| "Let's get it on" Reviews/Comments [ 65 ] |
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Reviewed By: slowglass On: November 13, 2006 15:38 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I've really been enjoying this fic. I've been spamming my poor sister with my favorite lines from each section, and she doesn't even know the characters. She still thinks the conversations are funny, though. Thanks for posting. Looking forward to the next chapter!
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Reviewed By: Jesslin [MediaMiner Member] On: November 13, 2006 13:45 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Okay, I'm only finished with Chapter 3 and I'm already about to die from laughter. How I missed this story til today, I don't know, but it's a total keeper. Thank you, Keep it up, but on behalf of my keyboard I must say you're a terrible evil person. I can't even look at my coffee for fear of doing a spit take. I think I'm in love :)
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Reviewed By: Omni-sama [MediaMiner Member] On: November 13, 2006 10:44 CST
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I'm am very, very much enjoying this story! Like I think I said before, I love your Ken. Very amusing. His interactions with Yohji are fun and friendly and a joy to read. The tension you built up between Yohji and Aya is very hot, making the reader just as eager as Yohji is for the sex scene. I'm interested to see how things will go now between them after they've had sex.
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Reviewed By: shu no baka (not logged in) On: November 11, 2006 13:42 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
"damn the torpedoes, I'm in love." Oh I love that sentence! And the entire fic until now!!! and it keeps getting better! XD I luff ziss!!! XD
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Reviewed By: kispexi2 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 11, 2006 03:38 CST
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Yay! You update right on time as promised! I come to your writing with great expectations now - and you don't disappoint. Your dialogue is fantastic - sharp, funny and sounds like real speech. I love the intensity of feeling you convey with such a light, airy style. And the sex? Hot, hot, hot! Many thanks for sharing. kispexi2/Cath
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Reviewed By: wedjateye [MediaMiner Member] On: November 11, 2006 01:44 CST
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I'm so glad you updated! I love your conflicted, contrary Aya. Ken had more great lines ('the road to love is paved with toads' made me laugh). Yohji finally getting laid was wonderful. (And I love your solution to Omi - just omit him!)
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Reviewed By: Miss Macabre nsi On: November 10, 2006 23:08 CST
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Whoa! Nice smmmmmmmmmmmmmexxx. Finger lickin' good! More...please *pouts dramatically*
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Reviewed By: wedjateye On: November 04, 2006 02:27 CST
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Everything you've written is highly entertaining. I loved the 'baseball mitt festooned with knives'. The dialogue is scintillating. Yohji scraping admissions of liking and jealousy from a perverse Aya is wonderful to see. So much to love in this series.
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Title: sam i am
Reviewed By: moimoi-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: October 21, 2006 17:05 CDT
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lol, this just gets better and better...poor yohji
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Reviewed By: RaceUlfson NSI On: October 12, 2006 21:41 CDT
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I love this. I read most of it aloud to Acid Rain. I adore your Ken and his vicious sense of humor. And Aya and his sly sense of humor. Poor messed up baby. I think Yohji is perfect : sarcastic and trying to be pragmatic and romantic at the same time. You absolutely defined Aya and his angst in the line about liking him as he was being horrifying. Brilliant.
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Reviewed By: gretel_chan [MediaMiner Member] On: October 11, 2006 20:56 CDT
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I'm really enjoying this story. Your storytelling through dialogue is fantastic - It's something I struggle with, and it's refreshing to see it done well.
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Reviewed By: LilyMoonsAlias [MediaMiner Member] On: October 10, 2006 14:56 CDT
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"Milkbone moment", "Full scrotal contact", "gluey tart". God, I love you. I laughed so hard I was gasping. More! I need more!
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Reviewed By: RedQueen [MediaMiner Member] On: October 10, 2006 04:34 CDT
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oh yeah. 'give it up...let's fuck already.' real good come-on to use with a crazy, homicidal swordsman. i can see why yohji's so successful with the womenfolk. while they're gaping with incredulity, he divests them of their clothes. heehee! aya beats ken for the best lines in this chapter. i love that he knows the manliest tartans. though, i do love it that ken's wearing a tartan nightshirt in the first place. hell, this whole story is love.
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Reviewed By: Serena1985 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 09, 2006 02:36 CDT
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Damn he got 'Knocked the fuck out"! So is that Aya's way of saying ok lol. can't wait to read more and see if Yoji can tame the crazy red-head. Update soon pretty please!
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Reviewed By: belgianrabbit On: October 04, 2006 20:59 CDT
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That was supposed to be "great," not "gat," in that last review.
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