| "Purity 7: Avouchment" Reviews/Comments [ 891 ] |
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Reviewed By: Dark Inu Fan [MediaMiner Member] On: September 15, 2007 02:58 EDT
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And why does the Aussie Taiyoukai have a biff with Cain? I was under the impression somehow that they were on good terms. Of course, the whole 'let's ship off all of our criminals to a seemingly uninhibited island/continent' would get my knickers in a twist also. Keep up the good work, dark
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Title: This is getting intense...
Reviewed By: iloveanimecartoons [MediaMiner Member] On: September 14, 2007 11:11 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I wonder what theme song Gavin's youkai is humming now? LOL! So, looks like the Australian Taiyoukai is kinda...well...a JERK. I hope the two "interrogators" help Gavvie. Cain's gonna be PO, isn't he? And poor Jilli...oh shit...poor IZZY! This is getting so good! An I'm so glad Charlie/Froofie's getting better! YAY! Looks like Griffin's getting more domestic **chortles with glee imagining him in a Winnie the Pooh bathrobe** I LOURVED this chappie, Sue! Keep up the good work! At you're leisure, of course. Your brother's in my thoughts! Glad to hear he's recovering!
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Reviewed By: sunshine161820 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 12, 2007 17:18 EDT
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yay an update! as usual u were great! update soon : )
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Reviewed By: iloveanimecartoons [MediaMiner Member] On: September 12, 2007 16:18 EDT
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This, once again, is one of those chapters that I have to reread a few times and stare blankly at for an hour before I can even consider reviewing. All I can say right now, and still make any sense, is...DUDE! And I also feel malitiadixie on your being a great inspiration to write fics. You really do make me feel braver to continue writing my fic (even if I never get another review, I'll still take you advice to heart...and Proforce, too) because I actually read all those Author Notes in your fics and you went through a lot and you're still writing. It must really be your passion. I don't know if I'll ever get that intense in writing stories, but I know what people mean now when they say "I think theis story needs to be written. I'll comment on this chapter in a bit. I'm happy you uploaded so soon, considering the potential stress you may be under. These stories are like treats for me...similar to a chocolate fix to someone on a diet. Oh...so...satisfying. I think it's mostly the humor and character development...then again, gotta love the angst.
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Title: =)
Reviewed By: Sunekai [MediaMiner Member] On: September 12, 2007 00:30 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
kudos to u!!! u rock my sox sueric! im loving how griffin and cain r talking u noe? and how griffin is finally seeing that he is the only one that can protect isabelle...=) keep up the good work!
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Reviewed By: OROsan0677 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 11, 2007 19:09 EDT
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Oh my gosh. I love how Griffin called Charlie his dog lol. Hmm...I'd like a few things to say to the Australian tai-youkai as well! I hope I'm right when I sense action coming in the air :D
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Reviewed By: Sesshomaru4Kagura4ever [MediaMiner Member] On: September 11, 2007 11:46 EDT
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What is Covington's problem? Does he not like Cain or something? Jillian's gonna freak when she finds out her poor Gavvie's been arrestedon suspicion of murdering Dr Avis. Geez. I'm gonna write more often, 'cos I like seeing my name in print ^_^. Keep it up! I found this chapter on the 11th- my birthday. Great bithday present^_-
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Reviewed By: mrskcgoodman [MediaMiner Member] On: September 11, 2007 02:31 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Gavin in jail? AW I know Cain is going to be pissed.
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Reviewed By: malitiadixie [MediaMiner Member] On: September 10, 2007 22:24 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I wonder what will happen now that they are both on leave. They'll be together, and alone a lot more often. Can you hear my perverted, lemon loving wheels turning? He he he...
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Reviewed By: Jester08 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 10, 2007 17:21 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awesome chapter!! I can't wait till Cain shows the Australian tai-youkai whose boss!! Update really soon please and keep up the excellent work!! ^_^
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Reviewed By: Simonkal of Inuy [MediaMiner Member] On: September 10, 2007 16:34 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
No Gavvie can't go to jail. His mate is going to loose her mind when they tell her. Nice work as always.
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Reviewed By: SpikeRulesHell [MediaMiner Member] On: September 05, 2007 20:19 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is amazingly captivating, but really, what else could anyone expect from you? The strange Cain-Griffin situation is interesting, and just makes Griffin more heroic, to Isabelle especially I'm sure. I feel kinda sorry for him-not only because of his horrific memories, but because of Isabelle. She seems just like her mother, as far as her mischievousness goes. On another note, I'm sorry to hear about your brother. I hope he gets well soon. Words can mean little coming from a bunch of people unskilled in writing (well, to speak for myself, at the very least), with you being so great with words. Just remember that you have all of our prayers. Read your first Purity, it always helps me get through hard times. ^^ I don't know how effective it might be, seeing as you kinda wrote it, but it's always worth a try. Your stories are great emotional therapy, in addition to being very entertaining and inspiring. So keep pouring out your emotions on paper (or...keyboard?), and people will continue to open up their hearts to you and your characters. I'll tell everyone I know to throw a little prayer your way. Until next time... ~Thomas Stoneking~
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Reviewed By: malitiadixie [MediaMiner Member] On: September 04, 2007 21:16 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well, it took me a half a month but I'm finished. I love them all and I can't wait for the next chapter. By the way, after this one, I think you should do a Mikio or Gunner fic. Or maybe both like Kich and Gin. Anywho, keep up the great work. You're one of the author's that inspired me to write the fic I'm working on now. If it weren't for author's like you, I would have never had the courage to post a single chapter. Thank you!
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Reviewed By: mrskcgoodman [MediaMiner Member] On: August 21, 2007 13:18 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really enjoyed this chapter. I love how you always add alot of background info into your fics.
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Title: the best ever writer
Reviewed By: fasttimeport [MediaMiner Member] On: August 20, 2007 16:49 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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She has lead me throught all of the stories to the point I don't want them to end. Then she blinds all them into all the stories so you don't forget the whole family. I love these stories and weoulf love to see Gunnar fall for Maddy. And Evan find his match.
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