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| "One Simple Question" Reviews/Comments [ 332 ] | | Pages (23): [ « ‹ 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 11 12 13 14 15 16 17 18 19 20 21 22 23 › » ] | Reviewed By: just another stupid girl On: August 09, 2006 22:08 PDT
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you live! how grand. aw, i love this story. that last scene with shippou and inuyasha was so touching! and doesn't it suck when you fall for a guy friend? yea, it does. eh, just don't quit on this fic and i'll be happy. i really loved miroku's reaction to when inuyasha opened his end of the bond and threatened him. so damn funny and cute.
| Title: YAY! U updated
Reviewed By: Lexbubble [MediaMiner Member] On: August 09, 2006 20:51 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm so glad to see u updated at last. I only have a few stories I hold out for and this is one of them. I love how it's going and I can't wait to see who's next to be marked. I'm thinking Sango cause Inu will probably want to mark Kagome last cause he'll want her mark to be more than just a bond in the pack if u know what I mean...u know like a mate. Anyway, I can't wait to read more. Lexi AKA Bubble-chan
| Title: NICE!
Reviewed By: Wolf_godess On: August 09, 2006 20:49 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
For the over all rating, I would put 100, but hey, its all pre chosen! This is a very well thought out, and well written story. I love your writing, I you were born to write this fic. lol. Now, I love reading all kinda of inuyasha fanfics, but yours is DEFNATLY # 3 on my list! My frist two are "club blue" and :art of love" mostly EVERYONE who is a MM fan/reader has read those two fic. I really would like to see were this story will go though! I am just about to check out your other storys, all I have to say is: keep writing. I can not stress this enoghm you are one of the best writters I have read here. Your writing is also comparble to some of my favortive authors, but to be true, I would rather read your story. well...I have to finish cleaning up my aparment, my friends are coming over for moving night ^^. but like i said, DO NOT stop writting. I cant wait for your update!!!!! Love you lot ♥♥♥~~~♥ Wolf. Ps: I would love to see some of the other chareter LATER ON, but for now keep up your amazing writting!!!!!!
| Title: inuyashaloverr
Reviewed By: inuyashaloverr [MediaMiner Member] On: August 09, 2006 20:05 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Im so glad you were able to update. This an excellent story as is TW. I know how life can just happen but Im glad that you seem to be doing better. So I'll just say, update when you can.
| Reviewed By: Licentia poetica [MediaMiner Member] On: August 01, 2006 15:32 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Usually I don't enjoy the 'marking' stories, but this one is different: I'm enjoying your plot development. I'm glad you like the demon (me, too) and I hope you continue. I have a cat, so I understand your sorrow right now. Write when you can!
| Reviewed By: Portia On: July 20, 2006 22:15 PDT
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YOU WILL UPDATE...........Now....yes? Please? I HAVE WAITED OVER A MONTH AND YOU DARE TO DENY ME MY ADDICTION!...*growls and glares*....*sigh* I love you anyways...please update... you will gain my eternal love....
| Reviewed By: cjflutterbye [MediaMiner Member] On: July 14, 2006 16:09 PDT
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I've read up through The Ceremony - very interesting - you seem to be holding true to the characters and letting them grow at the same time. I really like the reasons Inu gave to Miroku for marking him first. I'm, of course, waiting to see what a full demon Inuyasha will be doing in the hut now, but waiting is not a big deal. New chapters are always a gift, I look forward to them all. Thanks for sharing and take care.
| Reviewed By: Portia On: July 10, 2006 04:08 PDT
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Nope...no update yet...Damn....WHY DON'T YOU LOVE ME ANYMORE!!!!!!!!!! *Cries in fetal position in dark spider infested corner* *Cries because i have aracnaphobia* I CAN ONLY BE SAVED FROM THE EVIL SPIDERS WHEN YOU UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!*Whimpers in fear*...please update...i fear their fangs...*spider crawls about on forhead* *high-pitched screams till you update and make the bad things go away*
| Title: well now...
Reviewed By: lil ol' me On: July 03, 2006 01:02 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Here is a well thought out story. About damn time too. I was getting tired trying to find something of value that I havent alread read. When I began reading it I was thinking to myself, "FINALLY! Something of substance. Where the character's are canon and well thought out, life like and real. 3-D and not glass (transparent). Something worth reading!" This story is refreshing and Im eagerly awaiting more. Sorry about everything that seems to be going on in your life, but remember that there is an eye to every storm and with the hell that you have been forced to endure... well yours should be coming soon. Hope all is well and if it isn't I hope that all soon becomes that way.
| Reviewed By: nicole_chich On: June 24, 2006 17:14 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow! i love it. Please update soon, it was just so cruel of you to leave us hanging like that! Please i want to read more!
| Reviewed By: just another stupid girl On: June 21, 2006 18:31 PDT
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ah, haha. i'm a little weird i think, oh well. oh yay! i'm so happy to be reading this fic again. i almost cried when i went to check this, expecting to be disappointed, and found a new chapter! yes! i'm so sorry to hear about your cat. i've always wanted a kitty of my own. i'm sorry, but at least he/she lived a longer life that he/she would have had. i loved this chapter. poor seemingly-dead miroku... i love this ceremony so far. good luck with the writing. i know the feeling of just not wanting to write anything. i think every author goes through it at some point. eventually it will pass, right? i hope so. well, i love your writing, and think you should never give up. and i'm very sorry about your cat. i'm a cat lover myself personally. hmm, good luck with all the drama. when it rains, it pours, ne?
| Reviewed By: Akina315. . . On: June 18, 2006 11:03 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have a question. Why is your stoyr labled 'complete'? Anyway, i loved this chapter. Very interesting way of marking, but it was detailed well enough. Keep up the good work. Akina
| Reviewed By: Lady_Ceri [MediaMiner Member] On: June 17, 2006 22:44 PDT
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The end of that comment was something along the lines of apologizing for going on so much, and that I just wanted you to know I wasn't offering empty sympathy; I know. And if it showed up, just not for me on my screwed up computer, then disregard this, please. -_-;
| Reviewed By: Lady_Ceri [MediaMiner Member] On: June 17, 2006 22:42 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
First off, I love your fic. I haven't read your other one that you mentioned, but I'm about to go do so. I'm terribly sorry about your cat. I would offer the comfort of huggles, but I don't know if I should...I had a dog, and he was two years older than me, but he was MY dog. He slept under my crib, and in it when he could manage, after I was born when he was still pretty little. He was a mutt, and had been born with 3 legs, so his owners were gonna hit him on the head with a hammer. And, thirteen years later, we moved into a rent controlled house, so my aunt took him for the three months we'd be living there. She told me on my birthday that she just 'lost' him...six weeks before that. A month and a half, she just lied to me about him. I still miss him, and it's been 3 years... But geez. >
| Reviewed By: selenitypotter [MediaMiner Member] On: June 17, 2006 19:25 PDT
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I am sooooo happy to be able to find GOOD fics again. There was a pretty long dry spell for a while there. I am really enjoying the story and hope you update soon. I also hope that your life gets a bit easier. Although I can say the situation with the family, been there, done that and didn't like it in the least bit. Anyways, good luck!
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