| "One Simple Question" Reviews/Comments [ 332 ] |
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Reviewed By: Inulover1253 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 18, 2007 13:39 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG keep going i want to know what happens
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Title: Trick or treat!
Reviewed By: Licentia poetica [MediaMiner Member] On: October 18, 2007 13:19 PDT
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I've kept this in my favorites, surreptitiously checking for updates every so often, and now you've given all of us a treat just in time for Halloween. You're even tricking us by leaving the story at a balance point (cliffhanger and yet not...we know they killed Naraku, we know Inuyasha wants to mark Kagome as his, but you didn't actually make it a fait a complis!). I'll wait patiently for the next treat.... iPoe
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Title: ?
Reviewed By: You don't need to know On: October 18, 2007 09:53 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
well that last chapter was a bit confusing... to many stuff happening at once.... anyway I still like your story
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Reviewed By: Cricket42 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 18, 2007 08:44 PDT
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Awwwwwww. thanx that was so sweet of you. I'm glad you havn't fallen off the face of the earth yet. i was thinking someone had killed you because of the damn cliffies. anyway :P. keep writing and don't get killed.~Crickee
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: October 18, 2007 02:21 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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nice update... seems that everyone is bonded to inuyasha in one way or another... the only ones not are shippo and kagome... inuyasha seems to be thinking too hard about marking kagome... hope he marks her soon... before something bad happens... wonder what happens next... update as soon as you can... please and thank you!
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Reviewed By: Ranuel [MediaMiner Member] On: October 17, 2007 18:59 PDT
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I've enjoyed this so far and I look forward to seeing where it goes. Two things though. Somewhere along the line you've accidentally flagged the story as complete instead of WIP so the ending of the chapter had me completely confused for a minute until I read the Author's note. Secondly, please consider moving the in text ANs to the end or the beginning. They really disrupt the flow of that paragraph. Seeing a normal, healthy, and sane Kohaku was nice. And I can't wait to see how Kagome's friends react when she and Inuyasha bond.
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Reviewed By: Fanfics2007 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 02, 2007 15:06 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Love this story! Orginal, creative, and even suspenseful!! Update please!
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Reviewed By: lindy* On: October 01, 2007 12:41 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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wow....I'm really glad I had this fic bookmarked! Good to see you back!
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Reviewed By: Ranuel [MediaMiner Member] On: September 30, 2007 11:58 PDT
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Sounds like the next chapter is going to be really meaty. Could this be where the story earns it's X?
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Reviewed By: Arii [MediaMiner Member] On: September 26, 2007 19:05 PDT
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Oh man...Great chapter. Look forward to reading more.
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Reviewed By: Broken Butterfly [MediaMiner Member] On: September 26, 2007 12:47 PDT
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I really like where you are going with this story. It is put together really well and I can't wait for you to post more.
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Title: oi
Reviewed By: You don't need to know On: September 23, 2007 00:27 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
nice to see you are back. I really like your story so far and hope you don't keep me waiting as long as last time
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Reviewed By: deviousauthoress1 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 19, 2007 06:23 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great job! I'm really into it. Please write more!
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Reviewed By: angel-up-above-heaven [MediaMiner Member] On: September 18, 2007 04:46 PDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW WOW WOW WOW WOW WOW WOW WOW WOW WOW WOW WOW WOW WOW WOW WOW WOW WOW WOW WOW WOW WOW WOW WOW!!!! I LOVE THIS!!! *screams like a little girl* having Inuyasha act like that to Shippo... its too CUTE!! and i HOPE Inuyasha comes up and ask Kagome to mark her!!! we or well I need some loving here lol XD
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Reviewed By: Autumn_the_Reviewer [MediaMiner Member] On: September 17, 2007 05:45 PDT
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I have waited soooooo long for you to update, but damn if it wasn't worth it! Great chapter, great story. I cannot wait to see what Inuyasha does, in the bonding with Kagome. I really do hope you can find some more time to update this story, but I understand that you are busy. So I'm just gonna say, keep up the awesome work!
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