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Title: YAY!!
Reviewed By: UsakoSerenity [MediaMiner Member] On: February 28, 2007 15:01 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yay! I'm so glad you updated again. I was thinking about this fic the other day. I think I've mentioned how much I love stories that seek to develop Inuyasha's character past what Takehashi already has. Especially when it's done so well. The transitions are believable, the characters are not out of character at all, this could seamlessly fit into the manga universe. Hope your muse comes back soon, thanks so much for the update. Adrianne :)
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Title: wow
Reviewed By: ladytokyo [MediaMiner Member] On: February 28, 2007 09:23 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow your a great writer. Please tell me that your going to update soon I so need to know whats going to happen. Ok I'm going to speak my mind and yes I have one! I luv Inu & Kag together just like the next person. but I feel like kagome use the beads too much and it's about time that she start feeling guitly about it. how come no one in the group has told her this. Isn't that a question that you've ask yourself? Inuyasha was tell her how a man think's and she sat him. she's spoiling shippo when have she every told him no? Kagome needs to learn that she's in the feudal era not her's with the new rules. sometimes it's all find and good but you don't have to stuff your believes on to someone else. I love it when Inuyasha spoke back to her for siting him, there where place to save her not to punish him he's not her pet dog or something. I could love someone that treat's me that way and show so little trust. Inuyasha is a male half hanyou being slam into the ground by a human female. how long will he take it? Maybe this youkai could teach her a good lesson. and why would he want her to live forever to only deal with her childishness(sorry if spelled wrong) have kagome think about that. time see find some way to learn about Inu-youkai. I would love to put the beads around her and see how she like being put to the ground. I guess I'm trying to create drama lol but you know some of it is true. sorry for my rant but like I said this is a great story please update soon.
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Reviewed By: Tankbbg On: February 27, 2007 20:09 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow! I am absolutely blown away by your fic! It is completely in character and I LOVE the father/son relationship between Shippou and Inu-Yasha. I hope you feel inspired to update soon becuase I can't WAIT for the next installment.
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Reviewed By: Cricket42 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 25, 2007 10:23 PST
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Sorry i didn't read it sooner. That's great about all the new changes. Live life to the fullest. Oh now back to the story. What the hell is he doing??????????? I wanna know. please? Well Laterz for now.~Cricket42
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Reviewed By: Star Shot On: February 25, 2007 02:13 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great story! I hope life calms down for you, I know it can be hectic, so chin up it can only get better. Please update when you get the time!
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Title: Hurrah for updates!
Reviewed By: Crimson Reaver On: February 25, 2007 02:05 PST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm truly hoping that Kaede doesn't die. Though it look's like you're not going to let her. This story is really touching otherwise. I think that if Kaede is next then Shippo should be after her, but that's just my opinion. Please update whenever you have the time!
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Reviewed By: fallenangel7583 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 24, 2007 13:39 PST
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hey girl! glad to see you're still writing. we all know how hectic life can be. i'm just glad to see that you're still around. i miss ya, man! LOL. great chapter, very touching. poor inu, having to suffer through all of the death and destruction. i'm just glad that he didn't take it sitting down. well written, as always, and great update!
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Reviewed By: Autumn the reviewer On: February 22, 2007 12:26 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
im so glad you updated this story. it is simply wonderful. i hope your life settles down just a little to be able to write more.
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Title: You Have Returned!
Reviewed By: TheMaskedReviewer [MediaMiner Member] On: February 21, 2007 17:56 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You have seen fit to grace us with your esteemed presence again, O scribe of sublime stories! Never again shall I doubt your word! Wonderful chapter! I have only one complaint. The chapter was a bit small. Nevertheless, I am again awed by the splendid skill with which you cause the world of Inuyasha and co. to come alive upon my computer screen. Words alone cannot express my gratitude. I'd send money but, unfortunately, I'm broke.*sob**sob* Fare thee well! *dries his face as he phases through the wall* Keep up the good work, TMR
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Reviewed By: Akina315 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 21, 2007 16:27 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh, how sad! I hope Inuyasha gets it done in time to save Kaede's life. I enjoyed this chapter. Sure it was short, but at least was something. Akina315*
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Title: Harpy!!!
Reviewed By: Da Grrrl On: February 21, 2007 00:35 PST
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Lovely chap and you've been missed, girl. New BF, eh? Makes me wonder if it's Mr. Cutie from before! *waggles brows* In any case, I hope everything is going well for you. This chap was very good and I love the fact that Yash won't give up. Excellent! Hope to see you update soon. ^_^
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Reviewed By: GreenWolf On: February 20, 2007 20:43 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is good. Keep it up.
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Reviewed By: Purefire16 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 20, 2007 19:56 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I vote that KAEDE live's................. and when Inu mark's Kagome (after sango) that BOTH of them end up becoming mates..........................................
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Reviewed By: rach (aka pokiepal) On: February 20, 2007 19:47 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
good new chapter. I had to refreash my memory of the story. great chapter!!
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Reviewed By: luvofanhanyouandmiko [MediaMiner Member] On: February 20, 2007 14:34 PST
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please update soon if you can! i have never seen one where the whole gang is marked as well. i like! hope inuyasha will save kaede. that was sad i really thought that you would just kill her off, from what i read...and i still hope you dont. to be honest i almost about this but im glad they have the autonotify emails it is a good story! ^.^ i like how you write the characters....not ooc but not what you would expect from the manga/anime, i love that. so thanks for taking time of your busy life and gracing us with a chapter heh heh...i'm sure WE ALL appreciate.anyway, although your life seems hectic enough, i still hope you update soon!!^.^
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