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Reviewed By: pokiepal [MediaMiner Member] On: February 28, 2007 20:07 PST
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Way to go!!!! I was so excided to see another new chapter in my invoice!!! I am so happy that kaede made it through the night!! How did she knkow that it was INU that did anything at all. I can't wait to see what happens next. don't give up it is a great story!!!
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Reviewed By: loulou4729 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 28, 2007 19:45 PST
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Glad to see you writing again. I have to say that I can not WAIT for Inuyasha to mark Kagome. To say that that will will be steamy is an understatement. His Youki is going to go crazy. Anywho...can't wait to see more.
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Reviewed By: Queen_ofhearts On: February 28, 2007 19:43 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
So good why did you stop now. Ge to writing...
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Reviewed By: alatero (nsi) On: February 28, 2007 18:53 PST
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OMG! You completely freaked me out! I was reading going, "oh no...she's not gonna die...is she? She can't die! Inuyasha has to save her. That's the way it has to be! AHH! What if she dies?!" So not fair to do that to me! Ok, really, I loved the chapter and can't wait til you update again! I hope you get inspiration for the next chapter soon!
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Reviewed By: Snowfall [MediaMiner Member] On: February 28, 2007 18:26 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh no, what did Inuyasha do? This sounds bad. He sure went to a lot of trouble for Kaede. That's sweet. And then he finally tells Kagome some truth!? *faints* Great chapter and you've really left us wondering what Inu had done. Um, erm, can't hold back...ack! I'm anxious to see what happens next! There, I said it. ^_^ Snow
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Reviewed By: aj On: February 28, 2007 18:09 PST
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yay new chap! this story is REALLY good the hole blood/ bite thing is really interesting...anyway please keep updating.
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Reviewed By: Cricket42(too lazy to sign back in) On: February 28, 2007 18:09 PST
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bitch just kidding. i wont kill you i want to reach the end of this story duh.~Cricket42
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Reviewed By: Book Butterfly [MediaMiner Member] On: February 28, 2007 17:57 PST
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you scared me shitless (glares) but inu's speach made up for your misleading me.
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Reviewed By: selenitypotter [MediaMiner Member] On: February 28, 2007 17:24 PST
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*breaks down crying* You are soooo mean! You leave it at such a cruel cliff hanger! I love the story and hope you update soon!
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Reviewed By: InuyashaThinksImSexii [MediaMiner Member] On: February 28, 2007 16:01 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
...That was just pure EVIL woman. -_-;; Oh well. At least she didn't die. I gotta admit, when I read the chapter title, I was like, "Oh no...!" Hehe. Anyhow, great chapter; can't wait to read the next one! Although, I only wish they were a little longer...>>; coughhintcough. Ahem. Anyhow..yeah. Update!!
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Reviewed By: Ranuel [MediaMiner Member] On: February 28, 2007 16:00 PST
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The potion is a good use of something from anime canon that could be expanded. I was pretty sure Kaede wouldn't be happy with him even before she woke up. I'll looking forward to seeing how you handle things.
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Reviewed By: Seiteki_Tenshi [MediaMiner Member] On: February 28, 2007 15:09 PST
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YAY update! the title scared me so bad...i was almost in tears...so..did kaede want to die? im confused about the ending.
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Reviewed By: Akina315 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 28, 2007 15:05 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Heh, I didn't even notice the chapter title until after you mentioned it. I was just to excited that you'd updated. I was a good chapter by the way. Akina*
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Title: YAY!!
Reviewed By: UsakoSerenity [MediaMiner Member] On: February 28, 2007 15:01 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yay! I'm so glad you updated again. I was thinking about this fic the other day. I think I've mentioned how much I love stories that seek to develop Inuyasha's character past what Takehashi already has. Especially when it's done so well. The transitions are believable, the characters are not out of character at all, this could seamlessly fit into the manga universe. Hope your muse comes back soon, thanks so much for the update. Adrianne :)
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Title: wow
Reviewed By: ladytokyo [MediaMiner Member] On: February 28, 2007 09:23 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow your a great writer. Please tell me that your going to update soon I so need to know whats going to happen. Ok I'm going to speak my mind and yes I have one! I luv Inu & Kag together just like the next person. but I feel like kagome use the beads too much and it's about time that she start feeling guitly about it. how come no one in the group has told her this. Isn't that a question that you've ask yourself? Inuyasha was tell her how a man think's and she sat him. she's spoiling shippo when have she every told him no? Kagome needs to learn that she's in the feudal era not her's with the new rules. sometimes it's all find and good but you don't have to stuff your believes on to someone else. I love it when Inuyasha spoke back to her for siting him, there where place to save her not to punish him he's not her pet dog or something. I could love someone that treat's me that way and show so little trust. Inuyasha is a male half hanyou being slam into the ground by a human female. how long will he take it? Maybe this youkai could teach her a good lesson. and why would he want her to live forever to only deal with her childishness(sorry if spelled wrong) have kagome think about that. time see find some way to learn about Inu-youkai. I would love to put the beads around her and see how she like being put to the ground. I guess I'm trying to create drama lol but you know some of it is true. sorry for my rant but like I said this is a great story please update soon.
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