| "To Shed a Little Light" Reviews/Comments [ 141 ] |
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Reviewed By: madosie [MediaMiner Member] On: August 26, 2006 22:22 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wonderful! This has just been too addicting. I was mildly disturbed by Kagome's poor choice in giving shards to the enemy rather than having Inuyasha find out which seems nonsensical to me, as well as, Inuyasha killing her which was shcoking. Besdies those points it was great. I loved the whole secret lover thing with him sneaking around and taking her. The acceptance of him through her transfer of power was also creative, if not somewhat romantic! Ok and the final scene? That was what I would call exquisite fluff. Sesshoumaru shaking grass out of his hair that she threw at him was so childish and sweet. His little grin was so cute...I really enjoyed this as well as the previous one-shot. Terrific work! And now I am on to read more of your stuff, thanks!!
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Reviewed By: Lady Multi On: July 22, 2006 03:35 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I LOVE YOU~! I LOVE YOU~! I LOVE YOU~! I LOVE YOU~! ... Okay, so I've just read it all and am overly hyper, but I loved it to death~! **dies**
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Reviewed By: Laurell-chan(still not signed in) On: July 12, 2006 15:16 EDT
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Wow that was so great! I enjoyed it very much, including the ending. I think you stopped it at a nice point and didn't drag things out; the story had a nice pace to it. The lemons of course were AMAZING but more importantly, you integrated them into a serious story line flawlessly. Great job, I still can't believe you got so much done in only 10 chapters, two big thumbs up from a happy reader.
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Reviewed By: Puyopuyo On: July 06, 2006 15:02 EDT
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow, i was REALLY impressed with this fic and darkness!! they're easily two of the best fics i've read in a LONG time!!
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Title: WOW
Reviewed By: ashimi On: June 15, 2006 00:51 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW! that was good. i loved Darkness but this was SO much better. i think this has got to be one of my favorite fics of all time! ^_^ u i did an exellent job writing this!
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Reviewed By: gretel_chan [MediaMiner Member] On: June 13, 2006 19:28 EDT
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Lovely, lovely end to this fic. I was wondering how you were going to resolve all of it. I know the 'porn that turned into story' thing, about half my long stories did that on me :). Nice work, thanks for writing.
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Title: What Happened?!
Reviewed By: One-Disappointed Fan On: June 13, 2006 01:57 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 5 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow. That was a major let down. So creative, so original, such a great twist on a great myth - But what was with the rushed, pointless, out-of-character, sappy ending? Darkness and To Shed A Little Light will always be among my favs but I'll u>skip the final chapter. All along I've admired the believable interactions, your dead on portrayal of a realistic 'modern-chic' Kagome, the clever twists and ad-ons to a pre-existing plot and then KABOOM! Straight to Fluffy Fan-girl Kitsch. You are an author, lady, and a million times better than this.
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Title: I loved it!
Reviewed By: Ashley (AW555) On: June 09, 2006 20:56 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved it! I'm sad to see it end though but it was a great story and thank you so much for writting it! If you have any other Kagome X Sesshomaru stories will you please email me at ashleywilson123@hotmail.com. Thanks and again great story!
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Reviewed By: golden_kitsune (too lazy to sign into her account) On: June 09, 2006 11:24 EDT
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Wow, great story, I will be looking out for more. I didn't actually know the myth, am I the only one? *Whistles*
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Reviewed By: silver miko a.k.a Kit On: June 09, 2006 01:45 EDT
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i was grat!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! write more stories plez
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Title: Love it
Reviewed By: kkdl On: June 08, 2006 19:26 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love your story, I cant wait for the next chapter. Please dont make Sesshy go all Lovey-dovey to kagome completly. I myself Love the cold domineering Lord Sesshomaru. But hey it is your story. ;) Loving it.
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Title: Fun Until the End
Reviewed By: brower47 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 08, 2006 07:41 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
What a great story and very well done. I had the whole cupid thing in mind for the longest time until it continued after she revealed him, then I wasn't sure. I'm glad you put your own twist on it, I always found that tale a little depressing. Well, now that you've finished this one, do you have another in mind? So far, I think I've enjoyed every one of your stories and I'd be there for a second if you write agian. Good luck, thanks for finishing your stories and have a great life.
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Reviewed By: Keke On: June 08, 2006 02:54 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow! I am speechless…. I was surprised and freaking out over how things turned out. I am sad to see the story end but happy to know the ending. I went through so many emotions reading this chapter… You are an excellent writer! I loved it… and a happy ending!!! I hope to see more of your work. Please don't stop writing.
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Reviewed By: AngelsRebellion [MediaMiner Member] On: June 08, 2006 02:45 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
T.T it's over ::cries:: That was really good. I was ready to bitch you out if you killed of my hanyou, but you didn't, so I still love you. I love Sesshy's "I changed my mind" in the end. It was oddly, very sweet. But no lemon? No make-up sex? No sweet goodbye? Oh well.
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Reviewed By: its all good On: June 08, 2006 01:34 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That waz pretty good. can't wait for another story from you
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