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Reviewed By: White Wolf of the Moon Deux [MediaMiner Member] On: December 16, 2006 22:19 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
White Wolf of the Moon: Hello and welcome back. If your reading this Your either the writer or really really bored. Now let me introduce my captivating panel of non-celebrites. Everyone: Hey we're celebrities in your head. White Wolf of the Moon: Just for that I'm introducing you all at once. Julia: Just want to save space. White Wolf of the Moon: *pulls out the old buzzer and every shuts up* Now here are my panel. Wolf, Ookami, Loup, Ray, Sita, and Julia *they all walk in and sit down waving to you* Panel how was this storie in your strike that my version of your oppinion because I own you. Wolf: Me thinks it was awesome and had a good twist at the end InuYasha's life hangs by a thread people have to come back and read the next one. Ookami: I thought it was good but she is right battle seens are hard to write aren't you *gets zapped* White Wolf of the Moon: Don't reveal my stories. loup: Good chapter to bad soon this will end and we will be just a memory again. Sita: Loups right this is a good story and shouldn't end you should do a follow up at the end of what happens a year later if they all live. Ray: I think Ohio is for Lovers and This story is one of the best I've read. White Wolf of the Moon: Stole my Hawthorne Heights CD again didn't you. Ray: *Nods then getts zapped* Hey. White Wolf of the Moon: You jerk you went in my room now I will have to hurt you. Ray: *runs out of the room screaming* Julia: *is making out with Luffy while everyone is talking* White Wolf of the Moon: Luffy get lost. Luffy: But I was looking for Zolo. Wolf: Down Julia throat. Luffy: She tricked me. Loup: Completly believable run along. White Wolf of the Moon: Julia just give your oppinion. Julia: The story was awesome and Luffy's a good kisser. White Wolf of the Moon: AHHHHHHH that's it I quite for the night *i walk out of the room and set it on fire* Oh yeah I'm apyro MUHAHAHAHAHA. Loup: Here *grabs the water elemental sword from my To the Death Story and tosses it to Wolf* Wolf: Uses the sword to make a rain clous and puts out the fire. Ookami: That mans is evil. Sita: No crap. White Wolf of the Moon: Just for that you all go to the closet for a week. Loup: I just came out of the closet a day ago why do I have to hide again. Ray: I knew he was gay. Loup: *steals my shocker and zapps ray* Wolf: We lost the point so G'night and G'news peace.
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Reviewed By: Akina315 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 16, 2006 16:34 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'd give you an eleven out of ten, but the stupid thing won't go any higher. Good chapter. I'm really looking forward to reading the next. Akina315
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Reviewed By: dudekiller [MediaMiner Member] On: December 16, 2006 13:27 CST
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i love this chap. awesome job. please please please update soon.
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Title: Sugoi!!
Reviewed By: AyaMorikana On: December 16, 2006 12:15 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
AMAZING as usual!! 10's all the way!! I'm so very excited for the next chapter!! *sighs* They just keep getting better and better!! Keep up the incredible work!! *hugs* ^^
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Reviewed By: silverwolf halfbeast [MediaMiner Member] On: December 16, 2006 12:11 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hell ya! you may think that battle scences are hard but you did a hell of a job at writing one. Update and keep up the good work.
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Reviewed By: Angel_of_Elements [MediaMiner Member] On: December 16, 2006 11:39 CST
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Wow, I was starting to tear-up. It would be amazing if you killed of one of the main characters in a story (not Naraku or an evil character). ::whistles:: Can't wait to read the next chapter!!!
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Reviewed By: silveraliora [MediaMiner Member] On: December 12, 2006 09:59 CST
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Great chapter! I don't know why I didn't read this chapter sooner. Please update soon!
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Reviewed By: White Wolf of the Moon Deux [MediaMiner Member] On: November 28, 2006 15:23 CST
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White Wolf of the Moon: The others seem to be entranced in my other stories today so it is only me sorry. I want to say this first off This story is getting close to an end I can feel it and well I don't want it to but all good things come to an end. Hope you write another good story cause this one was over good. Sorry for the boring review but like I said my slaves I mean creations are working I mean reading my other stories.
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Reviewed By: OrlandoLover [MediaMiner Member] On: November 28, 2006 11:23 CST
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ummmmmmmmmm chapter 20???u didnt actaully post a chapter...but besides that i loved it...update soon...SAVE THE EARTH IT'S THE ONLY PLANET WITH CHOCOLATE...Cheers
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Title: TSWistheBEST!!
Reviewed By: AyaMorikana On: November 26, 2006 18:38 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yet another AWESOME chapter fromt the master!! I am SO very excited for the next chapter things have really started to heat up!! ^_^ This is the BEST Inuyasha fanfic!! Like I've said before I'm totally hooked on it and everyone else should be too!! ..."The Clique" drawing is completely inked!! Color here I come!! Ja ne!!
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Reviewed By: paju_13 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 25, 2006 14:14 CST
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Ya Miroku kick his ass!! ha ha! Come on big finale with Inuyasha and Kagome! Beat the crap outta Naraku!
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Reviewed By: Kitsu-chan On: November 25, 2006 11:39 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
you doof! of course i'm Kitsune_Magic_1! =] Anyway, who's Goshinki? I know the name, but I don't remember what he looks like...oh well ^^ I know I'm right about one thing that's going to happen! NARAKU IS DEAD MEAT, SISTA! mwahahahahahahahaaaaa! I'll be quiet now X3 lol
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Reviewed By: Angel_of_Elements (NLI) On: November 24, 2006 20:34 CST
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Great chapter as always. A lot of things were going on at once!! @_@ lol I betcha Miroku is going to kick major ass!!! Woo!!
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Title: InuyashaNaruto
Reviewed By: InuyashaNaruto [MediaMiner Member] On: November 17, 2006 22:14 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I hope you update soon this is a good fic! ASAP update.
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Reviewed By: luxurious [MediaMiner Member] On: November 14, 2006 18:06 CST
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This is a really great story. I hope Kagome puts up a really good fight. And I hope Inuyasha turns Full evil on Naraku and Beats his Butt...lol. =]
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