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Reviewed By: Kajunmom76 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 08, 2006 22:08 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a great story! I can't wait to see where it goes!!
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Reviewed By: golden_kitsune [MediaMiner Member] On: April 08, 2006 14:54 PDT
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Ah new chappie! Huzzah. I love the whole Shippo/Inuyasha father/son thing. It's very cute, and the caterpillar thing, genius. *applaudes*
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Title: No problem
Reviewed By: Fyrloche-NSI On: April 08, 2006 07:30 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
No problem, lass. It was my pleasure to review your work again. And I appreciate the offer to read mine. I always like to hear from fellow authors, especially if they have talent! There are several one-shots, one of which is my only attempt at a lemon, one complete story with 20 chapters, and 3 inprocess. Have fun and let me know what you think. Enough about me, let's get to your little story here, shall we? Good chapter. Well thought out. It will be interesting to see what you have in mind for the blood mark ceremony and what the effects will be. I wonder if Inyasha will pick up any of Miroku's hentai thoughts. That could have a lot of laugh potential, or lemon potential. I was wondering. Do you plan on doing Kagome last? If there is a difference between blood bonds and mating bonds, by holding her until last might give you extra time to work up to a mating bond between them. Just a thought. Anyway, enough of my telling you how to write your story, especially since I have my own to write. Take care and see you next time. Fyrloche
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Reviewed By: leila-chan *nsi* On: April 08, 2006 01:07 PDT
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dman, what happened girl?! atleast i found your fics. why were they deleted? hope to see updates on this soon, as well as for your other fics. if you get a chance, inugrrrl needs some support right now! m.m. is planning on deleting her account on monday. we have to do something!
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Title: GinaCat
Reviewed By: GinaCat [MediaMiner Member] On: April 07, 2006 18:30 PDT
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This story is good I hope you update soon
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Title: Glad you're back
Reviewed By: Snowfall [MediaMiner Member] On: April 07, 2006 17:58 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ah, I was wondering what happened. I am very pleased with this fic. It focuses on Inuyasha differently than in most fics and it has presented a more three dimensional and respectful attitude toward him. It is refreshing, particularly Shippou's attempts to make Inuyasha proud of him. I like the idea that Inuyasha now understands his youkai better and has a plan to protect his friends. I am anxious to see how the marking goes and the results, or even if the group will allow him to do it. He does have some s'plainen to do about his behavior with Kagome. BTW, I totally loved what he did, telling her not to EVER undermine his authority again. It's about time he became the true alpha male.---Well, I gotta go listen for tornadoes. Glad you're back.---Snow
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Reviewed By: Cricket42 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 07, 2006 17:04 PDT
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love the update. like always perfect. ~Cricket42
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Title: Tigeris_sakura
Reviewed By: Ronnika On: April 07, 2006 02:53 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey love your story and I think its funny and very different from others in the explaining of the mates and marks of the Youkai. Cant wait until the next chapter. I also have always like stories that has Inu Yasha as a father figure for Shippo. Inu-chan must in some way see himself in Shippo-chan, and what Inu-chans life would be like if he had everyone to help and look after him like they do Shippo-chan. And don't worry about grammer and stuff because I myself suck at it. lol :P
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Reviewed By: golden_kitsune [MediaMiner Member] On: April 05, 2006 17:29 PDT
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oi! it ended...and I was so looking forward to the next chapter...*sniffle*
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Title: Glad it's back!
Reviewed By: LavenderRose (nsi) On: April 05, 2006 07:02 PDT
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I almost went into a panic when I saw it was gone...this one is most definitely on my favorites list, so I couldn't care less about the overload on my inbox just so long as it's back!
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Title: Not good
Reviewed By: Fyrloche-NSI On: April 05, 2006 04:51 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
If you are as much of a review addict as I am, losing all those reviews must have hurt! Sorry to hear about that, so I guess I need to write a good review to replace my last review. You are doing a great job. This is a very good story and I eagerly await the next chapter. Hopefully, Inuyasha will get his mind wrapped around the fact that Kagome isn't scared of his transformations as much as she is scared of what happens to him when he transforms. Until the next chapter. Fyrloche
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Reviewed By: bluezinthos (nsi) On: April 04, 2006 21:31 PDT
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please don't sulk! have a hug and a review! i'm enjoying this one alot, and i'm looking forward to kinding out how inuyasha and kagome deal with the marks that he will be bestowing on everyone. especially by saying that it would be pointless to mark someone twice with a soul bond as the second one. if kagome doesn't get it after their last little discussion, he has feelings for her, she just needs to listen and not run away or sit him for being his usual mouthy self. also, she needs to see that she jump to conclusions too quickly when it comes to inuyasha and shippo. does she really think that he would hurt the kit? especially now that he's claimed shippo as a son, it would be bad it he starts to see kagome as a threat to HIS son. i look forward to more.
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Title: inuyashaloverr
Reviewed By: inuyashaloverr [MediaMiner Member] On: April 04, 2006 21:09 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great story! Am still glad you got it back up again. Cant wait for the next chapter. Update when you can.
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Reviewed By: Cricket42(to lazy to sign back in) On: April 04, 2006 19:53 PDT
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Well i finally finished my story. I love yours plz update soon. plz? 'll give you lots of enternet hugs if you do. plz? pretty plz? ~Cricket42
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Reviewed By: alatero (nsi) On: April 04, 2006 19:50 PDT
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Out of curiosity why did you have to repost? And I can't wait for the new chapters!
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