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Reviewed By: dangersque [MediaMiner Member] On: October 18, 2006 17:32 PDT
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Ack, I almost missed this. Hee hee hee. Splat. So, is Inuyasha going to mark Kaede against her wishes to save her life? It was about that time in the story and nobody ever kills off Kaede like that. And I don't see him living with the guilt that he wasn't there to help because Miroku being a pervert annoyed him. The mind meld thing has to really suck for Inuyasha though. He's a very private guy, and now he can't even keep his dreams to himself anymore.
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Title: Chapter 11
Reviewed By: Snowfall [MediaMiner Member] On: October 15, 2006 20:50 PDT
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Gah! I haven't been getting my notifications on your updates! I've missed so much! I feel so sorry for Inuyasha and Miroku. I'm sure that Miroku's perverted thoughts are a real strain on Inuyasha. I can't even imagine what types of horrible nightmares that Inuyasha might have. I mean, his whole life has been one long nightmare after another. I don't know if I reviewed concerning Inuyasha saving Shippou from the mantis, but that was just too sweet. Wow, I didn't expect the marking to be so draining on Inuyasha. That really knocks him out of commission. OMG! Kaiade (sp) It would be so horrible if she were to die. She is such a centerpiece of tranquility for everyone. That was very unexpected and a great cliffhanger. You've surprised us and that is so much fun. I love that Inuyasha is able to have some control over his youkai blood. Perhaps Kagome can take of the kotodama beads soon. Perhaps it is a matter of maturity for Inuyasha. Well written as always. Nice flow, no jumps or skips. Great grammar and spelling. Any typo's? *looks under the rug* Hm, don't think so. Great job! Since I'm not getting notices when you update, would you mind too much emailing me when you do update? Thanks! Snow
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Reviewed By: InuyashasBiggestFan [MediaMiner Member] On: October 14, 2006 00:36 PDT
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Can't wait for the next chapter! Update soon!
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Reviewed By: fallenangel7583 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 13, 2006 22:27 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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hey gurl! haven't been able to catch up till now. wow! awesome development of the story. i missed ur writing! poor Kaede! is inu planning on turning the old woman too? ...i say turning like he's turning them into vampires. LOL. opps? hehe. well...ya know? that's sad about Kaede though! ohh...poor mama! wonderful story thus far. i love the fact that inu can hear their thoughts. oh, the fun that will leave for him and kaggers, ne? hehehehe. great story girl, i wuff it!!!! keep it up!!
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Title: Ahhh!
Reviewed By: lindy [MediaMiner Member] On: October 13, 2006 19:54 PDT
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Keade!!!!! Nooooo!!!!! GAH! Please up-date soon! Got to find out what happends next!!!
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Title: One Simple Question
Reviewed By: StDogbert On: October 13, 2006 14:14 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Your style is a pleasure to read. It's clean and concise. Thank you. BTW: I can't wait to see what happens when both Sango AND Miroku are marked. Poor Inuyasha.
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Reviewed By: I.G. On: October 13, 2006 12:39 PDT
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What an update and worth the wait. Poor Kaede! I wasn't expecting that. I just knew Sango's Hiraikotsu was going to make him fly into dust. Very nice twist and take it easy, girl. Even with all of life's craziness, make sure you stop long enough to enjoy it. ^_^
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Title: AMZING!!!
Reviewed By: demonwitch [MediaMiner Member] On: October 13, 2006 11:34 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i absoultuly LOVE your story so far please please keep going!!!
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Reviewed By: Lexbubble [MediaMiner Member] On: October 13, 2006 06:01 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Don't worry about the length of ur chappies...i'm just so excited to see a new one. It was awesome. It's sad what happened to Kaede. I can't wait to read what comes next. Update soon ^.^ Lexi AKA Bubble-chan~_^
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Reviewed By: inugirl [MediaMiner Member] On: October 12, 2006 21:38 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love this story! please update as often as possible =)
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Reviewed By: Akina315 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 12, 2006 19:18 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
So, does Kaede die, or does Inuyasha create a bond with her before that? I'd like to see what happens in your next chapter. This one was good. Keep up the excellent work! Akina315
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Reviewed By: Cricket42 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 12, 2006 17:58 PDT
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Hey it's me again loved the update and NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! KEADE!!!!!!!!!!I'll save *trying to run into the story* Damnit i can't get though good thing Kirara got there. Kagome do what you can. Oh and by the way Hi how are you? Monkeys Rule ~Crickee
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Title: inuyashaloverr
Reviewed By: inuyashaloverr [MediaMiner Member] On: October 12, 2006 17:21 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OM-Gosh you were able to update! I await on bated breath for when you're able to. I love this story and have from the get-go. Was wondering how Miroku was taking the bond. No surprise that Inu could tell when Miroku went walkin down Hentai Ave but as well with Miroku with Inu's nightmares. With the next bonding coming up soon what will happen now with Kaede down. Good chappie to a great story. Update when you can. :D
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Reviewed By: Valdimarian [MediaMiner Member] On: September 25, 2006 23:20 PDT
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Reviewed By: Cricket42 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 25, 2006 20:17 PDT
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It's okay just breathe it all work out in the end. Ok? Just please try to finish i'm in love with this story and i'm going to reread it again but no worries. just do what you can if you want take a gander at my poems it's called dark poetry i love writing my poems. I need to update that oh well. ANyway good luck and whatnot. Have fun in Frisco even if you don't have fun. Laters *Huggles*~Cricket42A.K.A.Crikee
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