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Title: priestessmykala
Reviewed By: STUPID MACHINE!! On: April 13, 2006 18:02 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i liked the chapter though i thought it to be way too short
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Reviewed By: White Wolf of the Moon [MediaMiner Member] On: April 13, 2006 14:41 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
White Wolf of the Moon: Sorry about my idiots review. All of them: HEY. White Wolf of the Moon: Well I'm here now to say what i need to. Nice story and we love to read it. Also my story will be put on hold for a while seeing as my muses have died away agian and school is taking up alot of my time I only am now getting enough time to add one paragraph a day. So just wait it will be up eventually. Ookami: Finnaly he stops >gets zapped< what was that for. White Wolf of the Moon: Oh you know. Loup: No tell us. Ray: He insulted the master so he had to pay. Wolf: All hail the master bow to him > all my creations bow< White Wolf of the Moon: Okay stop i need no bowing. Loup: He is so modest. White Wolf of the Moon: Why are you kissing up to me. Loup: >Puts away my notebook with my House of the Nine Dragons story in it< White Wolf of the Moon: Give that to me or suffer my variation of the 10 plauges. Loup: NO anything but that > he runs away but he gets tied up after a second< Now for the 10 plauges >I turn on his least favorite radio station 99.9< Loup: No not country AHHHHHHHHH. Wolf: Everyone laugh at him. Ray: Die Wolf > he pulls out some silver< Wolf: AHHHHHHHH get away from me. Ookami: Well thats enough from us and look more tens. Also we never review spelling and grammar.
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Reviewed By: White Wolf of the Moon [MediaMiner Member] On: April 13, 2006 12:23 CDT
Comment/Review:
Wolf: our master isn't here right now so we shall entertain you. Loup: Okay nice story still no corrections from us we love it. Ray: even me. Ookami: die vamp. >pulls out a real stake< Ray: AGHHHHHHHH leave me alone. Loup: we have to go now our master calls sorry for the small review we shall return.
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Reviewed By: paju_13 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 12, 2006 22:55 CDT
Comment/Review:
It's pretty good so far but you should make the chapters longer if you can. It's good and I can't wait for you to update!
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Reviewed By: xxSilentBeautyxx@hotmail.com On: April 12, 2006 22:01 CDT
Comment/Review:
LOL pure is impure and impure is pure? im really curious as to what the most pure act is...i have an idea, but i dont want to give it away so i wont list it here. thats a classic though, hehe i loved that line.
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Reviewed By: Angel_of_Elements (NSI) On: April 12, 2006 19:00 CDT
Comment/Review:
Wow, that chapter was pretty good. Great job as usual and can't wait what will happen next. You never say too much!!! :-P
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Reviewed By: Elwing On: April 07, 2006 18:01 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story is amazing! I absolutly love it! Please update as soon as possible! I can not wait to see what is in store for the charactures form this point on! :-)
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Reviewed By: Nomina [MediaMiner Member] On: April 04, 2006 16:26 CDT
Comment/Review:
Wonderful story but I want to see more Inuyasha and his cute puppy ears. Please update soon
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Reviewed By: xxSilentBeautyxx@hotmail.com On: April 03, 2006 07:11 CDT
Comment/Review:
very good, i dont know if i reviewed last chapter or not. i try to review, but sometimes i have a baby on my lap and dont get a chance to and then i forget to go back =/ so if i didnt review it wasnt because i didnt like it so much as i couldnt at the time and forgot to when i could >.< so sry. poor kaede! i bet shes worried sick now. and narakus such a jerk. good job in portraying him. that was perfect.
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Title: I love it!
Reviewed By: Selenide88 On: April 02, 2006 14:41 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Amazing storyline. I've read other stories that take on the plots of old, fantasy-related tales, but yours is by far one of the best. Great job. I've never read a story that takes on "Beauty and the Beast". I hope you'll update soon! take it easy. :D
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Title: oops!
Reviewed By: Kitsune_Magic_1 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 01, 2006 23:25 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG!! I forgot!!! Here are your tens! ^-^;
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Reviewed By: Kitsune_Magic_1 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 01, 2006 23:22 CST
Comment/Review:
Second to review isn't all that bad . . . . UGH!!! Your chapters are way too short! Oh well . . . I'm glad we got to see some of the story from Koga- I mean Naraku's- point of view. Very good. Poor Kaede, she must be worried sick now. Great work with chapter three! Most of your chapters are . . . what do you call 'em? Arg, I just took a test on these! . . . Oh yeah!! Infintive phrases!! I'm not sure whether you know what those are, but whatever . . . Again, great job! Post again sooner than two weeks from mow!
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Reviewed By: White Wolf of the Moon [MediaMiner Member] On: April 01, 2006 20:48 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
White Wolf of the Moon: That made me feel sad really sad. Loup: Me to. Ookami: Okay don't go changing it was awesome. Wolf: We still love your work. Ray: So please read my new story House of the Nine Dragons >gets zapped< White Wolf of the Moon: Don't beg her that's wrong, but will you please. Loup: That's over and we feel awesome. White Wolf of the Moon: Two chapters in one day also I hate Naraku and Kikyo. Loup: All lovers of them will be killed >picks up a bazooka and fires it at the growing crowds< No one who likes them will live evcept you awesome writter. Wolf: We can forgive you if you do. White Wolf of the Moon: I always kill her in my stories. Ray: Just like a wolf. Wolf: Shut it you stupid vampire. Loup: die. Ray: Use the right stake for once ahhhhhhh I'm surrounded by idiots. Loup, Wolf, and Ookami: Die Vampire >all holding wooden stakes and gett shocked and lit on fire< White Wolf of the Moon: MUHAHAHAHAHAHA. Ray: Well we're all of track now so bye till l8er
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Reviewed By: Angel_of_Elements [MediaMiner Member] On: April 01, 2006 16:28 CST
Comment/Review:
Hm, that was interesting. I can't wait to see what Kagome has up in her sleeves!
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Reviewed By: Kitsune_Magic_1 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 25, 2006 12:03 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMFG, I'm soooooo sorry for not posting a review, but it said that the thing was posted!! Not my fault . . . lol. Anyway, about the fic . . . It's really great so far, like everyone says!! InuYasha is being nice in his own way, and I like, no LOVE, the plot. Sorry I didn't say so before, lol. Luv ya, and talk to you tomorrow!! ~Kitsune_Magic_1~
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