| "To Shed a Little Light" Reviews/Comments [ 141 ] |
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Reviewed By: Ichisakuraki Reiosamuka On: March 15, 2010 03:12 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like this one much better, as it's miore... in depth... Haha...! I really like this chap... That's how I would be... "She was fully aware that she was bribing a child with sweets to have alone time with her lover" I think that's what it was... I'm going by memory here... :D Unti the End of the End, my Friend...
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Title: Interesting!
Reviewed By: napris [MediaMiner Member] On: June 03, 2009 18:33 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ooey, I definitely like this system of reviewing over FF.net's because it's a lot easier to convey stuff over. I made an account just for this story of yours, btw. Anyhow, your story was very interesting and erotic, kicking off from your oneshot. =D I totally caught onto the Eros and Psyche outline around before she saw his face with the penlight. Neat trick, btw, using my (probably?) FAVORITE myth ever. :D Style of writing was only a six because it's not terrible, but instead, very average. Style doesn't really matter much in an erotic fic like this, so don't worry about it. =/ I like your story well enough without any special effects. Spelling&Grammar was pretty good. I don't remember every sp/gr mistake, but it didn't frustrate me at all reading your fiction. Originality/Creativity; I don't care how many times people make fun of the cliched SesshoumaruxKagome plots. The mate thing, the spontaneous attraction, hell, the sex. I love it all. Can't get enough of it. And again, I love the Psyche thing you did. Enjoyment factor: I don't think I read this story all the way through just for the sex scenes. I really wanted to find out if Kagome was going to betray her mysterious lover by seeing him, and I wanted to see her reaction to Sesshoumaru's identity. However, all the scenes with Naraku pained me to read because Kagome had to sacrifice her honesty and loyalty. Eek. The story was interesting. :D I loved how you wrote Sesshoumaru as "distressed" because she found out it was him. The romantic in me immediately pounced on that and thought "HE DOESN'T WANT HER TO LEEEAAVE HIIIMM!! HE THINKS SHE THINKS HE'S A MONSTERRRR SO HE CLAAIIIMED HERRR!!" Nyahaha. That's always warm and fuzzy to read about. Good job!! :) (goes off to hunt for more fanfics to read)
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Reviewed By: Lady Sianna [MediaMiner Member] On: May 25, 2009 17:54 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Don't be alarmed when I say this, but I think I love you! This story was AWESOME!!! I enjoyed every moment of it, and burst out laughing several times, and was left fully satisfied by the end. I apologze for the two for one review, but Darkness was awsesome as well. I am so glad you decided to add more to it! You are a fantastic writer, and I can only imagine that your newer stories are probably even better! You have have a fangirl in me, that's for sure! I really enjoy your writing style, and the intersting plots you have used. I could go on and on, but I won't bore you with my ridiculous fangirl gushing. ^_^' Again, fantastic job!!
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Title: fiction
Reviewed By: Hesunohana On: April 13, 2009 16:04 EDT
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I firt read the OS and then the sequel. so fun, so full of smex and all... well-written too. a shame that Inuyasha killed her. bravo !
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Reviewed By: DemonandGoddess4ever [MediaMiner Member] On: October 05, 2008 17:48 EDT
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I love the way you mix comedy, seriousness, and romance together!!
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Reviewed By: Snowfall [MediaMiner Member] On: April 18, 2008 19:15 EDT
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I love this story, as well as 'Darkness'. You have a great sense of humor. I have a request. Because fics many times disappear, or I can't find them due to my bad memory, I've begun a project of copying stories to my hard drive and making a backup. However, I ask first. Would you mind if I copied your fics? Thanks! ^_^ Snow
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Reviewed By: loretta537 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 09, 2008 21:33 EDT
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this was a great story! i would really like to know how kagome's mom takes her marriage, also what happens now that she's married? how do they get the jewel and what wish does inuyasha make? please write more.
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Reviewed By: catherine! On: September 29, 2007 13:21 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ha ha awh wicked! loved them both!! (stories tho i didnt review darkness) keep writing!!
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Title: Jade Lotus
Reviewed By: Jade Lotus [MediaMiner Member] On: August 02, 2007 05:18 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved this story!!! Freaking awesome! I really liked the part where inuyasha attacked Kagome. It was unexpected (at least to me) but I loved it!! Awesome Job!!
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Title: blacks sex kitten
Reviewed By: red heather On: March 19, 2007 22:14 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 5 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this was awsome i love lemony goodness and sesshomaru and kagome will always be my fave pairing love ur story!
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Title: Darkserenity07@yahoo
Reviewed By: darkserenity07 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 27, 2007 00:35 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved your story it was definatly a serious attention getter lol! Hope to read more from you.
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Reviewed By: chelsitzJr On: January 04, 2007 01:33 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was an amazingly romantic fic :D i just adored it.
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Reviewed By: x-vAmPiRe-LoVeR [MediaMiner Member] On: October 22, 2006 17:49 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i loved this story i was on fanfiction.com and saw that you had the full version someplace else to i looked into it...i give you and A++ on this story!
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Reviewed By: Trini421 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 21, 2006 11:07 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this story.
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Reviewed By: freakhorrorchick [MediaMiner Member] On: August 30, 2006 17:47 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
what!!!!Thats all you updated!!!I want more!!Lemons!!!!Must have more!!!!I guess im going to have to send my sexy beast after you.
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