"Purity 7: Avouchment" Reviews/Comments [ 891 ] |
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Reviewed By: Jester08 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 02, 2007 16:01 EDT Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Aww, that was a sweet Griffin/Isabelle moment at the end of the chapter!! Keep up the excellent work and update really soon please!! ^_^
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Reviewed By: Simonkal of Inuy [MediaMiner Member] On: October 02, 2007 14:54 EDT Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: As always, it's a beautiful thing. Just wonderful work as always!!
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Reviewed By: phalon23 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 27, 2007 02:20 EDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Okay, I must say that Purity 7 is definitely wrapping up Purity 6! I am really enjoying what you've written so far. I'm glad that Griffin and Isabelle didn't go as deep as Cain and Gin did pertaining to the mates factor. Though you could tell they were starting to fall. It's going to be interesting in the future chapters, I'm glad to see that Griffin is finally coming full circle and cn't wait til the bad guy gets caught! I'm so excited about this story!!!!!! Can't wait, really. All I can think pertaining to the Australian Taiyoukai, he's the biggest jerk ever! XD Then again I like the character of Gavin and don't like to see cool character be treated badly by other characters... I can't wait to read more, and hopefully see more in the near future.
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Reviewed By: FriskyPixie [MediaMiner Member] On: September 25, 2007 17:11 EDT Comment/Review: Great chapter! I love how Griffin is slowly letting her get through his defences. He's so sweet.
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Reviewed By: malitiadixie [MediaMiner Member] On: September 24, 2007 18:28 EDT Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Izzy and Griffin are so stinkin sweet! They're so precious I just want to pinch their cheeks right off. Wow, that sounded so...aunt like. lol. I love it. I hope we get another one soon. By the way, are you a geneticist or something? I'm not even sure if that's how you even spell it. If you were, it would make so much more sense to me. The explainations of how all the technical stuff in the reasearch is wonderful. I had to read it twice to even grasp it. Keep up the great work!
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Reviewed By: SpikeRulesHell [MediaMiner Member] On: September 23, 2007 23:00 EDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Wow, I can't believe that... The Austrailian Tai Youkai dude is a jerk. And I dunno, I get the weird feeling that Cain is going to get into some deep stuff pretty soon. Hmm... ^^
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Reviewed By: OROsan0677 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 22, 2007 22:58 EDT Comment/Review: I hate that Jude guy! I really hope they don't get into Isabelle's files, but I loved how you ended it with Isabelle and Griffin in that happy moment :D
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Title: ADORABLE Reviewed By: Sunekai [MediaMiner Member] On: September 22, 2007 20:55 EDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: I hope she does make him smile everyday and share her pudding with him....*smiles*...so cute...and bad guy better noe whats coming to him....Isabelle got MAD back up! XD beware the Inu-Youkai family! muahaha!
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Reviewed By: Dark Inu Fan [MediaMiner Member] On: September 22, 2007 20:46 EDT Comment/Review: Okay, that Auzzie Taiyoukai is a big A-Jerk. I'm glad to see that Griffin is finally warming up to the idea that having someone else isn't such a taboo idea. Keep up the good work, dark
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Reviewed By: Sesshomaru4Kagura4ever [MediaMiner Member] On: September 22, 2007 11:10 EDT Comment/Review: Oh, and a little p.s. for dewrose, who reviewed right before me: Interesting thought. I'd love to know what happened to Aislyn, so it'd be interesting if he was, if this was a vehicle to bring the MacDannoughs back in. Jude covington's as much of a bastard as Ian MacDannough.
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Reviewed By: Sesshomaru4Kagura4ever [MediaMiner Member] On: September 22, 2007 11:07 EDT Comment/Review: Poor Gavvie! What a bastard Covington is! Seriously, what is his problem with Cain? Anyway, at least we know it is Alastair Gregory, but don't you hate it when you know something and the characters don't? You just want to scream, "No, he did it, don't talk to him, arrest him!AAARGH!" I wanted to do that through SesshoMaru's early interaction with Hisadaicho in Metamorphosis, actually. When will they learn? I'm gonna review every chapter, 'cos I like seeing my username in print. And even tho i don't bother with marking it any more, just know that it's forever 10/10 ^_-!
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Title: adimilej Reviewed By: dewrose [MediaMiner Member] On: September 21, 2007 19:54 EDT Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Hi Sue, hope all is well with your family. Good story but I have a question about one of the characters. It's about Alastair Gregory. Is he related in any way to the character Paul Gregory from your "Fairy tale" story about Meara and Morio? Maybe you did touch on this before and I missed it but, I hope you will give me an answer cause I am just curious. That's all. thanks again for a nice mysterious love story. J
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Reviewed By: blue lolipop [MediaMiner Member] On: September 21, 2007 16:57 EDT Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: omg, griffin is soo cute. i want a bear youkai to. only mine will be named Theo. actualy, don't mind me at all, i haven't eaten anything but fundip and mountain dew!!!!!! yah, i will blame the sugar intake... anyway, as always, great chapter!!! i really like seeing cain interact with the other tai-youkai. and cain lighting up that cigarette? kami, he is such a bad ass. lol. keep up the good work. god bless.
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Reviewed By: Jester08 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 21, 2007 16:29 EDT Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Awesome chapter!! I hate the Australian Tai youkai....someone needs to punch him down a couple of pegs!! Update really soon please and keep up the excellent work! ^_^
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Reviewed By: Simonkal of Inuy [MediaMiner Member] On: September 21, 2007 15:30 EDT Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Wonderful. I felt for a minute there that I was getting a lesson in DNA studies. Awesome job. And I love that that griffin is finally letting his guard down. But I really, really don't like that damn Australian Tai youkai, Cain should've electricuted his ass...lol. Awesome job as always!!
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