| "The Soul Within" Reviews/Comments [ 241 ] |
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Reviewed By: Angel_of_Elements (NLI) On: January 06, 2007 23:24 CST
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I know you can't kill off any of your characters, but still...that would be interesting. Another good chapter, can't wait till the next.
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Reviewed By: paju_13 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 06, 2007 19:57 CST
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Another good chapter. I can't wait for the next one!
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Reviewed By: OrlandoLover [MediaMiner Member] On: January 06, 2007 19:44 CST
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Lmao...well i dont no about that, lol, im just kidding...anyways i loved it...update soon...SAVE THE EARTH IT'S THE ONLY PLANET WITH CHOCOLATE...Cheers
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Reviewed By: dudekiller [MediaMiner Member] On: January 06, 2007 08:15 CST
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this is a cool chap. good job. please update soon.
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Reviewed By: silverwolf halfbeast [MediaMiner Member] On: January 06, 2007 07:26 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well at least he'll be fine, until sun rise of course. But something tells me that something big is going to happen and soon. So hope you update and I hoped you had a better holiday than me.
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Reviewed By: Kitsu-chan On: January 05, 2007 23:10 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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OMG OMG OMG OMG INUYASHA CAN'T DIIIIIIIE!!!!!! And i know you won't kill off the cute one =P No poison is allowed, you know that! *sigh* Naraku is dead! D-E-D ded! mwahahaha *very hyper* =D
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Title: *huge grin*
Reviewed By: AyaMorikana On: January 05, 2007 22:49 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
The dawn won't come soon enough!! Your Highness of Cliffies!! Another wonderful chapter, can't wait for the next!! Keep up the amazing work!! Ja ne!!
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Reviewed By: White Wolf of the Moon Deux [MediaMiner Member] On: December 23, 2006 22:54 CST
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I just remebered something Roses are red, violets are blue, If InuYasha dies, Someone will kill you more than likely some crazed fan girl and or yaoi fan dunno but hey it's your story just laying the facts
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Reviewed By: kitsu-chan On: December 19, 2006 15:34 CST
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there are two "a second"s in that sentence, it just didn't show for some reason X3
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Reviewed By: Kitsu-chan On: December 19, 2006 15:28 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It took a second for Kagome to comprehend what Naraku had said. That's the only error I found in this chapter ;P I hate writing battle scenes!! gah! It's taking me forever to write the one-shot I promised you, but it's coming! Maybe it could be a Christmas present now...
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Reviewed By: madosie [MediaMiner Member] On: December 17, 2006 16:22 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Aw, this story totally delights me! It's been fun, intense, and you've done a good job of developing the quirkiness of the characters in the short amount of chapters you have. I'm excited to read the next chapter with everything hanging by a thread there. Great work and thanks much!
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Reviewed By: silveraliora [MediaMiner Member] On: December 17, 2006 14:13 CST
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Great chapter! Yea, Naraku's finally dead! Please update soon! I can't wait to find out what happens between Kagome and Inuyasha.
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Reviewed By: paju_13 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 17, 2006 11:11 CST
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Don't let themm die!! I mean Kagome can be close and maybe Inuyasha has a way to save her but he can't die!! Love the story! Update soon!!
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Reviewed By: OrlandoLover [MediaMiner Member] On: December 17, 2006 10:07 CST
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awwwwwwwwwww he cant die! thats just not cool...anyways i loved it...update soon...SAVE THE EARTH IT'S THE ONLY PLANET WITH CHOCOLATE...Cheers
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Reviewed By: White Wolf of the Moon Deux [MediaMiner Member] On: December 16, 2006 22:19 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
White Wolf of the Moon: Hello and welcome back. If your reading this Your either the writer or really really bored. Now let me introduce my captivating panel of non-celebrites. Everyone: Hey we're celebrities in your head. White Wolf of the Moon: Just for that I'm introducing you all at once. Julia: Just want to save space. White Wolf of the Moon: *pulls out the old buzzer and every shuts up* Now here are my panel. Wolf, Ookami, Loup, Ray, Sita, and Julia *they all walk in and sit down waving to you* Panel how was this storie in your strike that my version of your oppinion because I own you. Wolf: Me thinks it was awesome and had a good twist at the end InuYasha's life hangs by a thread people have to come back and read the next one. Ookami: I thought it was good but she is right battle seens are hard to write aren't you *gets zapped* White Wolf of the Moon: Don't reveal my stories. loup: Good chapter to bad soon this will end and we will be just a memory again. Sita: Loups right this is a good story and shouldn't end you should do a follow up at the end of what happens a year later if they all live. Ray: I think Ohio is for Lovers and This story is one of the best I've read. White Wolf of the Moon: Stole my Hawthorne Heights CD again didn't you. Ray: *Nods then getts zapped* Hey. White Wolf of the Moon: You jerk you went in my room now I will have to hurt you. Ray: *runs out of the room screaming* Julia: *is making out with Luffy while everyone is talking* White Wolf of the Moon: Luffy get lost. Luffy: But I was looking for Zolo. Wolf: Down Julia throat. Luffy: She tricked me. Loup: Completly believable run along. White Wolf of the Moon: Julia just give your oppinion. Julia: The story was awesome and Luffy's a good kisser. White Wolf of the Moon: AHHHHHHH that's it I quite for the night *i walk out of the room and set it on fire* Oh yeah I'm apyro MUHAHAHAHAHA. Loup: Here *grabs the water elemental sword from my To the Death Story and tosses it to Wolf* Wolf: Uses the sword to make a rain clous and puts out the fire. Ookami: That mans is evil. Sita: No crap. White Wolf of the Moon: Just for that you all go to the closet for a week. Loup: I just came out of the closet a day ago why do I have to hide again. Ray: I knew he was gay. Loup: *steals my shocker and zapps ray* Wolf: We lost the point so G'night and G'news peace.
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