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Title: Chap 8
Reviewed By: Inu-Grrrl On: May 01, 2006 10:33 PDT
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Darn! I was hoping Yasha said/did more than that, but meh ^_^ I'm glad kagome knows she's using the rosary like a bitch *smirk* Honestly, I hate when she uses it at all. I guess that's why I never give her one in fics. It just irks me O.o Anyhoo! Again, I love the relationship Yasha has with Shippo. It's just charming!
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Title: Chap 7
Reviewed By: Inu-Grrrl On: May 01, 2006 10:22 PDT
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Fuckety-fuck me! That ending gave me fucking pause! I LOVE when Yasha turns youkai and when he gets in Kagome's face. I despise her sit commands...they make me wanna beat the shit out of her. I'm glad that he's finally putting her in her place! Er..at least I hope he does :P
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Title: Chap 6
Reviewed By: Inu-Grrrl On: May 01, 2006 10:10 PDT
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Awwww, kawaii! That was some awesome San/Miro love. Just adorable. well done!!
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Title: Chap 5
Reviewed By: Inu-Grrrl On: May 01, 2006 10:03 PDT
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I would have completely freaked off the bug factor >.< I HATE BUGS! Awww, Shippo called him papa! But after the rescuse, yasha will have some 'splainin' to do! Another awesome chappie!
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Title: Chap 4
Reviewed By: Inu-Grrrl On: May 01, 2006 09:54 PDT
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The blood & soul bonds were such and interesting twist. Great work. I love your characterization of InuYasha. It's very hard to find someone do him canon as well as you have. Bravo! I haven't had a chance to read in so long & I am positively LOVING this. Excellent, girl!
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Title: Chap 3
Reviewed By: Inu-Grrrl On: May 01, 2006 09:38 PDT
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I agree with Yasha. Kagome with the whole "You took my baby hunting" thing make me roll my eyes. Shippo won't be a baby forever and if his parents had lived, he'd probably be doing more than that. *waves her off* Go Yasha!!
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Title: Chap 2
Reviewed By: Inu-Grrrl On: May 01, 2006 09:28 PDT
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Another lovely one. I love the relationship that's building between Yasha & Ship. It's genuine and loving. Oi! And Miroku's gonna get some lovin' ^_^
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Title: Chap 1
Reviewed By: Inu-Grrrl On: May 01, 2006 09:20 PDT
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Harpie! I finally got a chance to do some reading & came straight to this fic. I LOVE it. The fist chap made me laugh & gush so much. You have canon InuYasha DOWN. And Shippo was just ADOWABLE! Excellent job & I'll be leaving a review for every chap!
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Reviewed By: dangersque [MediaMiner Member] On: April 21, 2006 15:57 PDT
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As I said in my review that got erased: Kagome, stop being a hypocrite. If you're turned off by physical discipline, especially when it comes to Shippo, then don't physically discipline Inuyasha. And Miroku, stop putting your nose where it doesn't belong. It'll just make things akward and uncomfortable, and it'll all end in tears. Now onto the new chapter: so e's starting to become Inuyasha's becoming sane while he's transformed. That'll be interesting, but I've noticed that people don't usually do it well. On the few times you've done it, he hasn't been stupid and completely animalistic, so you've got that going for your story, which is nice. One nitpick though. Wouldn't indefatigable mean they can't become not tired? Like defatigue would mean to become not fatigued, so being infatigable would mean they'd never recover from being tired?
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Reviewed By: Bulma the babe2004 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 18, 2006 16:10 PDT
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yes so...this story disappeared...i almost spazzed out....lol thought i did something to accidently delete it off my favorites or something....wouldnt be the first time....anyways. another absolutely fantastic chapter. poor Inuyasha...having to come to terms with the fact that yes *gasp* he is capable of feeling those pesky emotions...the nice ones... so yes. Unfortunately due to being tortured...uh...in the military ^.^ i will not be able to access a computer for a month. fun stuff. However I cant wait to see all the awesome updates when i get back. Keep up the awesome work with this story as well as you other stories. I'm a fan of them all :D Jessi PS will Fluffy chan be making his presence known in this story? lol
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Reviewed By: Piett600 On: April 17, 2006 15:39 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Absolutely wonderful thusfar, and I can't wait for more chapters. I've read very few fanfics that really try to address Shippou's place in their "pack", and you're able to remain very true to the canon characters in exploring the issue. Of course it helps that your writing itself is top-notch! I'll be eagerly awaiting more.
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Reviewed By: just another stupid girl On: April 13, 2006 20:54 PDT
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awww! the secret is out! for real this time! the catipillar thing was too adorable! and totally in character. i love it so much... but it was kind of weird that kagome didn't even act like anything was wrong after inuyasha went full demon on her... great chapter though. i can't tell you how happy i am to be reading this again!
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Reviewed By: just another stupid girl On: April 13, 2006 20:46 PDT
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ahhh! this fic disappeared for a while!! i was so upset, but now it's back!! ::happy dance:: yay! i love you, i love this!
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Reviewed By: primalhunger [MediaMiner Member] On: April 09, 2006 20:10 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a really good story, I really like it. I really hope you continue!!^^
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Title: inuyashaloverr
Reviewed By: inuyashaloverr NSI On: April 09, 2006 00:31 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OH, I know Im not signed in, that's a first for me. Heh, OK, call me lazy. Great chapter, even if it was filler-ish, as you put it. Cant wait to see what happens with the Bonds though. Should be very interesting. Heh, and as for the Blade reference of FMS, I think the first time I heard that particular phrase was about, 30 yrs ago, lmao. Kami, am I old. Again, great chapter. Update when you can.
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