| "Let's get it on" Reviews/Comments [ 65 ] |
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Reviewed By: StarTrekObsessed [MediaMiner Member] On: January 19, 2007 19:51 CST
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Noooo.... not the end!!!! It was lovely while it lasted. :P Hehe, Aya and Omi... I just wrote a fic myself with one of those horrible dream-sequence AyaxOmi things. Not that the pairing is horrible. Whatever. I love you anyway. :)
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Reviewed By: Omni-sama [MediaMiner Member] On: January 18, 2007 13:06 CST
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Oh god. Oh. Oh god. This was an incredibly fun read. Loved the um *twist* to Yohji's dream. Beautiful. Rather sad to see this end, though. Will there be a follow-up arc? Where we get to see if Aya and Yohji ever really become a couple? Hmmmm?... *wink wink, hint hint*
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Reviewed By: kispexi2 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 18, 2007 04:43 CST
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Argh!The End?No, say it ain't so!This was your usual wonderful mix of humour and tension.Yoji's idiocy was so funny, but sweet at the same time.Aya's wet hug heart-warming and tactile.I like the unlaboured details too - the stuff about the ibuprofen.And laughed out loud at not looking like a credible with threat with a dangling and freshly squeezed dick. Great stuff.Hope to read lots more from you.
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Reviewed By: StarTrekObsessed [MediaMiner Member] On: January 14, 2007 19:46 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I looooove this fic! I pledge my undying allegiance to your and its brilliance. I can't even describe how I feel about it... For starters, I usually can't stand Ken. I find him annoying and boring. Usually. But in this fic he is the funniest guy in the universe and I can't wait from one chapter to the next just to hear his one-liners. Aya is a total scream. His ability to be horrendously ironic and hilarious in the middle of real and proper angst never ceases to delight. Yohji is almost funnier, what with his self-destructive capabilities and laughing-tears/pee-your-pants inducing introspective conversations with himself. I love the interaction with Yohji and Aya, how it's all very random and unmeditated, but cohesive and understandable at the same time. I like that saying things like 'I love you' doesn't mean a big production beforehand, as it does in most fics. He just out and says it, with no hint it's about to happen. And that's how everything else in this fic happens, and it's completely priceless. 'WWAD' was HILARIOUS. When I started reading an hour ago, I was my normal dour self. And right now I feel a deep sense of irony and amusement toward the world in general, which is quite a feat, and quite enjoyable. Thank you. :) Oh, and I love your vocabulary. I have great respect and appreciation for those with a large and utilizable vocab. Heh. And pleeeeeease update soon! I can't bear the wait!
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Reviewed By: RS On: January 13, 2007 01:26 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh no oh no oh no...*tell* me this isn't the end of this wonderful, cracked little story !!! Please, please...Need more snappy dialogue, yours is the all-time bestest !
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Reviewed By: Serena1985 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 08, 2007 12:03 CST
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Lol WWAD is fuckin' hillarious. The way you write Yoji is funny and works. I can't wait for you to update!
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Reviewed By: kispexi2 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 08, 2007 05:12 CST
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The way you write Yohji is so vivid, I can both see and understand him. I love how childish he is in this, how full of hero-worship.As for the situation - giddyfying in the extreme!And I have to admire the metaphor of the balancing act.Yohji thinking Aya didn't have as much fun as him playing WWAD made me smile.And I loved the word choice in 'extravagantly angry'.Much applause.As usual.Also much envy.
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Reviewed By: wedjateye [MediaMiner Member] On: January 07, 2007 22:48 CST
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Oh, when you get emotional and deviate from the plan, it's a stroke of genius, but when I do it, I should have stayed in the truck. Wonderful dialogue, as always. I want to keep your Yohji forever. WWAD is hilarious. I'll be so sad when this story ends.
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Reviewed By: moimoi-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: January 07, 2007 21:46 CST
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"Aya had chosen to provide directions while hanging upside down by his knees off a catwalk about 30 feet in the air. Yoji nodded to himself. Yup; clearly he had a long way to go before he'd be able to play WWAD with real flair"... lol Aya's a real case...I gotta love my Yotan's thoughts
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Reviewed By: vom marlowe On: January 07, 2007 15:41 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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I am enjoying this story so much! Your dialog is killer, and your Aya is so sexy. I love your Yoji voice. So happy to see another chapter of this. I laughed out loud this chapter--wwad is just brilliant.
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Reviewed By: MikaSamu [MediaMiner Member] On: January 07, 2007 15:34 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Aya and Yohji in a tense, dangerous situation, and you have me laughing my head off. I'm glad I found it again. What a wonderful game is WWAD, although Yohji's selection of time and place to discuss their relationship merits a wild and dangerous form of WWYD. Terrific update!
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Reviewed By: moimoi-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: January 01, 2007 19:57 CST
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a little behind in my reviewing...but i love, love, love
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Reviewed By: wedjateye [MediaMiner Member] On: January 01, 2007 04:36 CST
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Damn, damn, damn! I got all excited thinking there was an update. This does, however, give me the chance to say how much I liked the Shakespeare quotes, Aya's updated work profile and his extra-crunchy ennui. Too many good bits for me to have any hope of recalling them all when I hit the review page.
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Reviewed By: mockorange7 On: December 30, 2006 22:47 CST
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Hi, I just found this--I read another shorter piece by you and thought I'd try another of your stories--and I really, really am enjoying this. It's funny, and yet, there's something very in-character about the boys, especially Aya--he manages to be sweet and yet completely off-putting and fucked up and I love it all. Hope to see the next chapter soon!
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Reviewed By: Serena1985 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 29, 2006 07:03 CST
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Damn Aya has more problems than well hell anyone I know and that's including me. Lol anywho can't wait for the update!
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