| "Purity 7: Avouchment" Reviews/Comments [ 891 ] |
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Reviewed By: leeksandmisosoup [MediaMiner Member] On: October 16, 2006 22:48 EDT
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So we dig a little deeper into the past?... slightly... And I bet that Dr. Marin would be devastated if Isabelle ended up hating him ^^ You had a little spelling error when Brandon's mother came in and introduced herself. She says "her" instead of "here". Anyway, can't wait for the next one~! ~leeksandmisosoup~
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Reviewed By: Tarzan14 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 16, 2006 21:57 EDT
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I just love the whole girl teasing the shy guy thing. And is the dog gonna answer to both names haha that'd be hilarious
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Title: awesome!
Reviewed By: charity - nicole hawkins On: October 16, 2006 20:43 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
omg.. i love the cool, sweet, gruff, manly deameanor of "dr. g". is reminds me of the brawny man but with long hair and bangs... so cool.. i hope "dr. G" builds up enough confidence to tell isabelle how he got the scars. i really like this pairing... and so far.. i like dr. marin... well keep up the good work and have a good day..and remember..your a good writer ... and you have lots of people who love your stories.. ttyl, ~charity-Nicole
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Reviewed By: OROsan0677 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 16, 2006 19:15 EDT
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Hmm, so Griffin knew Cain's father; that's interesting! I'm still wondering what he did that was so bad; I'm pretty sure that Isabelle wouldn't hold that against him though, whatever it is.
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Reviewed By: Jester08 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 16, 2006 16:15 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great chapter. I love the interaction between the two of them. Update soon please.
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Title: Yay!
Reviewed By: ladida [MediaMiner Member] On: October 16, 2006 01:25 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Another purity, yay! I really like this one, especially the new chapter! I'm so excited to see how Dr. Marin's going to handle Isabelle living with him! such a wonderful plot, and wonderful writing especially in your character development of Griffin. His actions and movements are quite bearlike and it really adds to the story. Very very nice. I'm looking forward to the next chappie! :D
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Reviewed By: suericfan On: October 12, 2006 17:02 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
it's moi! totaly awesome... this whole thing is awesome.. you, dearest Sueric, are awesome. :hug: ~Mina
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Reviewed By: Jester08 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 12, 2006 14:24 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great chapter. I can't wait for more, so please update soon.
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Reviewed By: silveraliora [MediaMiner Member] On: October 12, 2006 10:59 EDT
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Great chapter! Please update soon!
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Title: ..... cool.....
Reviewed By: charity - nicole hawkins On: October 12, 2006 01:41 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i really enjoy reading your fanfics! i am a member and im suscribes to you as an author but i kinda forgot my password and my user name so.. i am not on now.. i haven't commented you in a while and i just thought it would be nice to say that you do good whne you give up your time to write to us your fans... no.. readers.. well this is a great chapter.. update soon !!! ~*~charity~*~ Font Color
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Reviewed By: leeksandmisosoup [MediaMiner Member] On: October 12, 2006 01:04 EDT
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Great! Now that Isabelle's moving in, Dr. Griffin will surely realize that they're meant to be... Ooooh! The cuteness overwhelms me! Great chappie and can NOT wait until the next one! ~leeksandmisosoup~
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Reviewed By: GalacticFire [MediaMiner Member] On: October 12, 2006 00:18 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
10! as always! Great chapter! I really like where this is going! I'm very curious about the scars... Hmmm.. I wonder what they're from.. Also, I have this unexplainable urge to ready Purity 4. I think it's my favorite! I
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Reviewed By: Zetsuii [MediaMiner Member] On: October 12, 2006 00:01 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
eeeppp...so good as usual...oh boy this is getting interesting...cant wait for the next installment
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Reviewed By: OROsan0677 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 11, 2006 23:02 EDT
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Oh, she'll be moving in now; I'm almost certain of it lol.
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Reviewed By: 1Inuyashafan [MediaMiner Member] On: October 09, 2006 17:03 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW this story great!!!^_^ i cant wait till the next update.
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