| "Purity 7: Avouchment" Reviews/Comments [ 891 ] |
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Reviewed By: tinners [MediaMiner Member] On: August 19, 2007 14:46 EDT
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great chapter, as always. gavin in the best. [sorry to hear about your brother.best wishes]
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Title: WOW
Reviewed By: Sunekai [MediaMiner Member] On: August 18, 2007 18:13 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
coolness! i just came back from camp and im so happy u updated!....im happy isabelle is trying to help griffin....but i think kich. is right.....she is helping him alot as it is now. and thats sad...avis is dead....wow...anywho, hope u update agian soon!
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Reviewed By: sunshine161820 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 17, 2007 02:01 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
yay!they finally found out avis is dead...wonder wut happens next???? i hope griffin doesnt get upset with isabelle when she mentions the surgery. im glad ur brother is out of the scare zone and can finally work on gettin better! update when u can! : )
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Title: yah, my first review!!!
Reviewed By: blue lolipop [MediaMiner Member] On: August 16, 2007 20:19 EDT
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i just found your stories about a month ago. i found them and spent about a week and a half camped out in my room with my lap top just reading one right after another. they are amazing!!! i have to say that purity 3 was my favorite so far, but it is just so hard to choose! i can't wait to see how this ends. i wish some one would make some fan art of griffin. i just want to see how everyone else sees him. i am glad your brother is doing better. i hope things start to look up.
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Reviewed By: Dark Inu Fan [MediaMiner Member] On: August 16, 2007 19:56 EDT
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I bet Gavin's never really seen a dead youkai like 'that' before. It's startling to run across a dead body, even when it's not human, and realize its dead. I'm glad to hear that your brother's doing better and I wish him a full and successful recovery. Keep up the good work, dark
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Reviewed By: OROsan0677 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 16, 2007 19:18 EDT
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I'm glad your brother is doing better, Sue! But still take all the time you need :D. Hmm...so Gavin now knows Dr. Avis is dead. I wonder if Griffin will really go for the surgery for his scars, I don't see it happening, but you always surprise us. :D.
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Reviewed By: Jester08 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 16, 2007 16:02 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great chapter!! So, they know Avis is dead...I wonder what they're going to do?!? The talk between Bitty and Kich was really sweet! He's a good father!! Update soon please and keep up the amazing work!! ^_^ P.S. I'm so glad that your brother is recovering!! Six months is a long time, but you rather have that, than him not being there at all!! I'll be thinking about you!!
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Reviewed By: Usagiseren05 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 16, 2007 13:37 EDT
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I'm glad to hear that u have at least some good news. Last year around this time of year my 15 year old brother was hit by a car. He flew almost 15ft in the air. Its the scariest thing to wonder about a family member. I hope he gets better. Great chap as always
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Reviewed By: Sesshomaru4Kagura4ever [MediaMiner Member] On: August 16, 2007 11:56 EDT
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Glad to hear that your brother should (eventually) be OK. Also, I loved that last thought with Gavin's youkai. is it just me, or do people's youkai go out of their way to be a pain in the ass?
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Reviewed By: Simonkal of Inuy [MediaMiner Member] On: August 16, 2007 09:11 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Loved it, I hope Gavvie doesn't get into any trouble for being there, but I'm so glad someone finally found out that Avis is dead. The father talk with Kich and Baby Belle was sweet, but I did miss the pooh bear, that I did. Keep up the great work, and I'll say a prayer for your brother well being. Thanks for thinking about us!!
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Reviewed By: jessie6491 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 09, 2007 20:01 EDT
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i'm glad you finally had Griffin confess his story to Isabelle. i was really interested in what happened to him. do you think you will plan on some way to get rid of his scars? also, my best wishes to your brother.
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Reviewed By: Dark Inu Fan [MediaMiner Member] On: August 06, 2007 19:38 EDT
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I really hope that your brother pulls through and is still able to move around (at least relatively) freely when he heals. I have a bad feeling with Gavin going to Australia by himself with no one knowing where he's going. With Griffin and Isabelle, it only takes once… Keep up the good work, dark
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Title: get well soon!
Reviewed By: Sunekai [MediaMiner Member] On: August 04, 2007 10:15 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ill be praying for u and ur fams. girl, get well soon and best of wishes to u when u update...=) lovin it so far...=3
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Reviewed By: Sesshomaru4Kagura4ever [MediaMiner Member] On: August 04, 2007 09:08 EDT
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OMG That is soooooo horrible! I mean, cutting people up like that! I can understand how upset Griffin/Kyoshi was. But was it Miroku and Sango's village that did that, or another village? Why weren't Miroku and Sango there? Oh, and best wishes for your brother. I hope he gets well soon. I was a bit worried that something must have happened, since you hadn't updated for ages. Well, Griffin's explained everything. They can wait- Your brother's more important. Get Well Soon!
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Reviewed By: Death-By-Minnow [MediaMiner Member] On: August 02, 2007 18:52 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Your writing continues to amaze me, I'll wait eagerly but patiently for your updates. That aside, I hope your brother makes a speedy, full recovery. I know it's not easy to deal with a family crisis such as that, but with any luck he'll be back to normal soon. Best of wishes.
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