| "The Soul Within" Reviews/Comments [ 241 ] |
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Reviewed By: Angle_of_Fire! On: March 01, 2006 18:06 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
The story Rocks plz keep writing so i wont be bored 24-7 but other then that the story is awesome!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: the_random_obsessor(not logged in) On: February 28, 2006 20:17 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i loved the poetry! especially the rhyming, as i cant rhyme. now i can't wait for the next chapter! i wonder how the poems ties the others too... it was great! keep up the good work!
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Title: AWESOME!
Reviewed By: inukagpuppylove (not logged in) On: February 28, 2006 17:12 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
you still continue to amaze me!!! that spell is very well written! i wonder how they're all tied to that scroll?? hmmmm....i guess i'll just have to find out won't i????? ^_^
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Reviewed By: xxSilentBeautyxx@hotmail.com On: February 28, 2006 13:24 CST
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good start, i love the beauty and the beast concept. it fits so well
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Reviewed By: ardent On: February 28, 2006 13:02 CST
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Oooooooooooooooooooooooooooo! Very interesting, and damn, that's a great poem/spell! Gave me shivers! 'Course that could be the cold I have...nah! Can't wait to read more~Sami
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Title: Love it
Reviewed By: Angel~of~Fire On: February 28, 2006 02:19 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I LOVED IT please please update really soon
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Reviewed By: i_kill_faeries_cause_im_evil (NSI) On: February 27, 2006 20:00 CST
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wow, great story, keep up the kickass work!
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Title: ItJustKeepsGettingBetter
Reviewed By: AyaMorikana On: February 27, 2006 19:36 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It's really getting good, I really can't wait till there's more! I am SO hooked on this story! Keep up the great work! You're a wonderful writer!
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Reviewed By: White Wolf of the Moon [MediaMiner Member] On: February 27, 2006 18:50 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
All 10's good job. No late review today egh. yep no more lateness. blah blah blah blah blah blah. Wolf: He goes on and on and on. Loup: I agree. Ookami: Same here. Wolf: My appologies my name is wolf hikari to theses yamis of mine created by White Wolf of the Moon. Loup: And we appologize if we're just repeating ourselves. Wolf: Nice story good plot still surprizes oi. Ookami: It's getting better and better and better. Loup: Yes and we still suck at skateboarding. Wolf: We're learning so shut it. Ookami: We stick to vert so we don't have to do street. White Wolf of the Moon: No go back in my head you wern't supposed to get out until later. Loup: Baka creator. Wolf: we shall not be moved. White Wolf of the Moon: Okay only since its almost Mardi Gras= Fat Tuesday i just learned that. Wolf: total waste of space. White Wolf of the Moon: Well good story can't wait for the next update and i'm very sorry if in any way this review confused you. Loup: Which it will. Ookami: very very badly. White Wolf of the Moon: time to go (gets on a bull and startes to heard them) bye till you update and still keep up the good work good ideas come and any good reader can wait till you want to update to read this great story, and thanks for the inspiring words of comfort Godbye ill later for real.
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Reviewed By: Kitsune_Magic_1 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 27, 2006 18:22 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Christina, another great chapter!! Well done, girl! I'm glad Shippo's himself in this one. . . and he's actualy a kitsune. I'll TTYL online, K? ~Kitsune_Magic_1~
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Title: Yo
Reviewed By: HigherBeing [MediaMiner Member] On: February 27, 2006 17:53 CST
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Nessie, eh? I named my computer too! ^_^ His name is Alphonse!... and FYI, I named my iPod too. His name is Noodles. There is a story behind Noodles. You see, my dad was planning to get me Noddles for the holidays, but when he tried looking for an iPod to grant me, he couldn't find one! Soooo, he ordered one dirrectly from China! Therefore I thought: "Well, it came from Asia... So my iPod is asian, why not call it 'Noodles'?" Just thought like sharing something. *see's you look at me oddly* What? I didn't want to fell left out... (and of course, update) ^_~
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Reviewed By: Angel_of_Elements (NLI) On: February 27, 2006 17:34 CST
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DAMN!!!! I cringed when I read that Kagome broke her wrist. It was a very interesting chapter and a real nice spell. Can't wait for the next chapter.
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Reviewed By: White Wolf of the Moon (forgot to log in) On: February 19, 2006 20:33 CST
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I'm really sorry i haven't been able to review but school is hell and i just couln't find any time. Still i reviewed and i feel better. Nice cliffy it will make anybody who reads your stories 'coughevryonecough' review hopefully. I may be a little optomistic but i like that. Well i have to wrap this up i'm trying to learn how to skateboard so until next time. Yes i know it's late and i don't care
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Reviewed By: kitten meru On: February 18, 2006 09:13 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i'm back, and ready to review. i liked forever yours a LOT, and this one is no different. i like the story, it has a good plot! it's kinda confusing, but that's only to be expected of you, right? i thought the inu-youkai was sesshy, not inu, but that's what makes the story so COOL! update please! :D
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Reviewed By: Kitsune_Magic_1 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 14, 2006 16:42 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Thanx for the E-mail, but you said that you would explain why Inu was full-youkai! I am very confused . . . oh well. Great story and I love the cliffies! You surely are the "Queen." lol
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