| "The Soul Within" Reviews/Comments [ 241 ] |
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Title: xxSilentBeautyxx@hotmail.com
Reviewed By: seiai(nsi) On: May 11, 2006 19:01 CDT
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hehe, just when you think inu likes kags, he tells her to go home! great chapter
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Reviewed By: White Wolf of the Moon [MediaMiner Member] On: May 10, 2006 20:38 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
White Wolf of the Moon: Hello great author person people or anthing in between. Loup: It be my job to do the praise. Wolf: Aye it be that way. Ookami: Speak normal english. Loup: No i can't ye and we be going to the renesace festival. Sita: There be deamons and vampires and whatnot. Ray: Aye there also be oldy type thigs. White Wolf of the Moon: Like a nuse and maybe a guillotine. Loup: I've used one of those in my time. White Wolf of the Moon: Aye be sorry to ye but i have not been able to write up me second chapter yet. Other things be taking up me time but i promise that i will start to update maybe at the end of school. Ray: Why ye be startin then. White Wolf of the Moon: Me friend Rodrick be using up all me creative muses. Wolf: Allow me to attack him. Loup: No me. White Wolf of the Moon: No you morons he be my friend. Oh yeah me forget that me needed to tell ye that the story of ye's be awsome and i will keep readding your work for the rest of almost my full half-life on earth. Ookami: Oh yes guess what. White Wolf of the Moon: What. Ookami: You're it *he taggs me* White Wolf of the Moon: NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO Wolf now you're it *i tag him* Sita: Well that's all from the creative mind of my brothers creator. We'll be back when the wheel turns or some other type of anallogy.
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Title: elenacala
Reviewed By: elenacala [MediaMiner Member] On: May 10, 2006 20:18 CDT
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wow this story is awesome!! Beauty and the beast is one of my favorites and this story is so creative, its similar but can stand on its own!! Great job and please update soon?
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Reviewed By: bunny3km [MediaMiner Member] On: May 10, 2006 18:55 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Thank you for updating, I've just finish reading this chapter and I want to know what happens next. You have a talent for leaving a cliffhanger, also please update soon.
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Reviewed By: paju_13 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 10, 2006 17:43 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Good story I can't wait for the next update soooo...yea...keep it up.
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Reviewed By: Angel_of_Elements (NLI) On: May 10, 2006 16:52 CDT
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Aww, it was going so sweet until he ruined the moment, 'You should go home.' What crap is that? Can't wait to see the next chapter.
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Title: To Speak
Reviewed By: Kitsune_Magic_1 (Not logged in this time lol) On: May 10, 2006 15:53 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You know the reat are tens lol. Why, why, why, why, WHY DO YOU TORTURE US (the fans and me)??! InuYasha may be antisocial at the moment, but you don't have to make him so . . so . . I don't know the word, but you know what I mean! -_-; At least they met and InuYasha didn't try to kill her . . ^-^ Good job anyway! It's ironic that I'm talking to you online at the very moment I'm posting this! lmao
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Reviewed By: Fullmoon's wings On: May 02, 2006 00:05 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i have just finished reading and i would LOVE for you to update! it is such a good story and you need to keep it going. I want to know why she screamed T.T. Please update soon!
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Reviewed By: xxSilentBeautyxx@hotmail.com On: April 29, 2006 09:27 CDT
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hmm i wonder what happened. goodjob on this chapter.
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Reviewed By: bunny2km [MediaMiner Member] On: April 27, 2006 20:51 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I've just finish reading the eight chapters of the Soul Within. I happy to say that I'd enjoy your new spin of Iunyasha: a Feudal fairy-tale. I really enjoy your writing skills I was just sucked right into the plot, you gave good descriptions. I want to know what happens next, I hope you'll update soon.
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Reviewed By: paju_13 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 26, 2006 23:35 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh you evil evil thing!! That cliffy was...was...well a cliffy and I hate being left hangin'. Well the story is good so far keep up the good work I can't wait for the update!
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Reviewed By: Angel_of_Elements (NLI) On: April 26, 2006 18:38 CDT
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OMG....the Cliffy Queen has returned!!! Everybody, pick up your torches and weapons!!! I must know what will happen next cause I love this story!! ::tries to investigates what Kagome is screaming about and author pushes nosey person away:: grrr...
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Reviewed By: White Wolf of the Moon [MediaMiner Member] On: April 26, 2006 17:15 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wolf: The master is busy overviewing his new work on the second story thing. Loup: tell me did he just make any sense. Ookami: No he didn't. Sita: How rude not to invite me. Ray: Sorry sis they just left. Ookami: We all loved the update, and would you please go read i quote our new story CAMP OF THE HIDDEN DEMONS 2: REVENGE OF THE CURSED MIKO. Wolf: To loud to loud. White Wolf of the Moon: What the hell are you idiots excluding ray and Sita doing. Wolf: Why not them. White Wolf of the Moon: They waited for me to get here. Sita: Yes we did. Ray: he we are more loved now. Loup: *off crying in the corner* White Wolf of the Moon: Don't cry Loup i really actually hate ray fiercly all i did was read a book and he appeared. Loup: Okay. Wolf: Okay now that we is done can we leave. Ookami: No i just got here. White Wolf of the Moon: Goodbye great author and please do read my new story.
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Title: Chapter 8
Reviewed By: Kitsune_Magic_1 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 26, 2006 15:48 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
haha! I'm the last to review the chapter before, now I'm the first to review chapter 8!!!! It's about time you posted this! I can see why Kagome screamed like Naraku (supposedly the 'devil'lol) was after her. I'd be terrified too! Seriously, your chapters are WAY too short! The cliffie keeps me here though. That and the fact that I can't possibly not read this anyway! It's terrificly wonderful! Post real soon, okay? This is extremely random, but I posted a fanart! Well, it's not really fanart cause of what the drawing is, but oh well. Review it, k? TTYL!
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Reviewed By: Kitsune_Magic_1 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 14, 2006 19:17 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
NOOOO!!!!! I'm, like, way late on reviewing!!But don't worry, I'll eventually review your new chapters, even though I probably won't be the first every time lol. Sorry for scaring you lol. Kikyo actually said something along the lines of that impure is pure thing that she said on the TV! lol I've never seen that before. Kikyo's a bitch (pardon me lol) no matter how you look at it lol. InuYasha reacted just like the Beast did in the movie! OMG great job with that! I wouldn't want to marry Naraku either! Poor Kagome :( Hopefully, I'll talk to you soon? lol Update soon! ~Kitsune_Magic_1~
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