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Reviewed By: White Wolf of the Moon Deux [MediaMiner Member] On: January 07, 2007 01:12 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
White Wolf of the Moon: I will go first because they are currently locked outside. Yes alas the story is comming to an end and that will be bad but still good. All the loose ends tied and everything accounted for. Now yes I am a good write but a stupid one at times. I forgot to save my first chaper of my to the death story and lost it and then copied the fifth chapter over that one. So i deleted it. Oh well Now i will just tell the story of Rama and Crena my creations. Crena is new Rama is well not as new. Rama is like ray in a sense except more evil. *the door to my room bursts and my creations walk in al carrying guns* Wolf: You did the review without us. White Wolf of the Moon: Uh I can explain. Wolf: Die you sick basterd *he yells as he begind to fire off two bazookas at me but i run and avoid him blowing my head off* Loup: Attack. Julia: Why should we follow you. Loup: Cause I am related to Marco Polo. Ray: I love that game. Sita: No the person brother. Ray: Oh, but he lost bad. Loup: But he survived getting poisoned Everyone including me: 0.0. Loup: Charge and kill him for leaving us out. Sita: *charges after me grabbing my wrists and hancuffs me* Wolf: *ties my feet together* Ray: steals my shocker and puts a shock collar on my neck. Ookami: *sits in the corner smoking a cigar like a crime lord* I will give you an offer you cannot no will not refuse MuHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA. White Wolf of the Moon: How about this *i pull a magic button out of my sleeve and Atemu Seto and Malik appear with the Obolisk, Slypher, and Ra in a real form* I win. Loup: retreat *they all run out of the room like scarred children* White Wolf of the Moon: Thanks * pull off the collar and grab my giant buzzer and press the red button hearing a scream from all of them* My day is over now Good night.
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Reviewed By: Angel_of_Elements (NLI) On: January 06, 2007 23:24 CST
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I know you can't kill off any of your characters, but still...that would be interesting. Another good chapter, can't wait till the next.
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Reviewed By: paju_13 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 06, 2007 19:57 CST
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Another good chapter. I can't wait for the next one!
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Reviewed By: OrlandoLover [MediaMiner Member] On: January 06, 2007 19:44 CST
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Lmao...well i dont no about that, lol, im just kidding...anyways i loved it...update soon...SAVE THE EARTH IT'S THE ONLY PLANET WITH CHOCOLATE...Cheers
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Reviewed By: dudekiller [MediaMiner Member] On: January 06, 2007 08:15 CST
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this is a cool chap. good job. please update soon.
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Reviewed By: silverwolf halfbeast [MediaMiner Member] On: January 06, 2007 07:26 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well at least he'll be fine, until sun rise of course. But something tells me that something big is going to happen and soon. So hope you update and I hoped you had a better holiday than me.
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Reviewed By: Kitsu-chan On: January 05, 2007 23:10 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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OMG OMG OMG OMG INUYASHA CAN'T DIIIIIIIE!!!!!! And i know you won't kill off the cute one =P No poison is allowed, you know that! *sigh* Naraku is dead! D-E-D ded! mwahahaha *very hyper* =D
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Title: *huge grin*
Reviewed By: AyaMorikana On: January 05, 2007 22:49 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
The dawn won't come soon enough!! Your Highness of Cliffies!! Another wonderful chapter, can't wait for the next!! Keep up the amazing work!! Ja ne!!
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Reviewed By: White Wolf of the Moon Deux [MediaMiner Member] On: December 23, 2006 22:54 CST
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I just remebered something Roses are red, violets are blue, If InuYasha dies, Someone will kill you more than likely some crazed fan girl and or yaoi fan dunno but hey it's your story just laying the facts
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Reviewed By: kitsu-chan On: December 19, 2006 15:34 CST
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there are two "a second"s in that sentence, it just didn't show for some reason X3
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Reviewed By: Kitsu-chan On: December 19, 2006 15:28 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It took a second for Kagome to comprehend what Naraku had said. That's the only error I found in this chapter ;P I hate writing battle scenes!! gah! It's taking me forever to write the one-shot I promised you, but it's coming! Maybe it could be a Christmas present now...
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Reviewed By: madosie [MediaMiner Member] On: December 17, 2006 16:22 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Aw, this story totally delights me! It's been fun, intense, and you've done a good job of developing the quirkiness of the characters in the short amount of chapters you have. I'm excited to read the next chapter with everything hanging by a thread there. Great work and thanks much!
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Reviewed By: silveraliora [MediaMiner Member] On: December 17, 2006 14:13 CST
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Great chapter! Yea, Naraku's finally dead! Please update soon! I can't wait to find out what happens between Kagome and Inuyasha.
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Reviewed By: paju_13 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 17, 2006 11:11 CST
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Don't let themm die!! I mean Kagome can be close and maybe Inuyasha has a way to save her but he can't die!! Love the story! Update soon!!
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Reviewed By: OrlandoLover [MediaMiner Member] On: December 17, 2006 10:07 CST
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awwwwwwwwwww he cant die! thats just not cool...anyways i loved it...update soon...SAVE THE EARTH IT'S THE ONLY PLANET WITH CHOCOLATE...Cheers
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