those people who made us leave. Sita: Once again i agree with you. Loup: Still creepy to see you agree with each other. Ookami: Back to buisness the story is getting ever thicker with the new information are people have discoverd. White Wolf of the Moon: What people. Ookami: The other people you have yet to create. Julia: Don't say that there will soon to be more of us. White Wolf of the Moon: Not yet, and also any story i had on my other person will not be finnished, so sorry, but you finnish them the way you want, and what is a dang chat fic i was wrongly accused Horseshoe Casino was a commedy. Oh well don't let the people *officials* find out everyone please keep the new me to yourself. If you can please tell me what a chat fic is. Also just for the added effect this was a great chapter and we all can't wait till the next one.
| Title: elenacala
Reviewed By: elenacala [MediaMiner Member] On: July 25, 2006 23:21 CDT
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hmmm now i am intrigued even more.. what will inuyasha do when he finds out someone is after his kagome?!! i do wonder.. that i do...
| Reviewed By: Kitsune_magic_1 NSI On: July 25, 2006 23:05 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Sure! I'd love to do a drawing from the story! Just tell me which scene, and I'll do it, but if it's a moment that hasn't been written yet, you'll have to wait. Lol, well, back to the chapter! Extremely short, but a very big leap into the plot, in my opinion. Kikyo is a becoming a nuisance lol. Happy writing!
| Title: Yay!
Reviewed By: Aya Kazeki On: July 25, 2006 22:42 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
The plot thickens...dun dun dun! Its so exciting!I really can't wait to see what happens next! Its going to be great! Keep up the amazing work! Ja ne!
| Reviewed By: inuyasha-lover [MediaMiner Member] On: July 25, 2006 18:12 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
please up date soon i wish to see what hapens next. also here is some quotes:Love Your Enemies. "It Will Drive Them Crazy." , 'Knowledge is Power, power corrupts, Study hard, Be evil' , "4 of the 5 voices in my head say that i'm not crazy" , "First sign of insanity: Screaming at the voices inside your head." , "We're all insane, just some of us don't show it very much..." , "If life is being a bitch to you then bitch back!" , "Nothing loved is ever truly lost in death cause the pain is a small price to pay for memories..." , "I don't suffer from insanity, I enjoy every freaking minute of it!" , "Dreams are the substance which realities are made of." , "Nothing's wrong with me... The world's just sane. NOOOOOOOOO!" , "If money doesn't grow on trees, how come banks have branches?" , "When in danger or in doubt, run in circles, scream and shout!" , "I chouse to reject your reality and substitute with my own" , "It's only funny until someone gets hurt, then it's hilarious" , "Smile-It confuses people" , "Lead me not into temptation, I can find the way myself" , You know you're weird when you're having a snack, can't find a pencil, and think "Oh no! Did I EAT the pencil?" , "Never underestimate the power of stupid people in large numbers" i have a list of quotes and other stuff i have found and if you wish to read all of them just look at my user look up
| Reviewed By: White Wolf of the Moon [MediaMiner Member] On: July 14, 2006 09:57 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
White Wolf of the Moon: *looks at the empty room wondering where my creations are* It's to quiet. Wolf: *jumps up from under the couch with a loaded pistol in his hands* Die *fires like a madman* White Wolf of the Moon: *Uses my powers over the elements to make a shield* Wolf: O.o Not fair. Julia: Who said life was fair. Sita: For once i agree. Ookami: Who are you people those two never get along. Loup: We must be in an alternate universe wher black is white, boybands play instuments, and paris hilton is presedent. White Wolf of the Moon: Back to buisness This was an interesting chapter and we all loved it, also your ideas will most likely be present when i finish the next chapter. Wolf: What all those words for. White Wolf of the Moon: *hits him over the head* Oi vey no peace in my head. Sita: Yous should have just stuck with the first three. White Wolf of the Moon: Good idea, but once i create it canot be destroyed by me, it can only be destroyed by Yakasha Son of the Yakashini. Sita: No not my creator AHHHHHHHHHHHH *jumps out the window* Julia: I have found her weakness. Wolf: And we found your'se. Julia: *runs out of the room screaming* White Wolf of the Moon: Well goodnight and good news *music que for end of the news*
| Reviewed By: silverwolf halfbeast [MediaMiner Member] On: July 12, 2006 16:37 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Man, this story is nice. It kinda reminds me of "Beauty and The Beast" almost. Anyway its a great story and I hope you update soon.
| Reviewed By: animaygurl [MediaMiner Member] On: July 12, 2006 01:15 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Really really REALLY GOOD! I'm loving this story sooooo much!! PLease update update update! :D
| Reviewed By: Selenide88 On: July 11, 2006 22:08 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wonderful job, as usual! Haha, I guess Kagome forgot all about leaving after conversing with our favorite hanyou. Woo! Sorry.. anyway, I really can't wait to see what happens next! Damn Naraku... he was bound to screw things up sooner or later. It makes for a good plot, though. Until your next update!! take it easy!
| Reviewed By: Kitsune_Magic_1 (eatin breakfast lol) On: July 11, 2006 10:28 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
FINALLY!!! We get to see some fluff between InuYasha and Kagome!! Yesssss! Lol, this is one of your better chapters (not just because its longer). The arguement was exactly how I thought it would happen. I'll get the drawing to you ASAP, but I warn you; it isn't going to be the best thing seen. lol
| Reviewed By: DeadlySoulCaster being lazy bum XD On: July 11, 2006 01:21 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved it sooooooooooooooooooo much!!!!!! i cant wait for the next chapter, you have to keep writing i am dieing even though i just got finished reading another chapter XD' it is such a great story and even better Inuyasha version, great idea of doing it!!!!!!!!!!!!!! *ish drooling over next chapter* must read more chapters *turns into a mindless zombie until next chapter is written*
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