| "Purity 7: Avouchment" Reviews/Comments [ 891 ] |
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Reviewed By: kina12 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 02, 2006 18:28 EDT
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w00t another great capter! i love Cain/Gin moments! thier always the best! cant wait for the next chap!
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Reviewed By: kina12 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 02, 2006 17:19 EDT
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great as always! cant see what happens next! i just hope griffin lightens up, hes so mean to poor bitty belle!he reminds me of cain so much but alot more cold :( isablle really DOES have her work cut out for her! i know this is going to be a LONG continuation! lol
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Reviewed By: leeksandmisosoup [MediaMiner Member] On: September 25, 2006 19:40 EDT
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Yay! Another great chapter, Sue! I loved the fact that you put some "couple-love" in there! Cain and Gin are so adorable! Bas is so cute when he pours Sydnie's milk, and Jillian and Gavin are having their "alone" time! ^^ You didn't answer my question last time I reviewed, and I don't know if you're still answering questions, but why does Gunnar live in Maine when he is next in line to be Inu no Taishou? Anywho, great job; can't wait for next chappy! ~leeksandmisosoup~ P.S. I miss your Japan scenes
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Reviewed By: evloner On: September 23, 2006 21:17 EDT
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Another great chapter. I love how the romance is alive in well with cain and gin even after being married for so many years. May we all be so lucky.
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Reviewed By: silveraliora [MediaMiner Member] On: September 23, 2006 15:20 EDT
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I wonder where Dr. Avis is? I love the scene with Cain and Gin and Bas. Poor Bas. Anyway, great chapter! Please update soon!
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Reviewed By: Jester08 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 22, 2006 22:22 EDT
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You are a great writer. I absolutely love Sydney! Can't wait to see what will happen in the next chapter.
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Reviewed By: OROsan0677 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 22, 2006 17:20 EDT
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Hmm....where'd Dr. Avis go? We can only wonder. Haha, poor Bas, his parents are torturing him with sex lol.
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Reviewed By: Simonkal of Inu On: September 22, 2006 09:50 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Okay so I haven't come up with anything else faboulous to describe what your writings do to me, so I'll just say, "Gunnar!!" My goodness I love what you've done with him. And I love Cain and Gins relationship and Sydneys possessiveness! You are truely a talented soul!!
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Reviewed By: silveraliora [MediaMiner Member] On: September 21, 2006 09:14 EDT
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Great chapter! I wonder what could have happened to make Griffin want to die. I have a question, I know Isabelle has her dad's eyes but does she have silver hair or her mother's hair color? I don't know if you mentioned it before, so I decided just to ask anyway. Please update soon. I can't wait to read more!
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Title: Hmm..
Reviewed By: GalacticFire [MediaMiner Member] On: September 21, 2006 00:40 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very interesting.. I'm curious as to why Griffin wanted to die so badly. Great chapter! Can't wait for the new chapter!
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Reviewed By: Jester08 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 20, 2006 22:21 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You are a great writer. Can't wait to see why Griffin is the way he is! He's so mysterious! LOL
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Title: haha
Reviewed By: Suericfan On: September 20, 2006 20:29 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
awesome!!!! I
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Reviewed By: Simonkal of Inu On: September 20, 2006 19:22 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very nice as always. I have to get a dictionary or thesarous (sp) or something,becaus I'm running out of ways to praise you.
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Reviewed By: OROsan0677 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 20, 2006 18:08 EDT
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So, we get a little insight to Griffin's past. Poor guy, he's reminding me of Cain. I just wonder what happened that made him be angry at everything.
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Reviewed By: Piett600 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 20, 2006 17:59 EDT
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Ahhh, the backstory gets more and more tantalizing - but merely adds more questions. Griffin's seeming sense of self-loathing reminds me a bit of Cain's, but in a darker and more self-destructive way. He seems to have one of the most troubled backgrounds of any character in your Purityverse, though. Dr. Izayoi has her work cut out for her....
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