| "Purity 7: Avouchment" Reviews/Comments [ 891 ] |
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Reviewed By: indigorrain [MediaMiner Member] On: November 30, 2006 09:46 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
When???? When will you reveal all the secrets??? Ok, I'm kidding. I love the suspense it makes the story even more interesting and has me coming back week after to week to check for a new chapter. I love the entire Purity series, and I can't help but wonder how many stories are left in it. I'll be sad when you reach the end.
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Reviewed By: OROsan0677 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 29, 2006 21:00 EST
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You know, that was the perfect setting for those two love birds to kiss, but nope, torture the readers and no kiss lol. Ah, gotta love it! :D Anyways, I better go read that teaser! I loved this chapter, although I wish Griffin would have said what he really wanted to say lol.
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Reviewed By: Simonkal of Inuy [MediaMiner Member] On: November 29, 2006 18:33 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really liked this chapter. Maybe it was the feelings being displayed or the manner in which Grif was fighting them but it was pretty damn good. Oh and I saw a 'witch' where there's suppose to be a 'which'. But then knowing you, you probably did that on purpose for some obscene reason. Anyway loved...absolutly loved this chapter, keep up the good work!!
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Reviewed By: Tarzan14 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 29, 2006 17:53 EST
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haha the girls of Purity definitely know how to trick their men into doing what the girls want...it's great! liked the chapter. I'm curious as to what Griffen cost her
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Reviewed By: Jester08 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 29, 2006 16:30 EST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great chapter. I think this story, in your purity series, is one of the best ones you've writen so far!! I love your other ones a lot, but with this one, I just want to keep reading it over and over. (and it only has 12 chapters so far!!) LOL So.....update soon please because I really can't wait for more!! Also, make sure to keep up the good work! ^__^
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Title: yeeesssss!
Reviewed By: smallflower [MediaMiner Member] On: November 29, 2006 13:09 EST
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Another InuYasha-Kagome pairing! Not the same characters, but these two have (roughly) the same relationship... at least starting out. :) Plus, you have no idea how happy I am that there's another chapter! I like to go back and re-read your other stories, but the new chapters are the best. :) Hope all is well with you. Safe Thanksgiving?
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Reviewed By: indigorrain [MediaMiner Member] On: November 27, 2006 18:22 EST
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Hi, I just want to say that I am a huge fan of your work and I am so glad that you continue. I can't wait to see the next chapter, keep 'em coming
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Reviewed By: kina12 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 26, 2006 15:44 EST
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I liked this chapter alot. Keep up the good work and i CANT wait when the story finally jumps off..Oooo this is getting good!
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Reviewed By: Zetsuii [MediaMiner Member] On: November 23, 2006 12:23 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG an update...its been awhile...please keep it up...oh boy is this going to be good
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Reviewed By: nish04 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 23, 2006 10:33 EST
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well, that's bound to be interesting, Gunnar running a background check on Griffin. Griffin's past really be THAT bad! i hope it isn't....he's probably just over reacting like Cain did. LOL, andYou gotta love Gunnar's protective side!:P Thnx for the update! ~nish
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Reviewed By: evloner On: November 23, 2006 06:02 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very good. I'm very glad you introduced gunner in this story. He has become one of my favorite characters. I can't wait to find out what this big secret that Griffin is holding. You have eluded to it but I want details. I'm just so impatient sometimes. I hope you update soon.
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Reviewed By: leeksandmisosoup [MediaMiner Member] On: November 22, 2006 23:40 EST
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Wonderful job! I'm so happy Gunnar came. ^^ Now I know why you never answered when I asked why Gunnar lives in N.A. instead of Japan. I'm sorry if I kinda nagged you... Anyways, thank you thank you thank you for releasing another of your famous Purity series! You're amazing, Sueric.
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Reviewed By: Tree-lynn [MediaMiner Member] On: November 22, 2006 12:34 EST
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okay, so i was going to use this review space to tell you just how awesome this story is and that i can't wait for you to please update soon...but apparently thats what everyone is doing. So instead i want to tell you to take your time, i know you have a good reason for not updating as much as you used to, and i know this one will be great when it's finished!! In the meantime, i will be spending my time re-reading chronicles, cause its one of my favorites! Happy writing :)
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Reviewed By: Jester08 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 21, 2006 16:58 EST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great chapter. I can't wait to find out about Griffin's past!! ^_^ Things should become a lot more interesting now that Gunnar knows about him. Can't wait for more, so update soon please!
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Reviewed By: silveraliora [MediaMiner Member] On: November 21, 2006 10:33 EST
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Great chapter! I was really glad to see that Gunnar was in this chapter(i love gunnar, he's one of my favorite characters in your storys). When he does a backround check on Griffin, will we get to find out more about him? I hope so. This secrecy is driving me crazy! lol! Please update soon!
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